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4/13/2006 c1 chronic dragon
this is craptastic. i have an idea you can use. how about you leave all the shitty cliches behind. think up an original plot. think things out. and put out a decent fic. and anyone that thinks this is great or anything more than a peice of shit must not have any brain cells.
4/8/2006 c1 liarscope
i like the story, your favorites are also very good...
1/26/2006 c1 e0in
cool
1/18/2006 c1 3lordvitiris
Hi,

I liked this story a lot. I hope you update soon please.

From Lord Vitiris...
1/18/2006 c1 9Lord Lugos
Dude, that was a pretty wild story. Loved it.
1/14/2006 c1 fightingstoryaddiction
encore encore! hehehehehehehehe... will this continue? if so please update soon! those bastards should pay big time even more!
12/14/2005 c1 9gal-from-the-'hood
god, nice, sweet.

love the ending... WHAT A PRANK!
12/12/2005 c1 Lord Flamel
To, be blunt there was no dept, no detail, and way way too fast. the abilities did not help him if anything it made him a superpower. There was no ending ( He killed all his betrayers. The End.) How did Rita Skitter get that info?

Also there was no EMOTION! now lots of authors can't put this into there writing. just keep working on it.

Other wise awsome ideas.

-Lord Flamel

'The intelectual and mighty house of Flamel, may all kneel in our presence'
12/5/2005 c1 sweetangel2617
LOL! I loved the end they all got wat they deserved...

like your story jabarber69.. straight to the point and oh my the ending... great, just great keep up the work.. its good for a one chapter... loved the dark humor...
11/30/2005 c1 9tumshie
Totally unoriginal, most of it seems to have been cut and pasted from other fics, as for humour? couldn't find any.
11/30/2005 c1 lunadea21
I read this story all the way through, and while i did enjoy the outline that i read I felt it lacking in any depth. I'm not saying this to be mean, because I truely loved the idea of you're story and found the ending very funny and appropriet, but I really wish you had split it into multiple chapters and had gone into depth about how he gained his powers, and his revenge. Discuss more about how the deatheaters died, how the students reacted to Snape falling dead. I also suggest getting a beta to read over it, you have a few grammar and capitalization errors in a few spots.

Please don't take this as a flame, its not, I really enjoyed it, but 5 would have enjoyed it much more if you had put more depth and plot to it. Maybe, if you get the chance, expand and make it a multi chaptered story and repost it.

Thanks for posting, I really did enjoy it, and thanks for listening.
11/30/2005 c1 MovedDeadAccount
pure evil, but hilarious!
11/30/2005 c1 50Mage-Alia
! Harry pranking the wizarding world! HA! That's a good one! Give the author a cookie for original Ideas and another one for the sheer fact that I nearly shit myself laughing when I read it... the first time around... and the second time...

Seriously, I haven't seen any of your other stories but if any of them are half as good as this one I'd probably read them all. Good Job!
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