for Fate2/16/2006 c5 
4Ksasera Aditi
Im sorry hun but this chapter was a little confusing. Are Harry and Hermoine together? Do they have kids? Who are they talking to in the alley? Anyway, Other than those tiny little mistakes, I am enjoying this story, I also loved The Dare. Keep the good work up. :D
4Ksasera AditiIm sorry hun but this chapter was a little confusing. Are Harry and Hermoine together? Do they have kids? Who are they talking to in the alley? Anyway, Other than those tiny little mistakes, I am enjoying this story, I also loved The Dare. Keep the good work up. :D
2/8/2006 c2 7LillianLockhart
Fantabulous. ^_^
Although it was short and had a few more grammatical errors than the prelude, it was still well written and very interesting. I like your work.
-Candy
7LillianLockhartFantabulous. ^_^
Although it was short and had a few more grammatical errors than the prelude, it was still well written and very interesting. I like your work.
-Candy
2/8/2006 c1 LillianLockhart
Nice prelude! So they eloped, eh? Interesting. There were only a few grammatical errors here and there, but only enough for a grammar nazi to notice/care about (Hehe). Well done.
-Candy
Nice prelude! So they eloped, eh? Interesting. There were only a few grammatical errors here and there, but only enough for a grammar nazi to notice/care about (Hehe). Well done.
-Candy
2/8/2006 c8 13peridotdream
heya,
I liked this chapter! it was cute. Why are their names Granger, though, instead of Potter? just curious. Can't wait to see what you do with the Weasley clan! :) good luck
`bela
13peridotdreamheya,
I liked this chapter! it was cute. Why are their names Granger, though, instead of Potter? just curious. Can't wait to see what you do with the Weasley clan! :) good luck
`bela
1/23/2006 c7 2GinnyGINvampire00 aka Evon
I really like this story so far. I can't wait to see how it comes along. It's really really interesting.
By the way, at the begining of your story I thought it had said 10 years... but the rest of the time it's said 12... I dont know if I got it wrong or not.
Anyway, can't wait for an update.
Thanks for writing
-me.
2GinnyGINvampire00 aka EvonI really like this story so far. I can't wait to see how it comes along. It's really really interesting.
By the way, at the begining of your story I thought it had said 10 years... but the rest of the time it's said 12... I dont know if I got it wrong or not.
Anyway, can't wait for an update.
Thanks for writing
-me.
1/7/2006 c7 10StarrCat
So Harry still loves Ginny in a way and will admit that to Hermione but he has Hermione's children? Can't wait for the next chapter though, maybe it'll make meh less confused :)
10StarrCatSo Harry still loves Ginny in a way and will admit that to Hermione but he has Hermione's children? Can't wait for the next chapter though, maybe it'll make meh less confused :)
1/7/2006 c1 The Lady of the Four Leafed Clover
This is really excellent, and you have the feel of a great, well-written piece in here. However, there were, I believe, a few errors such as "besides Harry" which ought to be "beside Harry" and "waterproof" which I think ought be "foolproof." Nice prelude ;)
This is really excellent, and you have the feel of a great, well-written piece in here. However, there were, I believe, a few errors such as "besides Harry" which ought to be "beside Harry" and "waterproof" which I think ought be "foolproof." Nice prelude ;)