for Nightmare10/8/2006 c22 
20BWBeeDubs
well...i'm defiantly not one of the people who like being on a cliff hanger.now dude...please update soon before i fall!
20BWBeeDubswell...i'm defiantly not one of the people who like being on a cliff hanger.now dude...please update soon before i fall!
10/8/2006 c22 33Moving Mountains
That chapter was so sweet. I seriously love this story, and that chapter was lovely and well written. I like Raven's mood swings, and how you're making Aqualad feel about her. Lets just hope Raven's kiss awakens BB...
Update soon, you're an amazing writer x
33Moving MountainsThat chapter was so sweet. I seriously love this story, and that chapter was lovely and well written. I like Raven's mood swings, and how you're making Aqualad feel about her. Lets just hope Raven's kiss awakens BB...
Update soon, you're an amazing writer x
10/7/2006 c22 19HeadfirstforMCR
...oh a cliffy...*whines* I'll wait tho! Great chapter. Aqualad is one of my favs in the whole series
19HeadfirstforMCR...oh a cliffy...*whines* I'll wait tho! Great chapter. Aqualad is one of my favs in the whole series
10/5/2006 c21 fluffy pink bunny
i like Aqualad too:)
sorry i didn't review for he last chapter, my com broke down and i was busy with stuff
but i am here with a review of this chapter :)
hope Cy will go out with bee in the open, anyway everyone knows about it now, only BB doesn't. hopes he wakes up soon, do make him wake up, i don't mind waiting :)
liked the fight scene, don't think you are bad at description cos i can picture the scene in my tiny mind, do hope you will write more fight scenes
poor Robin, nearly lost his arm. never mind, Aqualad is here to help save the day :)
awaiting your next chapter
-fluffy
i like Aqualad too:)
sorry i didn't review for he last chapter, my com broke down and i was busy with stuff
but i am here with a review of this chapter :)
hope Cy will go out with bee in the open, anyway everyone knows about it now, only BB doesn't. hopes he wakes up soon, do make him wake up, i don't mind waiting :)
liked the fight scene, don't think you are bad at description cos i can picture the scene in my tiny mind, do hope you will write more fight scenes
poor Robin, nearly lost his arm. never mind, Aqualad is here to help save the day :)
awaiting your next chapter
-fluffy
9/27/2006 c21 angela
omg! that was a good story...tho it took me forever to read nd my eyes hurt but overall...that was kewl! ;D
omg! that was a good story...tho it took me forever to read nd my eyes hurt but overall...that was kewl! ;D
9/27/2006 c21 15Agent of the Divine One
I do hope that there is a happy ending in all of this. Don't get me wrong, I'm hooked on the story, but good must triumph eventually. I just hope it isn't a Pyhrean victory.
15Agent of the Divine OneI do hope that there is a happy ending in all of this. Don't get me wrong, I'm hooked on the story, but good must triumph eventually. I just hope it isn't a Pyhrean victory.
9/23/2006 c21 33Moving Mountains
Nice little chapter... I enjoyed it. It's good that Aqualad is coming to help, and hopefully Robin won't almost lose anymore limbs. Also, I liked Raven's small depression there, but if you make her move out... I may have to hurt you! ;) Update soon x
33Moving MountainsNice little chapter... I enjoyed it. It's good that Aqualad is coming to help, and hopefully Robin won't almost lose anymore limbs. Also, I liked Raven's small depression there, but if you make her move out... I may have to hurt you! ;) Update soon x
9/17/2006 c15 a reviewer
quite a fluffy chapter, love the chapters before and this one too
loved tt part when BB turned into a green pig with black patches
gonna read the other chapters now bye
quite a fluffy chapter, love the chapters before and this one too
loved tt part when BB turned into a green pig with black patches
gonna read the other chapters now bye
9/12/2006 c1 bbrae
plz update soon its a really good story
plz update soon its a really good story
9/10/2006 c20 33Moving Mountains
That chapter was so good. It's nice to see Raven getting better. The scene with Cyborg shouting at Raven was so effective, and it was a very good plan of action. This story is getting more and more interesting... I love it! xx
33Moving MountainsThat chapter was so good. It's nice to see Raven getting better. The scene with Cyborg shouting at Raven was so effective, and it was a very good plan of action. This story is getting more and more interesting... I love it! xx
9/9/2006 c20 58beautifulpurpleflame
Oh, what shall happen next? I can't wait to see! Please update soon or whenever you feel like it.
-beautifulpurpleflame
58beautifulpurpleflameOh, what shall happen next? I can't wait to see! Please update soon or whenever you feel like it.
-beautifulpurpleflame
9/6/2006 c19 15Agent of the Divine One
I would expect more sadness of course, but I do hope that this story has a happy ending. There is already enough tragedy as it is.
15Agent of the Divine OneI would expect more sadness of course, but I do hope that this story has a happy ending. There is already enough tragedy as it is.