for Perfect Gift1/29/2011 c1 
72Red River
The line I liked best from this story was "Their hearts sped faster at how they were treating each other, with such worry. With such care." That's a sweet idea for the development of a relationship between these two, who aren't always gentle with other people. Thanks for the read.
72Red RiverThe line I liked best from this story was "Their hearts sped faster at how they were treating each other, with such worry. With such care." That's a sweet idea for the development of a relationship between these two, who aren't always gentle with other people. Thanks for the read.
4/12/2010 c1 12violetstar198
haha dont worry! the kissing came at the PERFECT time! nd ur good at writing smut(wow did i really just say tht?)*hieds face* its a good story, my first narutoxsasuke...uhm...yea *mumbles*
12violetstar198haha dont worry! the kissing came at the PERFECT time! nd ur good at writing smut(wow did i really just say tht?)*hieds face* its a good story, my first narutoxsasuke...uhm...yea *mumbles*
4/21/2007 c1 Jenny
OMG i love this story it is awsome! you are an excellent author!
OMG i love this story it is awsome! you are an excellent author!
9/12/2006 c1 1Meses Padfoot
This was so sweet! I loved it! The kissing was perfect, in my opinion. But, that's just me. I guess I'm kind of a perv. :p
I live up in Minnesota, and honestly, I'm glad. I went down to California. Damn, was it hot!
I love the snow, too. Winter is my favorite holiday.
1Meses PadfootThis was so sweet! I loved it! The kissing was perfect, in my opinion. But, that's just me. I guess I'm kind of a perv. :p
I live up in Minnesota, and honestly, I'm glad. I went down to California. Damn, was it hot!
I love the snow, too. Winter is my favorite holiday.
2/2/2006 c1 MissOutcastus
personally i didn't think it was fast enough.
personally i didn't think it was fast enough.
1/5/2006 c1 2supergeak
wow really cute but you shoukd think of copying and pasting it onto DA because some people don't have the pationts to do this lol this is tuf-luv from DA very nice story sasuke started to get a bit out of characterat the end but it is still very nice!
2supergeakwow really cute but you shoukd think of copying and pasting it onto DA because some people don't have the pationts to do this lol this is tuf-luv from DA very nice story sasuke started to get a bit out of characterat the end but it is still very nice!
12/20/2005 c1 26Exploded Toilet Bowl
Don't worry. Mostly for one-shots, you find that kissing happens WAY TOO FAST. After all, it's only one-chapter. It's not fast. I think the speed you went is alright, only that I'd say that Sasuke is a bit more softer to Naruto than normal. But anyways, I want mroe fictions from you! You did a great job on this! :D
26Exploded Toilet BowlDon't worry. Mostly for one-shots, you find that kissing happens WAY TOO FAST. After all, it's only one-chapter. It's not fast. I think the speed you went is alright, only that I'd say that Sasuke is a bit more softer to Naruto than normal. But anyways, I want mroe fictions from you! You did a great job on this! :D
12/17/2005 c1 26Black-Moon-Goddess
I loved it so much! I don't care if you think it went too fast-I loved it! Heh heh. Though snow is pretty, I'm more like Sasuke about it 'cause snow SUCKS to be in when you have to ... But I loved the kissing. A lot. Though not as much as those two did. XD
"You people up north are lucky." Um, not. My house is at its maximum of 64 degrees. Last Wednesday I had to walk to the bus stop and wait for twenty minutes in the mushy snow and 10-degree weather. We are NOT lucky. *Sobs* (Oh, and this weather I'm decribing is on a GOOD day.)
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26Black-Moon-GoddessI loved it so much! I don't care if you think it went too fast-I loved it! Heh heh. Though snow is pretty, I'm more like Sasuke about it 'cause snow SUCKS to be in when you have to ... But I loved the kissing. A lot. Though not as much as those two did. XD
"You people up north are lucky." Um, not. My house is at its maximum of 64 degrees. Last Wednesday I had to walk to the bus stop and wait for twenty minutes in the mushy snow and 10-degree weather. We are NOT lucky. *Sobs* (Oh, and this weather I'm decribing is on a GOOD day.)
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12/12/2005 c1 16Tragedy Links Our Hearts
that was sweet and i think that you don't need to have smut for a aweet story=)
16Tragedy Links Our Heartsthat was sweet and i think that you don't need to have smut for a aweet story=)
12/6/2005 c1 15Lily Vendrem
I dont think they kissed too fast. I think it was kinda sorta random. And I love random. REALLY random. And it was way cute. Its the perfect story if you wanna split your face because you smiled and frowned so much. I loved it ^-^
15Lily VendremI dont think they kissed too fast. I think it was kinda sorta random. And I love random. REALLY random. And it was way cute. Its the perfect story if you wanna split your face because you smiled and frowned so much. I loved it ^-^