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5/1/2006 c1 Miss-Aoi
April's POV seemed very true to character, with the right kind of darkness added for this fic. Her description of herself was good, too, in the sense that it essentially is what anyone sees of her; it's almost like they don't think anything else could be under the surface. The line about Christopher being 'drunk off his sobriety' was a good one, too.
11/23/2005 c1 20AishiExcel
That was.. excellent! I mean, it did have a subtle humor under it, but it is mainly dark. I suppose we all knew it was inevitable, that they'd lose it someday...

Write more atories! I like your style!
11/13/2005 c1 232Kay the Cricketed
*makes incoherent fangirl noises* Oh... oh wow. Seriously, this was brilliant. I love it. The writing fits in so well, your style is simply fantastic for this piece.

It helps that, oh my gosh, JALIL. Jalil's episode was just brilliant. Unique, well thought out, all these sad little happenings are very well characterized and interesting. Great, great job. Thank you so much!

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