for It's not my fault!2/25/2009 c6 
6chocolablvr
that was really good! i hope everything works out for regulus and sirius
and i really love ur username
update soon please!
6chocolablvrthat was really good! i hope everything works out for regulus and sirius
and i really love ur username
update soon please!
12/17/2007 c6 alyssaaa
oh god i just cant wait to see the rest! You cant leave me like that its not fair! ^^ anyway good story!
oh god i just cant wait to see the rest! You cant leave me like that its not fair! ^^ anyway good story!
8/11/2007 c6 10BiG Finish
hey jasmine
are you going to update this?
looking forward to your new storied that are in progress!
kate
10BiG Finishhey jasmine
are you going to update this?
looking forward to your new storied that are in progress!
kate
4/15/2006 c6 HP4EVERRRR
oh. i like this story a whole lot. i love it. it freakin rocks. yay! update real soon. please.
oh. i like this story a whole lot. i love it. it freakin rocks. yay! update real soon. please.
2/25/2006 c5 39MornieGalad
You could try doing a section on Sirius' father's failing search for his son. Just a suggestion.
Please don't have Sirius & Jenny's older sister fall in love.
*MornieGalad*
39MornieGaladYou could try doing a section on Sirius' father's failing search for his son. Just a suggestion.
Please don't have Sirius & Jenny's older sister fall in love.
*MornieGalad*
2/25/2006 c4 MornieGalad
Quite a few typos in this chapter and double discriptive words such as "said screamed" when it should be one of the two or "said, screaming". Other than that, good chapter.
*MornieGalad*
P.S. I like Jenny, she seems like a pretty good character, but you might be able to do without her sister.
Quite a few typos in this chapter and double discriptive words such as "said screamed" when it should be one of the two or "said, screaming". Other than that, good chapter.
*MornieGalad*
P.S. I like Jenny, she seems like a pretty good character, but you might be able to do without her sister.
2/25/2006 c3 MornieGalad
Good chapter overall. Out of curiousity, though, why wouldn't Sirius's dad use his wand on him instead of punching him? It would probably have been more effective. Also, I think the phrase you were going for is internal bleeding, not "eternal bleeding". Overall, very good.
*MornieGalad*
Good chapter overall. Out of curiousity, though, why wouldn't Sirius's dad use his wand on him instead of punching him? It would probably have been more effective. Also, I think the phrase you were going for is internal bleeding, not "eternal bleeding". Overall, very good.
*MornieGalad*
2/23/2006 c5 TheNiceBlairWitch
you now your a butt head wrire. leaving me, your own sister hanging like that. how dare you. ANYWAY IT WAS REALLY GOOD.:P
you now your a butt head wrire. leaving me, your own sister hanging like that. how dare you. ANYWAY IT WAS REALLY GOOD.:P
2/9/2006 c4 Zeezeezuhglkjdsf
hey psstt you got a story to write ;) lol keep writing I HEART THIS STORY! :D
hey psstt you got a story to write ;) lol keep writing I HEART THIS STORY! :D
2/5/2006 c4 Delete This Account Please 111
Nice work here buddy, keep on writing! But please get a proof-reader.
bye, Xtin *who is going to bed now*
Nice work here buddy, keep on writing! But please get a proof-reader.
bye, Xtin *who is going to bed now*