
5/14/2006 c6
11White Alchemist Taya
so cool!
could her elzbeth's father be sirius?
this is so cool!
you got to update!
update soon!~

so cool!
could her elzbeth's father be sirius?
this is so cool!
you got to update!
update soon!~
3/20/2006 c6 purple curiouser
-stands up and claps-
i'm so proud of you;despite all the problems you faced;you still continued on with the story and thats a true writer. of course i have to say i'm deeply sorry that your other grandmother passed away too and you broke up with your partner of seven years; a girl can only take that much;but you managed to overcome it. you have written amazing stories on this site;keep it up;you definitely have my support:)
-stands up and claps-
i'm so proud of you;despite all the problems you faced;you still continued on with the story and thats a true writer. of course i have to say i'm deeply sorry that your other grandmother passed away too and you broke up with your partner of seven years; a girl can only take that much;but you managed to overcome it. you have written amazing stories on this site;keep it up;you definitely have my support:)
3/14/2006 c6
13quidditch7
Wow, do you know what? You are an amazing beyond amazing writer..seriously how do you write so well? I could feel both Ron and Hermione's emotions through the dialogue and thoughts and it was wonderful. Seriously this story is plain out brilliant.
I love this line: 'his very presence waking something that had lay dormant for so long that the very fact that it’s still alive is scaring me slightly.'
The chemistry between Ron and Hermione is perfect and you catch the greatness of their relationship- bickering and truly loving eachother. I have a feeling that they aren't in the clear yet..and maybe a little angst is yet to come between those two?
And I absoulutly adore the chemistry between Elzbeth and Harry..I still got a bit of a twinge in my stomach when they began bickering/flirting because I just wish Ginny could be alive and date Harry..but still I am loving the bit between Elzbeth and Harry it's sweet and I can't wait to see their relationship deepen...although I have a feeling things won't go too smoothly for them..Harry's been through so much trauma b/c of Ginny and other things during the war and I don't think Elzbeth is truly in the position to understand that right now.
Anyhow girl...I am so very sorry about your other Grandmother passing away, I hope you and your family are allright and I will say a few prayers for you, your family, and your grandmother. And as for your boyfriend/partner I am so dearly sorry...7 years, that's a long time and I bet it has been very difficult for you to start fresh with someone else. But your a great person and I'm sure you'll get through it.
Keep up the great writing and don't worry about delayed updates.
-quidditch7

Wow, do you know what? You are an amazing beyond amazing writer..seriously how do you write so well? I could feel both Ron and Hermione's emotions through the dialogue and thoughts and it was wonderful. Seriously this story is plain out brilliant.
I love this line: 'his very presence waking something that had lay dormant for so long that the very fact that it’s still alive is scaring me slightly.'
The chemistry between Ron and Hermione is perfect and you catch the greatness of their relationship- bickering and truly loving eachother. I have a feeling that they aren't in the clear yet..and maybe a little angst is yet to come between those two?
And I absoulutly adore the chemistry between Elzbeth and Harry..I still got a bit of a twinge in my stomach when they began bickering/flirting because I just wish Ginny could be alive and date Harry..but still I am loving the bit between Elzbeth and Harry it's sweet and I can't wait to see their relationship deepen...although I have a feeling things won't go too smoothly for them..Harry's been through so much trauma b/c of Ginny and other things during the war and I don't think Elzbeth is truly in the position to understand that right now.
Anyhow girl...I am so very sorry about your other Grandmother passing away, I hope you and your family are allright and I will say a few prayers for you, your family, and your grandmother. And as for your boyfriend/partner I am so dearly sorry...7 years, that's a long time and I bet it has been very difficult for you to start fresh with someone else. But your a great person and I'm sure you'll get through it.
Keep up the great writing and don't worry about delayed updates.
-quidditch7
3/14/2006 c6
8Maeheart
Hey it's nice to have you back! Sorry about all the stuff that's happened too you, life's a bitch sometimes. Anyway nice chapter in this story and Flowers in her hair. Keep up the good work.

Hey it's nice to have you back! Sorry about all the stuff that's happened too you, life's a bitch sometimes. Anyway nice chapter in this story and Flowers in her hair. Keep up the good work.
1/18/2006 c5 love and hate own time
love it:D
love it:D
1/17/2006 c5
8Zarroc
oh gosh, whats going to happen now? keep reading and writing and post next chapters soon

oh gosh, whats going to happen now? keep reading and writing and post next chapters soon
1/17/2006 c5
13quidditch7
YAY! I was so excited when I saw you had updated this story. There's just something about this story that makes me want to keep reading and reading and reading...but then again EVERY one of your stories does that to me. haha.
This was super cute..I liked reading more about the twins..and about charlie! aw...seriously charlie is such a great character and the way j.k.r. and you describe him, he sounds so handsome too.
This chapter was darling...I still am loving how Hermione and Elzbeth are getting to be closer friends.
Also seeing another old character (Rita) was fun...I love reading old characters and when authors bring them back into stories..she is still her same old self in this story..hehe..but there is a more respectful edge to her now that the war is over.
And I really do love reading about the little instances between Elzbeth and Harry..like her staring into his green eyes..ah I can so visualize it,and i love it! and of course the bit at the end about both of them taking away ron and hermione's wands was too funny. i love it! hehe.
and as for Ron and Hermione..ah I swear they are the best couple ever..I do hope that next chapter maybe we can hear what is said in the bathroom or actually read the scene of ron and herm talking... ah I so want there to just be a moment of tension where Ron just grabs her and kisses her! haha...but I understand if that doesn't happen until they get things resolved...because Ron has changed...which is incredibly sad, but not really his fault.
ANYHOW...brilliant chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next! :)
-quidditch7

YAY! I was so excited when I saw you had updated this story. There's just something about this story that makes me want to keep reading and reading and reading...but then again EVERY one of your stories does that to me. haha.
This was super cute..I liked reading more about the twins..and about charlie! aw...seriously charlie is such a great character and the way j.k.r. and you describe him, he sounds so handsome too.
This chapter was darling...I still am loving how Hermione and Elzbeth are getting to be closer friends.
Also seeing another old character (Rita) was fun...I love reading old characters and when authors bring them back into stories..she is still her same old self in this story..hehe..but there is a more respectful edge to her now that the war is over.
And I really do love reading about the little instances between Elzbeth and Harry..like her staring into his green eyes..ah I can so visualize it,and i love it! and of course the bit at the end about both of them taking away ron and hermione's wands was too funny. i love it! hehe.
and as for Ron and Hermione..ah I swear they are the best couple ever..I do hope that next chapter maybe we can hear what is said in the bathroom or actually read the scene of ron and herm talking... ah I so want there to just be a moment of tension where Ron just grabs her and kisses her! haha...but I understand if that doesn't happen until they get things resolved...because Ron has changed...which is incredibly sad, but not really his fault.
ANYHOW...brilliant chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next! :)
-quidditch7
1/17/2006 c5
8Maeheart
Good chapter. I hope you're ok now. Are we going to know what happened with Ron and Hermione in the bathroom, in the next Chappie?

Good chapter. I hope you're ok now. Are we going to know what happened with Ron and Hermione in the bathroom, in the next Chappie?
1/17/2006 c5 purple curiouser
at long last! harry and elzbeth finally have a decent conversation..you left alot of suspense in this story.. i can't wait to find out what happens to ron and hermione in the washroom..i loled at the part where elzbeth and harry took the pair's wand that was wicked.so update as soon as poss x)
at long last! harry and elzbeth finally have a decent conversation..you left alot of suspense in this story.. i can't wait to find out what happens to ron and hermione in the washroom..i loled at the part where elzbeth and harry took the pair's wand that was wicked.so update as soon as poss x)
1/1/2006 c4
13quidditch7
I'm SO sorry it's taken me so long to review..I feel horrible. I hope you had a good Christmas and New Year!
Firstly I'm so very sorry about your grandmother..I'm sure you've gotten many sorry's but I truly mean it...but just think that she'll never truly be gone as long as you hold the information of all she has taught you within yourself.
This chapter was really good..I like how Hermione is starting to warm up towards Elzbeth (ah i love her name haha). It's great to see their friendship forming.
Also..I just adore the twins in this story of yours. I mean I always love their characters..but especially now that they are both funny and a little bit more caring than usual. I love it.
This story is fabulous..just as is your writing.
I can't wait to read more and more chapters..I'm extremely excited.
And I love how Harry is so protective of Ginny's "spot in the group" even if he accuses wrongly..it just proves that he is such a loyal person. And I can't wait to see how him and Elzbeth become friends and I'm guessing MORE than friends.
Ron and Hermione's relationship REALLY intrigues me...I hate the thought of Hermione being so lonely and poor Ron..the light gone from his eyes..it really is upsetting. oh wow..i started crying when hermione explained how Ron isn't the same anymore. I NEED Hermione to get the old Ron back..and I hope she does quickly..although it's obviously a delicate matter. And I hope that either Elzbeth or EVENTUALLY Ron can console Hermione also..b/c she has been copeing well w/ out help..too well actually. And she's going to crack soon under the pressure I fear..
anyhow..brilliant chapter..I can't wait to read the about the party they are goign to. I hope all is well or improved with you recenlty. I hope to hear from you soon.
-quidditch7

I'm SO sorry it's taken me so long to review..I feel horrible. I hope you had a good Christmas and New Year!
Firstly I'm so very sorry about your grandmother..I'm sure you've gotten many sorry's but I truly mean it...but just think that she'll never truly be gone as long as you hold the information of all she has taught you within yourself.
This chapter was really good..I like how Hermione is starting to warm up towards Elzbeth (ah i love her name haha). It's great to see their friendship forming.
Also..I just adore the twins in this story of yours. I mean I always love their characters..but especially now that they are both funny and a little bit more caring than usual. I love it.
This story is fabulous..just as is your writing.
I can't wait to read more and more chapters..I'm extremely excited.
And I love how Harry is so protective of Ginny's "spot in the group" even if he accuses wrongly..it just proves that he is such a loyal person. And I can't wait to see how him and Elzbeth become friends and I'm guessing MORE than friends.
Ron and Hermione's relationship REALLY intrigues me...I hate the thought of Hermione being so lonely and poor Ron..the light gone from his eyes..it really is upsetting. oh wow..i started crying when hermione explained how Ron isn't the same anymore. I NEED Hermione to get the old Ron back..and I hope she does quickly..although it's obviously a delicate matter. And I hope that either Elzbeth or EVENTUALLY Ron can console Hermione also..b/c she has been copeing well w/ out help..too well actually. And she's going to crack soon under the pressure I fear..
anyhow..brilliant chapter..I can't wait to read the about the party they are goign to. I hope all is well or improved with you recenlty. I hope to hear from you soon.
-quidditch7
12/30/2005 c4 theressomethingmissing
I really loved that chapter, it was perfect. I feel so sorry for Hermione though, her life is so dreary and depressing at the moment. But I can tell that you reflected some of your own grief into the story, whether it was on purpose or not. My deepest sympathy to you, and I hope that your grandmother rests in peace. I will pray for both of you.
I really loved that chapter, it was perfect. I feel so sorry for Hermione though, her life is so dreary and depressing at the moment. But I can tell that you reflected some of your own grief into the story, whether it was on purpose or not. My deepest sympathy to you, and I hope that your grandmother rests in peace. I will pray for both of you.
12/25/2005 c4 purple curiouser
ok, firstly i want to say that i'm sorry that your grandmother passed away,i'ii never really understand your feelings because my grandparents died before i was born but i know the feeling of losing someone you love and your grandmother sounds like a really cool grandmother,so feel better!And back to the topic i think you delivered the chapter really well! i like the angsty bit between ron and hermione and hooray! harry and elzbeth finally spoke to each other - even though it wasn't alot but its something. so all in all this was great,keep it up!
ok, firstly i want to say that i'm sorry that your grandmother passed away,i'ii never really understand your feelings because my grandparents died before i was born but i know the feeling of losing someone you love and your grandmother sounds like a really cool grandmother,so feel better!And back to the topic i think you delivered the chapter really well! i like the angsty bit between ron and hermione and hooray! harry and elzbeth finally spoke to each other - even though it wasn't alot but its something. so all in all this was great,keep it up!