for There Goes My Life11/28/2009 c13 Kristl
I just found this story today and read it all the way threw I loved it and I hope you come back and finish it...
I just found this story today and read it all the way threw I loved it and I hope you come back and finish it...
12/15/2008 c13 
50rita louise evans
Loved it I hope Randy stops being an ass and is there for Amanda and their child. Please continue
50rita louise evansLoved it I hope Randy stops being an ass and is there for Amanda and their child. Please continue
10/20/2007 c12 semiyapayasam
OMG!How can randy leave her @ a time like this...good chapter..update soon!
OMG!How can randy leave her @ a time like this...good chapter..update soon!
8/24/2007 c12 6cassymae
Wow, love the story and drama, I wonder if Randy will continue to leav her...update soon, please? =]
6cassymaeWow, love the story and drama, I wonder if Randy will continue to leav her...update soon, please? =]
1/25/2007 c12 17rory21
i read this story a couple of months ago and i love it :)
i'm very happy you updated and can't wait to read what's going to happen!
17rory21i read this story a couple of months ago and i love it :)
i'm very happy you updated and can't wait to read what's going to happen!
1/21/2007 c12 1Takerslady
OMG! What is Randy doing! Poor Amanda. Are you going to detail this story and make it super long. Or are you going to skip by like 3 months later, 4 months later, like that? Great chapter, the end broke my heart. Update soon.
1TakersladyOMG! What is Randy doing! Poor Amanda. Are you going to detail this story and make it super long. Or are you going to skip by like 3 months later, 4 months later, like that? Great chapter, the end broke my heart. Update soon.
1/21/2007 c12 2NudeFitsLipsandPumps
This was a very nice chapter. I loved it. I was beginning to wonder if you were going to update this again, all I've got to say is great job. I'm glad you updated. I can't wait to see what happens with Amanda and Randy now. :)
2NudeFitsLipsandPumpsThis was a very nice chapter. I loved it. I was beginning to wonder if you were going to update this again, all I've got to say is great job. I'm glad you updated. I can't wait to see what happens with Amanda and Randy now. :)
1/20/2007 c12 11JahlisaC
OMG! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH RANDY! HIS FREGGIN' PREGNANT GIRLFRIEND NEEDS HELP! Anyways hope you ^ date soon hun..
11JahlisaCOMG! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH RANDY! HIS FREGGIN' PREGNANT GIRLFRIEND NEEDS HELP! Anyways hope you ^ date soon hun..
12/17/2006 c11 4emmiiee'ox
Hey, sorry I didn't review the last ten chapters...I kinda got lost in the story...heh. I mean, like I say, I usually hate highschool fics, but there a couple of acceptions I will read and like. Yours being one of them. One of the best. I really like the story line...I mean, you did a beautiful job leading up to the pregnancy...it was like...everything was perfect, then it all crashed down.
It's very beautifully written, and on a less serious note, their kid's name should be (if it's a girl) Mandy. I mean, not because it's a short form of Amanda. Becasue it's Randy and Amanda's name mixed. Heh. And if it's a boy it should be Mandall. It's a real name...I think. Another mixture. Or Nikonay...never mind...you have to know 'the' Nikonay to get it. Yep.
On yet a serious note, I didn't find many mistakes. Only the occasional, 'blame stupid keyboards' mistakes. But your grammar is quite good, and your use of discription is amazing. I hope you continue soon.
-emma lea
(I'd ask you to try to read my highschool story, but It doesn't appear you're a fan of humor...who knows, you could be...but your style is 10x better then my cheap humor. Later.)
4emmiiee'oxHey, sorry I didn't review the last ten chapters...I kinda got lost in the story...heh. I mean, like I say, I usually hate highschool fics, but there a couple of acceptions I will read and like. Yours being one of them. One of the best. I really like the story line...I mean, you did a beautiful job leading up to the pregnancy...it was like...everything was perfect, then it all crashed down.
It's very beautifully written, and on a less serious note, their kid's name should be (if it's a girl) Mandy. I mean, not because it's a short form of Amanda. Becasue it's Randy and Amanda's name mixed. Heh. And if it's a boy it should be Mandall. It's a real name...I think. Another mixture. Or Nikonay...never mind...you have to know 'the' Nikonay to get it. Yep.
On yet a serious note, I didn't find many mistakes. Only the occasional, 'blame stupid keyboards' mistakes. But your grammar is quite good, and your use of discription is amazing. I hope you continue soon.
-emma lea
(I'd ask you to try to read my highschool story, but It doesn't appear you're a fan of humor...who knows, you could be...but your style is 10x better then my cheap humor. Later.)