4/26/2006 c2 Blackdog616
Interesting plot. i like the discriptive writing style, too. and you keppt them in character really well. i hope there is somemore backstory about what happened to get them in this mess in the next chapter. can't wait to read it!
Interesting plot. i like the discriptive writing style, too. and you keppt them in character really well. i hope there is somemore backstory about what happened to get them in this mess in the next chapter. can't wait to read it!
3/12/2006 c2 Rachel
its really really great so please update soon.
its really really great so please update soon.
2/2/2006 c2 1jerseygrl246
Let's see; a torture camp, people dying, blood, perverts, and a beat up Prince. Well, I do say that this is a new plot line! Keep it up!
Let's see; a torture camp, people dying, blood, perverts, and a beat up Prince. Well, I do say that this is a new plot line! Keep it up!
1/6/2006 c2 2kakashisninjadogs
Aang d...d...DIED!
*sob* No!*siffle*
Escape!
HECK YEAH!
PLEASE! LET THEM ESCAPE FULLY! Like... how Zuko was tracking Aang
Get a hit, chase, give up, wait for next hit
UPDATE SOON!
Z_G_M
What about Sokka?
Aang d...d...DIED!
*sob* No!*siffle*
Escape!
HECK YEAH!
PLEASE! LET THEM ESCAPE FULLY! Like... how Zuko was tracking Aang
Get a hit, chase, give up, wait for next hit
UPDATE SOON!
Z_G_M
What about Sokka?
1/6/2006 c2 8Hebi R
I'm interested, I'm interested! Pick me! Honestly, I would be honored to beta this story for you, if the position is still availible.
I'm interested, I'm interested! Pick me! Honestly, I would be honored to beta this story for you, if the position is still availible.
1/6/2006 c2 2PuckerUpSmile
Love this story. hopefully u add another chapter soon keep up the wicked work!
Love this story. hopefully u add another chapter soon keep up the wicked work!
1/4/2006 c1 Peachy-Meechan
QH WHY I ODA! LET ME AT THIS ARUN GUY! anyway ( I let off tha t steam) GREat story luv it
QH WHY I ODA! LET ME AT THIS ARUN GUY! anyway ( I let off tha t steam) GREat story luv it
1/4/2006 c2 Dansgirl34
OMG! Just love this fanfic! I have been looking for a good Zuko and Katara fanfic and I finally found it! Your detail is amazing and you are keeping the characters in character! I love the humor and I also love how this story is orginial and not another one of those Zuko captures Katara fic! Please don't stop writing this story, I'll be waiting for your next update! I would be a beta reader but I just don't have the time, sorry! But keep up the excellent work!
OMG! Just love this fanfic! I have been looking for a good Zuko and Katara fanfic and I finally found it! Your detail is amazing and you are keeping the characters in character! I love the humor and I also love how this story is orginial and not another one of those Zuko captures Katara fic! Please don't stop writing this story, I'll be waiting for your next update! I would be a beta reader but I just don't have the time, sorry! But keep up the excellent work!
1/3/2006 c2 crossfire
wow this is great i really like it. its a whole new kind of thing i really like it i hope you udpate soon its really good
wow this is great i really like it. its a whole new kind of thing i really like it i hope you udpate soon its really good
1/3/2006 c2 20ArcherofDarkness and Callie
I'd beta, but I have no time...sorry...
YAy for zuko! as they say in Galaxy Quest: "never give up, never surrender!" please update soon!
I'd beta, but I have no time...sorry...
YAy for zuko! as they say in Galaxy Quest: "never give up, never surrender!" please update soon!
1/3/2006 c2 lerana
o very good =) plez keep updating!
o very good =) plez keep updating!