for Petal in the Rain1/21/2006 c2 
1buckyball715
Good job! but I was wondering how magic is going to fit into this story. Like, is James's entire fmaily magical?and what about Lily? Is she also a witch but just doesn't know it yet?
1buckyball715Good job! but I was wondering how magic is going to fit into this story. Like, is James's entire fmaily magical?and what about Lily? Is she also a witch but just doesn't know it yet?
1/21/2006 c2 7GoddessoftheMaaN
Ahh! Yay! Brilliant chapter, i loved it! my favotrite line: "If that hand slips any lower I will box you in the nose" ~ Lily
huggs and bumps(update soon),
GoddessoftheMaaN :D
7GoddessoftheMaaNAhh! Yay! Brilliant chapter, i loved it! my favotrite line: "If that hand slips any lower I will box you in the nose" ~ Lily
huggs and bumps(update soon),
GoddessoftheMaaN :D
1/21/2006 c2 3infiniteternity
haha, thank you for not making James a prissy arrogant bastard and Lily and epitome of perfection
3infiniteternityhaha, thank you for not making James a prissy arrogant bastard and Lily and epitome of perfection
1/21/2006 c2 26jessinamaca
this has to be my favorite lilly and james story ever! i love it! please continue to write and do it fast!
26jessinamacathis has to be my favorite lilly and james story ever! i love it! please continue to write and do it fast!
1/21/2006 c2 Dreamfire205
I loved it. James says lily is a muggle will she be like that forever or will she find out shes a witch. plz update soon. I realy want james to know how much Lily gets abused in the school. update fly me to the moon also. So long as u keep writing, I'll keep reviewing.
~Dreamfire205
I loved it. James says lily is a muggle will she be like that forever or will she find out shes a witch. plz update soon. I realy want james to know how much Lily gets abused in the school. update fly me to the moon also. So long as u keep writing, I'll keep reviewing.
~Dreamfire205
1/21/2006 c2 maggie
Very nice chapter! It was just so romantic and sweet and it made me smile in excitement! When are you going to update? You better update soon, cause I need to know when these two lovely lovers will meet again! Another great chapter,pratty-prongs-princesse, and keep up the awesome work!
Very nice chapter! It was just so romantic and sweet and it made me smile in excitement! When are you going to update? You better update soon, cause I need to know when these two lovely lovers will meet again! Another great chapter,pratty-prongs-princesse, and keep up the awesome work!
1/17/2006 c1 3Moonbugg
Yes, please do update this story!
In all honesty, for the first part I was wondering if it actually was going to have anything to do with Harry Potter - I thought you might as well have changed Lily's name and posted it as original fiction - it's certainly good enough!
I like the new slant on things you've given the story - setting it in World War Two and totally changing the backgrounds of the (two) characters we know of. It's really interesting!
I also love reading of Lily's mischief - I'm a fan of Marauder-era characters, and there's never enough on Lily! But this seems exactly the way she would think and behave.
You also have a fantastic writing style - I'm usually one to steer clear of one-shots/one-chapter-as-of-yet stories with a high word count because I find I don't have the motivation to read the whole thing. Unless, of course, it is extremely well written. And the fact that I read to the end of this chapter proves that.
Basically, in a very long-winded way, I'm trying to say, I love this story and I would seriously like to see an update!
3MoonbuggYes, please do update this story!
In all honesty, for the first part I was wondering if it actually was going to have anything to do with Harry Potter - I thought you might as well have changed Lily's name and posted it as original fiction - it's certainly good enough!
I like the new slant on things you've given the story - setting it in World War Two and totally changing the backgrounds of the (two) characters we know of. It's really interesting!
I also love reading of Lily's mischief - I'm a fan of Marauder-era characters, and there's never enough on Lily! But this seems exactly the way she would think and behave.
You also have a fantastic writing style - I'm usually one to steer clear of one-shots/one-chapter-as-of-yet stories with a high word count because I find I don't have the motivation to read the whole thing. Unless, of course, it is extremely well written. And the fact that I read to the end of this chapter proves that.
Basically, in a very long-winded way, I'm trying to say, I love this story and I would seriously like to see an update!
1/10/2006 c1 blueberry
i hope you plan on updating soon cause i love your story!
i hope you plan on updating soon cause i love your story!
1/8/2006 c1 dana
Very good. Please update as soon as you can!
Very good. Please update as soon as you can!
1/6/2006 c1 katie valentine
heyy@. ..its me! ahaha. ..well. ..its off to a good start!. ..u write soo well. .. so yeah..update soon yeah. ..u soo rock! ..
heyy@. ..its me! ahaha. ..well. ..its off to a good start!. ..u write soo well. .. so yeah..update soon yeah. ..u soo rock! ..
12/29/2005 c1 juliannos
O... interesting. I love the idea of setting it during WW2. I never seen a story like this before. I also really like Irish Butterfly.
Sister Agatha is so funny. The image of an angry nun has always made me laugh for some reason...
You decribe things really well, just enough so that it's not overboard but still you can see the picture. That's one I need to work on.
Very good chapter, and (as everyone does) I hope you update soon!
~Regina
O... interesting. I love the idea of setting it during WW2. I never seen a story like this before. I also really like Irish Butterfly.
Sister Agatha is so funny. The image of an angry nun has always made me laugh for some reason...
You decribe things really well, just enough so that it's not overboard but still you can see the picture. That's one I need to work on.
Very good chapter, and (as everyone does) I hope you update soon!
~Regina