
7/16/2007 c1 Justareader
hah
hah
7/28/2006 c1
31Girl of Light Writer
It's short story but it has some meaning, you might want to expand it with more explanations and such.

It's short story but it has some meaning, you might want to expand it with more explanations and such.
7/22/2006 c1
2Akiko-of-sand
i think you should add more to that like a sequal were Kakashi and Naruto come and see them... you know^^ i relaly like your fic there really good, keep it upz^^

i think you should add more to that like a sequal were Kakashi and Naruto come and see them... you know^^ i relaly like your fic there really good, keep it upz^^
12/29/2005 c1 Shikukana
I...am...speechless...-_-''...^_~
I...am...speechless...-_-''...^_~
12/28/2005 c1
6sWeeTcoUpLes
short but interesting... and it's great story... kip up d gud works... hope u can R&R my fics.. :D

short but interesting... and it's great story... kip up d gud works... hope u can R&R my fics.. :D