for Petal in the Rain12/23/2005 c1 LilyNJamesforever
hey great plot i really like it! keep it up!
hey great plot i really like it! keep it up!
12/21/2005 c1 bree
this sucks!
"fly me to the moon"
rulz
this sucks!
"fly me to the moon"
rulz
12/21/2005 c1 Loose flame
This is interesting, to be sure, however, I hope you continue with 'Fly me to the moon'. This one is intriguing in the way in which you have made Lily and her perspective, though I thought it would have been better if Roxanne had accompanied her to Jame's party. But then i suppose it would not have given the same effect for lily's firt taste of freedom as she would be doing it on her own, therefore more daring and exciting. Oh well. Dont stop updating ur other fic, update soon!
This is interesting, to be sure, however, I hope you continue with 'Fly me to the moon'. This one is intriguing in the way in which you have made Lily and her perspective, though I thought it would have been better if Roxanne had accompanied her to Jame's party. But then i suppose it would not have given the same effect for lily's firt taste of freedom as she would be doing it on her own, therefore more daring and exciting. Oh well. Dont stop updating ur other fic, update soon!
12/19/2005 c1 esther
interesting intro, really reminded me of a few novels that i've read. i can't wait for james' entry to the story. nah, ur stories r never total failures! though i admit that 'fly me to the moon' is still my favourite among the three, among all james n lily fics that i've read even! so i hope that working on various stories wouldn't consume too much of ur time n energy to stop u from updating individual story in time. oh, n u're good in making up villains, hehe.. i so wanna throttle the insane nun n that bitch with the thorny arse myself ;) kudos!
interesting intro, really reminded me of a few novels that i've read. i can't wait for james' entry to the story. nah, ur stories r never total failures! though i admit that 'fly me to the moon' is still my favourite among the three, among all james n lily fics that i've read even! so i hope that working on various stories wouldn't consume too much of ur time n energy to stop u from updating individual story in time. oh, n u're good in making up villains, hehe.. i so wanna throttle the insane nun n that bitch with the thorny arse myself ;) kudos!
12/17/2005 c1 carrie longerfoot
ho please! you have got to be joking!
"fly me to the moon" is 10 times better then this story- and 20 times better then Irish Butterfly!
i say you keep with fly me to the moon. it's the best.
ho please! you have got to be joking!
"fly me to the moon" is 10 times better then this story- and 20 times better then Irish Butterfly!
i say you keep with fly me to the moon. it's the best.
12/17/2005 c1 lobi1canobi
hey omg love the plotline! please update soon! question though, is there no magic in the story?
hey omg love the plotline! please update soon! question though, is there no magic in the story?
12/14/2005 c1 
3infiniteternity
(runs around cheering) what an interesting chapter this has turned out to be! Please do continue with the story as it has been most promising and thank you for the chance to read a beautiful piece of work.
I absolutly love lily's character! (squeals) yay! Update
3infiniteternity(runs around cheering) what an interesting chapter this has turned out to be! Please do continue with the story as it has been most promising and thank you for the chance to read a beautiful piece of work.
I absolutly love lily's character! (squeals) yay! Update
12/14/2005 c1 Crazy4PotterMen
I like it! I never post comments, so take this as a great compliment and write more!
I like it! I never post comments, so take this as a great compliment and write more!
12/14/2005 c1 watersprite87
Very interesting! I really want to see where u take this story...update soon!
Very interesting! I really want to see where u take this story...update soon!
12/14/2005 c1 4The Evil Eggplant
I. Absolutely. LOVE IT! Wouldn't it be funny if James was bored to death and stuff, like Char in Ella Enchanted? Have you ever read that book? You should.
4The Evil EggplantI. Absolutely. LOVE IT! Wouldn't it be funny if James was bored to death and stuff, like Char in Ella Enchanted? Have you ever read that book? You should.
12/14/2005 c1 Dreamfire205
This is a really, really good story. Very well written. Does the title relate to the story at all? I love how lily is a rule breaker/rebelious. Lily thought that Lord Potter was old! *laugh* If i were in Lily's place i would think so to n i would also think that he was an arrogant jerk! Update soon! So long as u keep writing, I'll keep reviewing.
Dreamfire205
This is a really, really good story. Very well written. Does the title relate to the story at all? I love how lily is a rule breaker/rebelious. Lily thought that Lord Potter was old! *laugh* If i were in Lily's place i would think so to n i would also think that he was an arrogant jerk! Update soon! So long as u keep writing, I'll keep reviewing.
Dreamfire205