
1/17/2007 c7
10CrisscrossAnime
Yugi! Is the the apprentice him? Your story is Great! Hope you update soon!

Yugi! Is the the apprentice him? Your story is Great! Hope you update soon!
1/8/2007 c7
5hittocerebattosai
"You think I'm laying Blaize?" *snickers* I think the word you were looking for was "lieing", dearie. *lauhgs* That's almost as bad as saying "I hope to be seeing behind me more." after forgetting "you" when between "seeing" and "behind".
*snickers and grins* funny error. Ii... *pokes story* Interesting... Could stand to have the earlier chapters reworked a little. They are a tad short and I can tell you've gotten a bit better since you wrote them. Less errors. You're getting good. ^^

"You think I'm laying Blaize?" *snickers* I think the word you were looking for was "lieing", dearie. *lauhgs* That's almost as bad as saying "I hope to be seeing behind me more." after forgetting "you" when between "seeing" and "behind".
*snickers and grins* funny error. Ii... *pokes story* Interesting... Could stand to have the earlier chapters reworked a little. They are a tad short and I can tell you've gotten a bit better since you wrote them. Less errors. You're getting good. ^^
1/7/2007 c7 Annuket
Sorry for writing so late... I was busy again... Thanky for your reply. I knew it. ... 'dreamy sigh' Yugi is loved/liked by all... but his/her heart belongs to Yami/Harry alone... I can't wait for the next chapter...
Annuket
Sorry for writing so late... I was busy again... Thanky for your reply. I knew it. ... 'dreamy sigh' Yugi is loved/liked by all... but his/her heart belongs to Yami/Harry alone... I can't wait for the next chapter...
Annuket
1/2/2007 c7
1BratCat
an apprentice? ano...mai? or...yugi? oh! cant wait to find out! n ginny goin out wif mokuba! i totally forgot bout him! *smack head against wall*
keep it up!

an apprentice? ano...mai? or...yugi? oh! cant wait to find out! n ginny goin out wif mokuba! i totally forgot bout him! *smack head against wall*
keep it up!
12/13/2006 c6 Saturnblue
Wow, finally someone actually wrote a story with Yugioh as the crossover with Harry potter and made Harry as one of the main characters too. Please continue finish until the end. It's pretty interesting and full of puzzling news with mystery. It's not too revealing the storyline is quite detailed.
Wow, finally someone actually wrote a story with Yugioh as the crossover with Harry potter and made Harry as one of the main characters too. Please continue finish until the end. It's pretty interesting and full of puzzling news with mystery. It's not too revealing the storyline is quite detailed.
11/10/2006 c6
82maluv
So whos the person eh?... Seto, Malfoy or even Bakura?... VERY unque twist on a HPYGO crossover... Love it. Update soon please! XD
Ja ne,
Faith ^_^

So whos the person eh?... Seto, Malfoy or even Bakura?... VERY unque twist on a HPYGO crossover... Love it. Update soon please! XD
Ja ne,
Faith ^_^
10/22/2006 c6
2yaoiuke101
please update and why not have yugi a student at school and please tell me ginny and harry were going out inthe previous year?

please update and why not have yugi a student at school and please tell me ginny and harry were going out inthe previous year?
10/15/2006 c6 Annuket
After reading it again I can only say I like the second version even more. But the cliffhanger is so mean... Hope you have time to continue this story and nightwanderers, too. Keep up your great work.
Annuket
After reading it again I can only say I like the second version even more. But the cliffhanger is so mean... Hope you have time to continue this story and nightwanderers, too. Keep up your great work.
Annuket