11/5/2005 c1 14Alexandria J. Malfoy
aw that was lvoely well done. i really liked it! congrats

11/4/2005 c2 1enchantedlight
great chapter! update soon!

11/3/2005 c1 4shadieladie
Well it's ok it needs a little substance, because it's missing something maybe a flash back in there own words I don't know but it's lacking something I like the concept though