for Petal in the Rain1/3 c1 Maha
I miss you, ppp! Please continue this epic story!
I miss you, ppp! Please continue this epic story!
12/22/2024 c38 Cece
Hey girl I love this story! Been following it for some time now, and I know life is crazy but if you have another I’ll cry of happiness!
Hey girl I love this story! Been following it for some time now, and I know life is crazy but if you have another I’ll cry of happiness!
8/27/2024 c38 LilyOrphyFalomi
Wow! I mean, I am, as always, extraordinarily bewildered in the best possible way by your writing! My god it's astoundingly perfect, and I'm not even a religious person!
Every damn time I read your story, I learn new words ;P - although I'm not a native English speaker, so I guess it's expected. Perhaps, if you have some time, we could have a conversation about writing fanfiction? :)
You can find me on AO3 by the name of Lily_Orpheus_Falomi.
I'd love to hear how you manage to create such a chronologically sound story with profusely well-written characters that aren't desperately flat.
Xoxo
Lily
Wow! I mean, I am, as always, extraordinarily bewildered in the best possible way by your writing! My god it's astoundingly perfect, and I'm not even a religious person!
Every damn time I read your story, I learn new words ;P - although I'm not a native English speaker, so I guess it's expected. Perhaps, if you have some time, we could have a conversation about writing fanfiction? :)
You can find me on AO3 by the name of Lily_Orpheus_Falomi.
I'd love to hear how you manage to create such a chronologically sound story with profusely well-written characters that aren't desperately flat.
Xoxo
Lily
8/20/2024 c38 stupefiedkneazle
I remembered this story and mistakenly hunted for it in AO3. Before I figured out it was in FFnet. It remains my most favorite James/Lily story. Unlike most JiLy stories, Lily is likeable, beguiling and powerful here. I love how James is so down bad from the beginning. (Also loved reading Lily’s harem of admirers, honestly.) hope all is well you, author. Still hoepful the story isnt abandoned and we get to read about the games and how Lily creates a name for herself, with a mind and magic so powerful. All the best!
I remembered this story and mistakenly hunted for it in AO3. Before I figured out it was in FFnet. It remains my most favorite James/Lily story. Unlike most JiLy stories, Lily is likeable, beguiling and powerful here. I love how James is so down bad from the beginning. (Also loved reading Lily’s harem of admirers, honestly.) hope all is well you, author. Still hoepful the story isnt abandoned and we get to read about the games and how Lily creates a name for herself, with a mind and magic so powerful. All the best!
7/21/2024 c38 Guest
Hey, I have been really enjoying your story - is it completed or abandoned or are you just taking a break? Thanks for sharing as much as you have :)
Hey, I have been really enjoying your story - is it completed or abandoned or are you just taking a break? Thanks for sharing as much as you have :)
6/9/2024 c1 MaySha2835
Ahem... pls fix the quote in chapter 1. Its Gandhi and not Ghandi. It offnds me as an indian
Ahem... pls fix the quote in chapter 1. Its Gandhi and not Ghandi. It offnds me as an indian
4/5/2024 c38 Guest
So many years of this story and it's still so good, aging like a good wine. The only thing that made me laugh is how straight Sirius (and everyone except Rudolf) is around here, but I think that's just a reflection of the fandom at the time, all the stories were like that, But I'm not going to lie I miss a little of my wolfstar in here, but the wonderful story, plot and your writing make up for it, I hope you're doing well and come back to grace us one day xx (by the way, is there any social network you're active on? Twitter, Tumblr, Facebook? It would be cool to follow yoj
So many years of this story and it's still so good, aging like a good wine. The only thing that made me laugh is how straight Sirius (and everyone except Rudolf) is around here, but I think that's just a reflection of the fandom at the time, all the stories were like that, But I'm not going to lie I miss a little of my wolfstar in here, but the wonderful story, plot and your writing make up for it, I hope you're doing well and come back to grace us one day xx (by the way, is there any social network you're active on? Twitter, Tumblr, Facebook? It would be cool to follow yoj
3/28/2024 c38 Guest
I've been reading this for over 15 years, so so excited to find it again! Thank you so much, it has such a special place in my heart
I've been reading this for over 15 years, so so excited to find it again! Thank you so much, it has such a special place in my heart
2/28/2024 c38 tmgirl
After years of not checking this story it just came to my mind a week ago, imagine my euphoria when I saw that there were new chapters that I never knew were posted? I am so happy! I spent the week rereading it, and I have to say that it's still as incredible as I remembered, I love your way of writing and I'm so happy that you didn't give up on the story. There were at least 3 chapters that I hadn't read yet and I devoured them!
Let me say that my favorite part of the latest developments was James finally clarifying that he doesn't underestimate Lily, that she is exceptional at magic and he respects that, he's just afraid of her exposing herself, I was so distressed about her pulling hin away because of that, she needed to hear it. And then Lily finally asking him for help with something related to magic, I'm so tired of her always turning to Snape and not trusting James, it's sad and he'll be devastated when he finds out she's hiding the secret training. I just want them both to be honest and completely given to each other, no secrets. But I think we need a little drama in the story, right? (I love it)
The scene of him helping her with the patronus was my favorite, I can't wait to see their reaction when they see that their patronus match, and the same memories? truly soulmates. Now I just want more of Professor James helping Lily, they deserve these moments and I feel like he has so much to show her. I would like to see her explore magic with him too, James deserves to shine as a great wizard. Also the hot scenes? their chemistry is perfect.
About Snape, he's such an interesting and complete character, but I can't get over my aversion to him, the sexual thoughts about Aurora give me the creeps, I can't wait for him to find out about her and James, I just want to see him sinking into jealousy, sorry not sorry (LOL) but it's the best part than reading his POV.
I hope that life is being kind to you, and that everything is well, I hope one day to return to this page and see new chapters. Don't give up please and never doubt your talent for telling an incredible story. Thank you for everything.
After years of not checking this story it just came to my mind a week ago, imagine my euphoria when I saw that there were new chapters that I never knew were posted? I am so happy! I spent the week rereading it, and I have to say that it's still as incredible as I remembered, I love your way of writing and I'm so happy that you didn't give up on the story. There were at least 3 chapters that I hadn't read yet and I devoured them!
Let me say that my favorite part of the latest developments was James finally clarifying that he doesn't underestimate Lily, that she is exceptional at magic and he respects that, he's just afraid of her exposing herself, I was so distressed about her pulling hin away because of that, she needed to hear it. And then Lily finally asking him for help with something related to magic, I'm so tired of her always turning to Snape and not trusting James, it's sad and he'll be devastated when he finds out she's hiding the secret training. I just want them both to be honest and completely given to each other, no secrets. But I think we need a little drama in the story, right? (I love it)
The scene of him helping her with the patronus was my favorite, I can't wait to see their reaction when they see that their patronus match, and the same memories? truly soulmates. Now I just want more of Professor James helping Lily, they deserve these moments and I feel like he has so much to show her. I would like to see her explore magic with him too, James deserves to shine as a great wizard. Also the hot scenes? their chemistry is perfect.
About Snape, he's such an interesting and complete character, but I can't get over my aversion to him, the sexual thoughts about Aurora give me the creeps, I can't wait for him to find out about her and James, I just want to see him sinking into jealousy, sorry not sorry (LOL) but it's the best part than reading his POV.
I hope that life is being kind to you, and that everything is well, I hope one day to return to this page and see new chapters. Don't give up please and never doubt your talent for telling an incredible story. Thank you for everything.
2/25/2024 c38 Guest
Girl I am ITCHING for this next chapter you don’t even know please post soon! 3
Girl I am ITCHING for this next chapter you don’t even know please post soon! 3
2/24/2024 c38 Guest
So excited to read an update!
So excited to read an update!
2/22/2024 c38 
1hogwarts' lily
I have been following this story for ten years now… and it’s been constantly on my mind to always follow up. Please continue writing the story!
1hogwarts' lilyI have been following this story for ten years now… and it’s been constantly on my mind to always follow up. Please continue writing the story!
11/30/2023 c38 Fanfictionlover
Please don’t leave us hanging! I really like this story! And I love how you’ve given every character some depth. The way this story has turned. Pls update soon! Very soon!
Please don’t leave us hanging! I really like this story! And I love how you’ve given every character some depth. The way this story has turned. Pls update soon! Very soon!
10/23/2023 c38 Crying Reader
Alas, I am in desperate need of a follow up chapter. It seems you have disappeared from the surface of the Earth. I await Chapter 39 with tears streaming down my stricken face.
Alas, I am in desperate need of a follow up chapter. It seems you have disappeared from the surface of the Earth. I await Chapter 39 with tears streaming down my stricken face.
7/28/2023 c38 Guest
I normally don’t write reviews, might be my first in two-three years. English is not my first language, so I just tend to use it for work. However, your story? I sincerely, really, totally, and irrevocably am invested in it now. I hope you update soon! I also hope you realise you have a gift. Never stop writing. Also, if you plan to abandon this story just let us know, yeah? Please? But I hope you don’t give it up. I hope a lot! Update soooon 3
I normally don’t write reviews, might be my first in two-three years. English is not my first language, so I just tend to use it for work. However, your story? I sincerely, really, totally, and irrevocably am invested in it now. I hope you update soon! I also hope you realise you have a gift. Never stop writing. Also, if you plan to abandon this story just let us know, yeah? Please? But I hope you don’t give it up. I hope a lot! Update soooon 3