for Harry Potter and the Library of Souls9/22/2015 c5 Bronze
Good God man! Must you start two such good stories only to abandon them?! This was just as good if not better then the other 5 chapter one I just read! I wish you'd either rewrite it or continue it. It definitely ISN'T a run of the mill Harry Potter fanfic!
Good God man! Must you start two such good stories only to abandon them?! This was just as good if not better then the other 5 chapter one I just read! I wish you'd either rewrite it or continue it. It definitely ISN'T a run of the mill Harry Potter fanfic!
6/8/2014 c3 hal
Great, Dudley is magical. I am quitting this story.
Great, Dudley is magical. I am quitting this story.
6/8/2014 c2 hal
NOOO, Dudley must not be magical! That stands against everything magic is. You are either born with magic or not.
NOOO, Dudley must not be magical! That stands against everything magic is. You are either born with magic or not.
5/23/2010 c5 
3WhiteElfElder
Good story so far. With Remus being cured, he should have no problems with employment or getting with Tonks now. Can't wait to see what you do further.
3WhiteElfElderGood story so far. With Remus being cured, he should have no problems with employment or getting with Tonks now. Can't wait to see what you do further.
11/15/2009 c5 loretta537
this story has a good story line, although the story itself seems to jump around and is a bit fast. i hope that one day you will start working on it again
this story has a good story line, although the story itself seems to jump around and is a bit fast. i hope that one day you will start working on it again
4/4/2007 c5 1Terris1
Interesting plot. You have some new ideas and I am eagerly awaiting for more. The weak areas are that you are going too fast in a sense that Harry is learning too fast and you have things happening without explaining any background. Of course it is possible that you have planned to reveal these things later in th estory and I hope this is the case. In any case this is very interesting story and definitely worth reading!
1Terris1Interesting plot. You have some new ideas and I am eagerly awaiting for more. The weak areas are that you are going too fast in a sense that Harry is learning too fast and you have things happening without explaining any background. Of course it is possible that you have planned to reveal these things later in th estory and I hope this is the case. In any case this is very interesting story and definitely worth reading!
4/3/2007 c2 fussbudget
*snigger* ... It's Lucius, not Luscious ...
Dictionary:
luscious: 1 a) : having a delicious taste or smell : juicy and sweet ; b) archaic : excessively sweet ; 2) : having sensual appeal : arousing sexual desire : VOLUPTUOUS, SEDUCTIVE ; 3) : richly luxurious or highly appealing to the senses; synonym see DELIGHTFUL
Well, maybe, at least the way Jason Isaacs plays him *grin*.
Hermes? That's the same name as Percy's owl ... though it makes sense for Hermione ... she would pick something from classical mythology and it's similar to her own name ...
He's Harry, not Harold ... it's Ginevra (vr) not Ginerva (rv). Just because you wrote this over a year ago doesn't mean you can't correct typos ... that's why the site lets you replace chapters ...
Three cheers for Super!Harry ... mostly not bad overall, not too many typos, though I wish you didn't put an Author Note in the middle of a paragraph ... really irritating ... if you really need to, you could do it as a footnote (mark it with (1) and put the note on the bottom). Breaking up long text into paragraphs would also help, such as every time the person speaking changes (the long paragraph when Anneau shows up). Hmm ... how did Dudley know Anneau's name if Harry was speaking bird-speak?
I do have a bit of trouble imagining Dudley saying "will strive to be worthy of your forgiveness and friendship" ... the sentiment can be justified by his 'wake-up call', but not that choice of words.
Ah well, on to the next chapter ...
fussy
PS ... I just noticed your Pet Peeve, and I wanted to assure you that I am a fanfic writer under another name, and I do editing for several writers, so I'm truly trying to be of assistance.
*snigger* ... It's Lucius, not Luscious ...
Dictionary:
luscious: 1 a) : having a delicious taste or smell : juicy and sweet ; b) archaic : excessively sweet ; 2) : having sensual appeal : arousing sexual desire : VOLUPTUOUS, SEDUCTIVE ; 3) : richly luxurious or highly appealing to the senses; synonym see DELIGHTFUL
Well, maybe, at least the way Jason Isaacs plays him *grin*.
Hermes? That's the same name as Percy's owl ... though it makes sense for Hermione ... she would pick something from classical mythology and it's similar to her own name ...
He's Harry, not Harold ... it's Ginevra (vr) not Ginerva (rv). Just because you wrote this over a year ago doesn't mean you can't correct typos ... that's why the site lets you replace chapters ...
Three cheers for Super!Harry ... mostly not bad overall, not too many typos, though I wish you didn't put an Author Note in the middle of a paragraph ... really irritating ... if you really need to, you could do it as a footnote (mark it with (1) and put the note on the bottom). Breaking up long text into paragraphs would also help, such as every time the person speaking changes (the long paragraph when Anneau shows up). Hmm ... how did Dudley know Anneau's name if Harry was speaking bird-speak?
I do have a bit of trouble imagining Dudley saying "will strive to be worthy of your forgiveness and friendship" ... the sentiment can be justified by his 'wake-up call', but not that choice of words.
Ah well, on to the next chapter ...
fussy
PS ... I just noticed your Pet Peeve, and I wanted to assure you that I am a fanfic writer under another name, and I do editing for several writers, so I'm truly trying to be of assistance.
4/3/2007 c5 Beth5572
I would love to see what the parents of Dudley say and all the wills being read on the July 31 for Harry and his future in the end. I also hope they all go back to school and Harry and Ginny also get back togethter too.
Thank you,
Terri
I would love to see what the parents of Dudley say and all the wills being read on the July 31 for Harry and his future in the end. I also hope they all go back to school and Harry and Ginny also get back togethter too.
Thank you,
Terri
12/7/2006 c4 Jfitzgerald
This is a great story so far. I hope that you will be posting a new chapter sometime soon. Also please continue the other stories you have started soon. Thanks.
This is a great story so far. I hope that you will be posting a new chapter sometime soon. Also please continue the other stories you have started soon. Thanks.
8/7/2006 c4 darthdrew1704
dude as I said with your other story, this story is most excellent, and keep up the good work.
hope to read more of this most excellent story,
Darth
dude as I said with your other story, this story is most excellent, and keep up the good work.
hope to read more of this most excellent story,
Darth