for Problems4/12/2013 c3 Tracie
Omg ur awesome! Plz can u write more!
Omg ur awesome! Plz can u write more!
7/1/2011 c4 
33TypesOfCrazy
I'm confused, was he talking out loud when he said all that? That was a huge and major brain breakdown on that one
33TypesOfCrazyI'm confused, was he talking out loud when he said all that? That was a huge and major brain breakdown on that one
5/1/2009 c16 4LunaxXmoongoddessXx
it's actually an interesting story, although each chapter's are small, and as for the lemon, it helps if you take out the parenthesis unless it refers to the story. but still it was good. By the way, are you going to add more chapters and update or are you going to end it now?
4LunaxXmoongoddessXxit's actually an interesting story, although each chapter's are small, and as for the lemon, it helps if you take out the parenthesis unless it refers to the story. but still it was good. By the way, are you going to add more chapters and update or are you going to end it now?
2/27/2008 c16 150Poisoned Scarlet
for your first lemon it was good^^ with more practice youll get better though XD dont worry! I hvent even written a lemon...yet. lol update!
Panda-chan
150Poisoned Scarletfor your first lemon it was good^^ with more practice youll get better though XD dont worry! I hvent even written a lemon...yet. lol update!
Panda-chan
12/3/2007 c16 Monica
OMG! why would you describe tenten/neji sex but not sasu/saku ! urg! ( lmfao) but its ok ! anyways... you shold REALLY make ur chappies longer ! ^^
OMG! why would you describe tenten/neji sex but not sasu/saku ! urg! ( lmfao) but its ok ! anyways... you shold REALLY make ur chappies longer ! ^^
11/21/2006 c16 Death's Kiss
Lemon god! Oh, no! Kakashi's rubbing off on me! WHY!
Seriously that was TOO GOOD.
Lemon god! Oh, no! Kakashi's rubbing off on me! WHY!
Seriously that was TOO GOOD.
11/14/2006 c16 3C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
In Shika's case, it MUST b the cigarettes he's been smoking. (HE SMOKES! Read the latest Naruto!)
3C.A.M.E.O.1 and OnlyIn Shika's case, it MUST b the cigarettes he's been smoking. (HE SMOKES! Read the latest Naruto!)
11/13/2006 c16 maniackiller12
oO
i forgot this was a rated M... oh my GOD..
my poor innocent mind! and now i ask myself.. WHY THE FUCK AM I READING THIS?
as for your qtion.. yeah.. we can say the lemon is good.. oO
im much more used to rated M yaoi.. *sigh*
oO
i forgot this was a rated M... oh my GOD..
my poor innocent mind! and now i ask myself.. WHY THE FUCK AM I READING THIS?
as for your qtion.. yeah.. we can say the lemon is good.. oO
im much more used to rated M yaoi.. *sigh*
9/23/2006 c15 Jun
What. The. Fuck.
What. The. Fuck.