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11/16/2005 c1 2xxshikoraxx
11/16/2005 c1 2Animegirlfan
AWESOME I LOVE IT! I CANT WAIT TO read THE REST! plz update soon! i love it, love it! i loved the fisrt chapter full of action!

update soon!
11/16/2005 c1 4sweetnadeshiko
it was ok but you need to change the way you interpret the dialogue. for example when you write(or type) kakashi:(whatever he might say)or anyone else don't do doesnt look as professional as it should. and thats not exactly what i wanted to say(or much less help you out). but please cont. it i would like to know how it ends.
11/16/2005 c1
Not bad though there were some errors in it... some of the phrases didn't make sence.. re-read your work before submitting it. but i want to know what happens! Update soon!
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