for Petal in the Rain9/29/2019 c24 Grace
Incredible language-reads like a real book!
Incredible language-reads like a real book!
9/7/2019 c35 Megan
Oh oh OH MY GOODNESS. I just discovered this beautiful story, and binge-read it. You are an AMAZING writer, and I can't wait for the rest of this story! So good.
Oh oh OH MY GOODNESS. I just discovered this beautiful story, and binge-read it. You are an AMAZING writer, and I can't wait for the rest of this story! So good.
9/5/2019 c35 Guest
Almost been a year since last update! Please please update it’ll mean the world to me :)
Almost been a year since last update! Please please update it’ll mean the world to me :)
8/22/2019 c35 lalelumondfrau
your story is sooo good! I bloddy loved reading it! I do like the evolution of your characters very much! and the fact that none of them are Mary Sue's!
You strike me as a very good author and I'm looking forward to reading more about Lily' and her friends! I also do love the fact that you changed a lot about the original but kept the main this (however I always thought that James has black hair and not dark brown)
thank you for writing this magical piece of art!
your story is sooo good! I bloddy loved reading it! I do like the evolution of your characters very much! and the fact that none of them are Mary Sue's!
You strike me as a very good author and I'm looking forward to reading more about Lily' and her friends! I also do love the fact that you changed a lot about the original but kept the main this (however I always thought that James has black hair and not dark brown)
thank you for writing this magical piece of art!
8/2/2019 c35 
2adria16
Is this really an abandoned story?
It would be such a shame if it is 'cause it's really original and aweseome.
2adria16Is this really an abandoned story?
It would be such a shame if it is 'cause it's really original and aweseome.
7/29/2019 c1 SuraWaldelfe
Hmm you haven't updated your Facebook, so I guess it's dead? That's sad.. Really enjoyed it
Hmm you haven't updated your Facebook, so I guess it's dead? That's sad.. Really enjoyed it
7/20/2019 c35 NiatheBookNerd
Please continue!
This is one story that I've found that portrays lily and James true love for each ofher!I love the plot,the time settings,the characters,the strength shown in each and every one of them;I solemnly swear that this is the best story I've ever have a way with words that makes the reader entranced within your paragraphs,and it's just an amazing continue!
Please continue!
This is one story that I've found that portrays lily and James true love for each ofher!I love the plot,the time settings,the characters,the strength shown in each and every one of them;I solemnly swear that this is the best story I've ever have a way with words that makes the reader entranced within your paragraphs,and it's just an amazing continue!
7/12/2019 c35 maddyya
This is one of my favorite stories I’ve ever read! I know I’m late to the party but I love it so much!
This is one of my favorite stories I’ve ever read! I know I’m late to the party but I love it so much!
7/9/2019 c35 Guest
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I just discovered your story and you cannot imagine or believe how obsessed I m with it already like its unreal. so please please update soon please please.
hiiiiiiii hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
I just discovered your story and you cannot imagine or believe how obsessed I m with it already like its unreal. so please please update soon please please.
7/1/2019 c35 Orangegoose
I have been reading nothing else but this story for the past three days. And honestly, I am so impressed. I love it so much! I especially love how I can tells how much time and dedication you spend on it, and how you’ve kept at it, no matter how long it takes to write. I am also impressed by your devotion to the work- focusing on writing something for over thirteen years! Your story-telling skills are incredible; I am intrigued by every chapter and I care about the lives of the characters, more than I have in any other story. All in all, I am so glad that I have been able to read this, and I hope that you continue this story with a part 36!
I have been reading nothing else but this story for the past three days. And honestly, I am so impressed. I love it so much! I especially love how I can tells how much time and dedication you spend on it, and how you’ve kept at it, no matter how long it takes to write. I am also impressed by your devotion to the work- focusing on writing something for over thirteen years! Your story-telling skills are incredible; I am intrigued by every chapter and I care about the lives of the characters, more than I have in any other story. All in all, I am so glad that I have been able to read this, and I hope that you continue this story with a part 36!
6/13/2019 c35 l e
you have have have HAVE to continue writing. this is a beautiful story and i am on the edge of my seat, waiting for me. please please please write another chapter. i am so eager to read it.
you have have have HAVE to continue writing. this is a beautiful story and i am on the edge of my seat, waiting for me. please please please write another chapter. i am so eager to read it.