3/20/2008 c18 2dracosangel337
hey i actually like this story! ur not one of the 1st authors 2 quit their stories -.- plz don't give up i hav read 5 fanfics 2day and 3 of them were stopped plz keep going
hey i actually like this story! ur not one of the 1st authors 2 quit their stories -.- plz don't give up i hav read 5 fanfics 2day and 3 of them were stopped plz keep going
3/21/2007 c4 1crazed-editor
ya know, your clarifiers help, but if you are that worried about the readers not understanding, then you should try to clarify in the story, not on the sidelines.
ya know, your clarifiers help, but if you are that worried about the readers not understanding, then you should try to clarify in the story, not on the sidelines.
3/21/2007 c1 crazed-editor
I have one question. How in heaven's name did you come up with Marla? That is my mother's name, and it is very unusual. Why did you put it in your story?
I have one question. How in heaven's name did you come up with Marla? That is my mother's name, and it is very unusual. Why did you put it in your story?
12/20/2006 c16 8Ark Angel H F B
Good chapter! I've haven't read in a while but man have i missed this fic.
Good job and God bless and keep writting, now on to the next chapter. ^_^
Good chapter! I've haven't read in a while but man have i missed this fic.
Good job and God bless and keep writting, now on to the next chapter. ^_^
8/24/2006 c15 Ark Angel H F B
Yo hows it going?
anyway I loving where the story is going, oh and ed being preteen still crack'in me up. ^^
Oh well on to the next chapter!
God Bless:
Max
Yo hows it going?
anyway I loving where the story is going, oh and ed being preteen still crack'in me up. ^^
Oh well on to the next chapter!
God Bless:
Max
8/24/2006 c14 Ark Angel H F B
Yo, long time no read friend, Sorry I've been having some problems with my internet, but now I'm back and I got to say I'm pleasantly supiried at how well you writting has become. ^_^
oh and I really am sorry about not R&R'ing for so long. ^^
Oh and I have some new chapters up for Relations and Mistakes Can Hurt, hope you'll R&R them soon.
God bless:
Your friend max
Yo, long time no read friend, Sorry I've been having some problems with my internet, but now I'm back and I got to say I'm pleasantly supiried at how well you writting has become. ^_^
oh and I really am sorry about not R&R'ing for so long. ^^
Oh and I have some new chapters up for Relations and Mistakes Can Hurt, hope you'll R&R them soon.
God bless:
Your friend max
8/18/2006 c18 Guest
NO! Don't quit your story!
:sobs:
NO! Don't quit your story!
:sobs:
7/24/2006 c17 Baka Tora-chan
Yey, another chapter!
A very good one, too.
Will Marla and Anna meet in the next chapter?
Please update soon.
Yey, another chapter!
A very good one, too.
Will Marla and Anna meet in the next chapter?
Please update soon.
6/14/2006 c16 Baka Tora-chan
First off, thanks for the cookie...
O.k. I really loved when Belle fights with Ed.
And I want it to be a Envy/ Sloth, Marla/ Al, Whinry/ Ed to be couples.
Who will love Terri?
And when Marla kissed Al.
...I hope you know what I'm thinking right now.
If not call me.
DO NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
First off, thanks for the cookie...
O.k. I really loved when Belle fights with Ed.
And I want it to be a Envy/ Sloth, Marla/ Al, Whinry/ Ed to be couples.
Who will love Terri?
And when Marla kissed Al.
...I hope you know what I'm thinking right now.
If not call me.
DO NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
6/14/2006 c15 Baka Tora-chan
I love the fights between Envy and Sloth.
Hahaha
I hope you put more fights soon.
I love the fights between Envy and Sloth.
Hahaha
I hope you put more fights soon.
6/5/2006 c14 Baka Tora-chan
YEY!
Another chapter!
...I don't know what to write next...
Do another chapter soon,
LITTLE sister.
^-^
don't kill me...
YEY!
Another chapter!
...I don't know what to write next...
Do another chapter soon,
LITTLE sister.
^-^
don't kill me...
5/28/2006 c13 8Ark Angel H F B
Good chapter, the ass kicking at the start I might use is gogin to help me write one of my own... why do I keep writting Haydin into a ass kicking?
Haydin: "Yes, why do you?" *rubs shoulder*
Ark: "Yea... but it is fun... well for everyone but you. ^_^"
Haydin: "Baka!" *walks away"
Ark: Hope you like the fic.
Good chapter, the ass kicking at the start I might use is gogin to help me write one of my own... why do I keep writting Haydin into a ass kicking?
Haydin: "Yes, why do you?" *rubs shoulder*
Ark: "Yea... but it is fun... well for everyone but you. ^_^"
Haydin: "Baka!" *walks away"
Ark: Hope you like the fic.
5/27/2006 c13 Baka Tora-chan
A new chapter! ^-^
Why is Anne named Sloth?
Did Ed kill his 'mom' already,
or are there two sloths?
...o.k DO A NEW CHAPTER SOON!
A new chapter! ^-^
Why is Anne named Sloth?
Did Ed kill his 'mom' already,
or are there two sloths?
...o.k DO A NEW CHAPTER SOON!