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7Your other hand
The story is nice but it is rather sad. It's good that it was in May's POV [I'm a pokeshipper!] and I like the conflict of the story, where Misty couldn't be with Ash. But Ash seemed a little more emotional than he really is. Anyway, doesn't matter. I like it! Thumbs up:)
7Your other handThe story is nice but it is rather sad. It's good that it was in May's POV [I'm a pokeshipper!] and I like the conflict of the story, where Misty couldn't be with Ash. But Ash seemed a little more emotional than he really is. Anyway, doesn't matter. I like it! Thumbs up:)
3/17/2009 c1 17Timeless Eclipse
Nice Story
but it was pretty confusing...
I had to keep reading it and I still couldn't get it...
Oh well
If I come back and read it 2 years from now probably I would get it...
17Timeless EclipseNice Story
but it was pretty confusing...
I had to keep reading it and I still couldn't get it...
Oh well
If I come back and read it 2 years from now probably I would get it...
10/4/2008 c1 22The biggest ikarishipping Fan
That's so sad :(
At first I thought this was misty's pov then figure out it was May's.
Also so sad, that Misty and Ash can't be together :(
Real cute story though! :-D
22The biggest ikarishipping FanThat's so sad :(
At first I thought this was misty's pov then figure out it was May's.
Also so sad, that Misty and Ash can't be together :(
Real cute story though! :-D
2/13/2008 c1 hcfjjjujeewh
It`s wierd...the entire time I was reading this, my mind was screaming Gwen/Owen/Tosh triangle...
Fantastc writing though!
It`s wierd...the entire time I was reading this, my mind was screaming Gwen/Owen/Tosh triangle...
Fantastc writing though!
8/2/2007 c1 Anonymous
Sad, but I love it.
Sad, but I love it.
6/9/2007 c1 16Tiny Ginger
I luv this story! It sounds like something that happened to me. There's this girl that I know likes the guy I like, and she stole him from me and even if he looks happy with her, I know he'd most likely be happier with me.
Heather
16Tiny GingerI luv this story! It sounds like something that happened to me. There's this girl that I know likes the guy I like, and she stole him from me and even if he looks happy with her, I know he'd most likely be happier with me.
Heather
5/15/2006 c1 6Hakajin
I read this a long time ago and I meant to review, but I never did. Well, I'm doing it now. This struck me as a strange idea. Not that that's a bad thing, but it's very unusual, I wouldn't have thought of a fic like this, at least not for Pokeshipping. I like it that you were sympathetic with May, though I don't like to think that she likes Ash like that. It had a sad ending. It was very original.
6HakajinI read this a long time ago and I meant to review, but I never did. Well, I'm doing it now. This struck me as a strange idea. Not that that's a bad thing, but it's very unusual, I wouldn't have thought of a fic like this, at least not for Pokeshipping. I like it that you were sympathetic with May, though I don't like to think that she likes Ash like that. It had a sad ending. It was very original.
2/23/2006 c1 Shattered Emotions
Too lazy to log in. ~_~
Aww... This fic was so sad... My heart bleeds for May. ;_; I also hate when either character is heartbroken, it's just so depressing..
You're a great author though. ^^ Good job!
Too lazy to log in. ~_~
Aww... This fic was so sad... My heart bleeds for May. ;_; I also hate when either character is heartbroken, it's just so depressing..
You're a great author though. ^^ Good job!
1/2/2006 c1 17KrazywithaK
Wow...I haven't kept up with what's going on in Pokemon, so I don't fully understand it, but I don't think I need to. Amazing. You really did a nice job of getting into the character's head. Very, very impressive.
Oh, and good luck in the writing competition. I know you'll win!
Roaine
17KrazywithaKWow...I haven't kept up with what's going on in Pokemon, so I don't fully understand it, but I don't think I need to. Amazing. You really did a nice job of getting into the character's head. Very, very impressive.
Oh, and good luck in the writing competition. I know you'll win!
Roaine
12/13/2005 c1 35sykilik101
Awesome story. Though I'm a Pokeshipper, I don't enjoy it when either of the two girls gets heartbroken. Although it's sad that they couldn't be together, the good thing in this story is that she's heartbroken because Ash can't be happy. Thus, this story is good. If you're not too busy, could you maybe read and review my stories, "Mist in the Moonlight" and "Christmas Waltz"? PLEASE? They're my best works, in my opinion. Again, good job with the story. Later!
Writing: A Passion of the Soul.
35sykilik101Awesome story. Though I'm a Pokeshipper, I don't enjoy it when either of the two girls gets heartbroken. Although it's sad that they couldn't be together, the good thing in this story is that she's heartbroken because Ash can't be happy. Thus, this story is good. If you're not too busy, could you maybe read and review my stories, "Mist in the Moonlight" and "Christmas Waltz"? PLEASE? They're my best works, in my opinion. Again, good job with the story. Later!
Writing: A Passion of the Soul.