for Father Daughter Bonding12/31/2006 c4 PandylBas
*jumps up and down* What did he notice, what did he notice?
For the record, she should have grabbed a chair and smashed it over his head!
*jumps up and down* What did he notice, what did he notice?
For the record, she should have grabbed a chair and smashed it over his head!
5/2/2006 c1 arctic fox
that was a total copy of alexwacrap's work. if you didn't get permission from er then you should be ashamed. also it didn't potray her characters well. but if you liked diamonds and pearls then you saw "diamonds and pearls 2; the keys to the first circle", right? if not, read it. it's incredible.
that was a total copy of alexwacrap's work. if you didn't get permission from er then you should be ashamed. also it didn't potray her characters well. but if you liked diamonds and pearls then you saw "diamonds and pearls 2; the keys to the first circle", right? if not, read it. it's incredible.
11/16/2005 c4 
1orphanacct2022
Okay! Pretty good! But I would love it so much more if you would PLEASE tell people about the original story and the original author (me). My friends keep asking if I stole it from you! But..I just...tell them to look at the published dates...excuse me, I have to go to a funeral now...
1orphanacct2022Okay! Pretty good! But I would love it so much more if you would PLEASE tell people about the original story and the original author (me). My friends keep asking if I stole it from you! But..I just...tell them to look at the published dates...excuse me, I have to go to a funeral now...
11/15/2005 c1 39-Bad-Wolf-10
HEY EVERYONE THANKS FOR THE REVIEWS. I JUST WANTED YOU GUYS ALL TO KNOW THAT I CHANGED A LITTLE BIT OF THE STORY IN CHAPTER 4
39-Bad-Wolf-10HEY EVERYONE THANKS FOR THE REVIEWS. I JUST WANTED YOU GUYS ALL TO KNOW THAT I CHANGED A LITTLE BIT OF THE STORY IN CHAPTER 4
11/14/2005 c4 stickbug
pretty good. there are a few things i would've done differently but we'll talk about that next time i see ya. =) by the way, you're not allowed to be sick, i decided!
love love love love love,
stickbug
pretty good. there are a few things i would've done differently but we'll talk about that next time i see ya. =) by the way, you're not allowed to be sick, i decided!
love love love love love,
stickbug
11/14/2005 c4 8Corvis Greenleaf
Aw, snap! What did he notice? You and these cliffies? Well then, can't wait for the update! Argh.
8Corvis GreenleafAw, snap! What did he notice? You and these cliffies? Well then, can't wait for the update! Argh.
11/13/2005 c3 stickbug
pretty good, pretty good. uhh...yeah. dunno what else to say. LOVE YOU BUDDY!
ta,
love love love love love,
stickbug
pretty good, pretty good. uhh...yeah. dunno what else to say. LOVE YOU BUDDY!
ta,
love love love love love,
stickbug
11/12/2005 c2 A
Hmm wonder who's at the door...update soon!
Hmm wonder who's at the door...update soon!
11/11/2005 c2 1orphanacct2022
Okay, I just realised a sentence in my other review didn't make any sense, hopefully you understood it anyway, sometimes I write things and they come out in Russian...again, no sense. Okay, bringing in sarcasm is always a good thing, careful not to overdo it though, Amy did that and her story was depressing...Eek! Thank God yours isn't like that coz her's was just...bad...it's wasn't on Fanfiction, just so you know...and watch the spelling...Okay, I'm getting annoying now, just tell me when to stop...
1orphanacct2022Okay, I just realised a sentence in my other review didn't make any sense, hopefully you understood it anyway, sometimes I write things and they come out in Russian...again, no sense. Okay, bringing in sarcasm is always a good thing, careful not to overdo it though, Amy did that and her story was depressing...Eek! Thank God yours isn't like that coz her's was just...bad...it's wasn't on Fanfiction, just so you know...and watch the spelling...Okay, I'm getting annoying now, just tell me when to stop...
11/11/2005 c1 orphanacct2022
Well, it's certainly very different, I can see making a plot coming on, and remember, if you're not sure about something (and don't take this as any kind of offense) I'd be happy to edit or help in any way...considering I kinda, maybe, sorta own Tara anyway...
Well, it's certainly very different, I can see making a plot coming on, and remember, if you're not sure about something (and don't take this as any kind of offense) I'd be happy to edit or help in any way...considering I kinda, maybe, sorta own Tara anyway...