for Two Can Play6/14/2009 c2 
1Shatter Wolf's Soul
Alright, here's what I'm thinking of this story. The plot line sucks, as it has been WAY over-used; DM & HG are heads and like to screw one another. That has been done so many times that a person gets sick of it. HOWEVER: I really like your style, and you have a lot of talent, seriously. With a more original idea, this would have been an amazing story.
Which bring me to my second point; this really isn't what I would consider to be an M story - I would say it is a T. If you want to make it an M story, I would go all out with it, or at least provide some M-worthy details.
Overall, not a bad story, and I liked it, although I would never add it to my favourites list as it stands now. With some more work and a few more details, you could have a really amazing story on your hands. Best wishes,
Bridget
1Shatter Wolf's SoulAlright, here's what I'm thinking of this story. The plot line sucks, as it has been WAY over-used; DM & HG are heads and like to screw one another. That has been done so many times that a person gets sick of it. HOWEVER: I really like your style, and you have a lot of talent, seriously. With a more original idea, this would have been an amazing story.
Which bring me to my second point; this really isn't what I would consider to be an M story - I would say it is a T. If you want to make it an M story, I would go all out with it, or at least provide some M-worthy details.
Overall, not a bad story, and I liked it, although I would never add it to my favourites list as it stands now. With some more work and a few more details, you could have a really amazing story on your hands. Best wishes,
Bridget
6/14/2008 c2 1gitgit
ahahhahaha oh my that was awesome
lol i liked hwo you had both points of view i really enjoyed reading the fanfic :D
1gitgitahahhahaha oh my that was awesome
lol i liked hwo you had both points of view i really enjoyed reading the fanfic :D
6/14/2008 c1 gitgit
oh man i loved the ending bit where he zero ins on her and then states that it was going to be a long night
excellent chapter from his point of view
i loved how he trys making her jealous and then at the end they both make each other jealous lol
that was awesome
oh man i loved the ending bit where he zero ins on her and then states that it was going to be a long night
excellent chapter from his point of view
i loved how he trys making her jealous and then at the end they both make each other jealous lol
that was awesome
11/27/2005 c1 deactivatedcompletely123
Hey,
Very nice little one-shot. Hehehe So cute and I love how you've shown Pansy with actual brains instead of an idiotic bimbo obsessed with Draco. Brilliant!
Missi:)
Hey,
Very nice little one-shot. Hehehe So cute and I love how you've shown Pansy with actual brains instead of an idiotic bimbo obsessed with Draco. Brilliant!
Missi:)
11/24/2005 c2 Apathetic Empath2
Awesome. Totally, totally awesome.
I loved your writing, and the situation was really good too. Good work.
A.E.
Awesome. Totally, totally awesome.
I loved your writing, and the situation was really good too. Good work.
A.E.
11/24/2005 c2 angel-1844
This is a funny story. I like it. Its original in a way, Yur an awesome writer.^_^
This is a funny story. I like it. Its original in a way, Yur an awesome writer.^_^
11/23/2005 c1 24BestSkeptic
One of the better fics I've read. A few grammar mistakes, but overall satisfying for your average Hermione-Draco freak. Hot.
24BestSkepticOne of the better fics I've read. A few grammar mistakes, but overall satisfying for your average Hermione-Draco freak. Hot.
11/22/2005 c1 mistyeyes129
its hot,its wild, and danmit its sexy and i love it please continue writing your're so good
its hot,its wild, and danmit its sexy and i love it please continue writing your're so good