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5/10/2007 c1 3Impish God
Uh... So Takeshi's sleeping at Daisuke's house? You know, 105 words that isn't impressionist is far to short. I want to see what you can write- just dialogue is rather... To talky. I can't tell what they are doing very well.
12/27/2006 c1 38Sweetums128neo
Lol, that's cute. X3
9/7/2006 c1 1penKittyChan
dude...this could totally be funnier if you made it longer...like one time, I was camping with my friend, and, for like, an hour, she kept going on and on in her sleep about how she was making out with a piegon...it was hilarious. you should have takeshi be more violent. like, he's dreaming, and he grabs daisuke in a headlock and yells, "WHAT DID YOU DO WITH THE ROCKS?" you know? but i lurve ur idea!
1/30/2006 c1 447Sarah1281
Awesome.
11/27/2005 c1 Reject From The Back Of The Bus
Heh heh heh.

Cute.
11/24/2005 c1 3Nahtxias Dragonfly2k2
Heh, amusing.

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