for Angel or Devil5/29/2006 c5 
30simonsaysfunction
Do you realize that a good portion of your plot is based on a collection of different things. You forgot to mention in one of your chapters that Akasha and Enkil belong to Anne Rice and the Hungarian currency (since you are in Budapest) is the forint not rupees which I've only heard from the video game series The Legend of Zelda. If you're going to use things like that, tell who it belongs too...and on another note. Wouldn't Gabriel and Anna share a room since they're married?
30simonsaysfunctionDo you realize that a good portion of your plot is based on a collection of different things. You forgot to mention in one of your chapters that Akasha and Enkil belong to Anne Rice and the Hungarian currency (since you are in Budapest) is the forint not rupees which I've only heard from the video game series The Legend of Zelda. If you're going to use things like that, tell who it belongs too...and on another note. Wouldn't Gabriel and Anna share a room since they're married?
4/13/2006 c5 firekidd
damned, teh one thing i really like, is the amount of thought put into it, its developing very well. yeah, i gots to update. but lazy and exmas... :(
hang tough!
damned, teh one thing i really like, is the amount of thought put into it, its developing very well. yeah, i gots to update. but lazy and exmas... :(
hang tough!
12/14/2005 c2 4FireKidd
whoah...
update soon. its today for me already
you owe me one chapter... mwahahahahahaha
like it
continue...
drats, you're updating so fast...
hahah
gogogogogogo
UPDATE!
4FireKiddwhoah...
update soon. its today for me already
you owe me one chapter... mwahahahahahaha
like it
continue...
drats, you're updating so fast...
hahah
gogogogogogo
UPDATE!
12/13/2005 c2 1Insanity's Best Friend
ur stalker again...u enjoy tormenting people, hein? cliff-hanger in every sense. more!
1Insanity's Best Friendur stalker again...u enjoy tormenting people, hein? cliff-hanger in every sense. more!
12/11/2005 c1 FireKidd
sorry, wasn't able to reply ya. hm... interesting plot and story line so far, i like all those prophecy thingys, but i dont know how to write one. drats.
anyway, update soon! its good...
make it longer too? :3
sorry, wasn't able to reply ya. hm... interesting plot and story line so far, i like all those prophecy thingys, but i dont know how to write one. drats.
anyway, update soon! its good...
make it longer too? :3
12/10/2005 c1 Insanity's Best Friend
DUDE! For the love of every vampire myth and story in the history of literature, update! My GOD that is one good chapter! PLEASE! I'm on hands and knees, begging you.
DUDE! For the love of every vampire myth and story in the history of literature, update! My GOD that is one good chapter! PLEASE! I'm on hands and knees, begging you.
12/8/2005 c1 2Lady Maico
Oh! A Van Helsing story! *Cheers* I LOVED the movie! Anywho, it's a great start! Lol, I like the part where Vlad was wondering why it was so dark, and he forgot that his eyes were closed. ^_^ Update soon!
2Lady MaicoOh! A Van Helsing story! *Cheers* I LOVED the movie! Anywho, it's a great start! Lol, I like the part where Vlad was wondering why it was so dark, and he forgot that his eyes were closed. ^_^ Update soon!