for Breathing1/7/2007 c1 
20schoolgirl-cheesesculpture
Wow... that acually makes me feel sad for Harry...Which is rare...
20schoolgirl-cheesesculptureWow... that acually makes me feel sad for Harry...Which is rare...
12/26/2005 c1 4FizzingWhizbeez
I like this... very emotional and touching. You wrote this very well, and with exactly the right mood, tone, diction, etc. The last line was my favorite!
4FizzingWhizbeezI like this... very emotional and touching. You wrote this very well, and with exactly the right mood, tone, diction, etc. The last line was my favorite!
12/19/2005 c1 1HonestlyDishonest
Hey, you're back! HUZZAH! =P Anywho, I don't think any of us are the next Christopher Paolini, so don't worry. I still loved it. The story was awesome! Hopefully you'll have some more little moments of inspiration-I love reading them! Good job!
-PleaseExcuseTheOrneryPenguins
1HonestlyDishonestHey, you're back! HUZZAH! =P Anywho, I don't think any of us are the next Christopher Paolini, so don't worry. I still loved it. The story was awesome! Hopefully you'll have some more little moments of inspiration-I love reading them! Good job!
-PleaseExcuseTheOrneryPenguins
11/27/2005 c1 FirstDaysofSummer
i like it. it makes sense that harry would be feeling that way, and its even better when people put out an experience that theyve had and twist it to fit someone else. just got back from church and georgia to see the family there... i had a lot of author alerts, and was so suprised to see that one of them had your name on it! well ill probably see you before you get this, so ill just ramble at you then. because this is your first update since... july. four months ago. but its okay, as long as you update more. starting now. no, right now.
FDOS
i like it. it makes sense that harry would be feeling that way, and its even better when people put out an experience that theyve had and twist it to fit someone else. just got back from church and georgia to see the family there... i had a lot of author alerts, and was so suprised to see that one of them had your name on it! well ill probably see you before you get this, so ill just ramble at you then. because this is your first update since... july. four months ago. but its okay, as long as you update more. starting now. no, right now.
FDOS
11/27/2005 c1 FizzingWhizbeez
That was great! Er, not great that Harry suffers, but great as in your writing style. Is this a one-shot or will there be more?
PS- I, too, would have kept Dumbledore alive.
That was great! Er, not great that Harry suffers, but great as in your writing style. Is this a one-shot or will there be more?
PS- I, too, would have kept Dumbledore alive.
11/27/2005 c1 4EternalEcho
I actually liked it a lot. And I don't usually do this, but I just have to tell you that I loved this part especially... "he fell back down once again on his back and slid off his robe so that he was in his nightshirt and exposed to the biting cold, simply to feel..." Thought that one really captured the mood, and it sounds like something my friends and I would do. Nice work. -Echo
4EternalEchoI actually liked it a lot. And I don't usually do this, but I just have to tell you that I loved this part especially... "he fell back down once again on his back and slid off his robe so that he was in his nightshirt and exposed to the biting cold, simply to feel..." Thought that one really captured the mood, and it sounds like something my friends and I would do. Nice work. -Echo