for Wolf of the Stars12/10/2015 c5 Starshima
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW INU&KOU 4EEVVEERR!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW INU&KOU 4EEVVEERR!
3/26/2015 c5 Starshima
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW INU&KOU 4EEVVEERR!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW INU&KOU 4EEVVEERR!
7/31/2013 c5 Jodac
Your story wasn't too bad. Overall, I'd say that it was fairly enjoyable. The plot, dialogue, and lemon made it fun and interesting. One of my favorite things was the way you titled the chapters after the Chinese zodiac symbols; it was definitely an original concept and very interesting to see. However, I do have a few criticisms for you.
Firstly, though I typically don't mind first-person stories, I feel that lemons typically tend to work better in the third person because you get a balanced amount of passion and emotion from both characters. However, in the lemon (and the rest of the story, as well), you jumped back and forth between Inuyasha and Koga's first-person POV's quite often. It just got a little overwhelming at times, is what I'm basically getting at.
Also, your spelling wasn't too bad overall, but your punctuation and placement could use some touching up. It wasn't too bad, but I'd just look over it some more and try to work on it some.
Lastly, I was slightly bothered when Koga, uh... "went down" on Inuyasha, because of the emoticons you added in. That's fine if you use them before or after the story in your A/N, but during the story, I feel that it just takes away from the seriousness and romantic aspects of what you're trying to portray if you put them in there.
Overall, though, not bad at all! Unfortunately, since you last updated this almost 8 years ago, I imagine you won't be continuing it... sigh. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Your story wasn't too bad. Overall, I'd say that it was fairly enjoyable. The plot, dialogue, and lemon made it fun and interesting. One of my favorite things was the way you titled the chapters after the Chinese zodiac symbols; it was definitely an original concept and very interesting to see. However, I do have a few criticisms for you.
Firstly, though I typically don't mind first-person stories, I feel that lemons typically tend to work better in the third person because you get a balanced amount of passion and emotion from both characters. However, in the lemon (and the rest of the story, as well), you jumped back and forth between Inuyasha and Koga's first-person POV's quite often. It just got a little overwhelming at times, is what I'm basically getting at.
Also, your spelling wasn't too bad overall, but your punctuation and placement could use some touching up. It wasn't too bad, but I'd just look over it some more and try to work on it some.
Lastly, I was slightly bothered when Koga, uh... "went down" on Inuyasha, because of the emoticons you added in. That's fine if you use them before or after the story in your A/N, but during the story, I feel that it just takes away from the seriousness and romantic aspects of what you're trying to portray if you put them in there.
Overall, though, not bad at all! Unfortunately, since you last updated this almost 8 years ago, I imagine you won't be continuing it... sigh. Anyway, keep up the good work!
8/16/2009 c5 Animefanboi101
The next one neds to come out soon *puppy dog eyes* great job I loved them all they were great
The next one neds to come out soon *puppy dog eyes* great job I loved them all they were great
12/9/2006 c5 Nozomi-dono
that was beautiful i really cant wait for your next chapter yes indeed some good stuff;)
that was beautiful i really cant wait for your next chapter yes indeed some good stuff;)
6/7/2006 c5 Catherine
wicked story... i neva knew thats wot leo meant (and the others of course but leo is tha only 1 i really wont2 know)
up date plz! :D nd remember 2 mention me! lol
wicked story... i neva knew thats wot leo meant (and the others of course but leo is tha only 1 i really wont2 know)
up date plz! :D nd remember 2 mention me! lol
5/28/2006 c5 
23Hitomi Uraya
So beautiful... I hope to see the next chapter soon because I can't get enough of this! It's so wonderful! Update when you have the chance!
23Hitomi UrayaSo beautiful... I hope to see the next chapter soon because I can't get enough of this! It's so wonderful! Update when you have the chance!
3/8/2006 c5 8Kurai-Tenshi of Doom
hallo again luv! Liked this too, for my first Inu/Koga ficcie, although I will admit my heart still beats for Cloud/Sephie-san. But this is cute, I like it ^^ Do go on.
Love!, Kiss!,
Kurai-Tenshi-san ^^;
8Kurai-Tenshi of Doomhallo again luv! Liked this too, for my first Inu/Koga ficcie, although I will admit my heart still beats for Cloud/Sephie-san. But this is cute, I like it ^^ Do go on.
Love!, Kiss!,
Kurai-Tenshi-san ^^;
2/28/2006 c5 StrangeLittleInvader
the poem at the end was beautyful and what you said:never forget to believe that no matter who you are or where you are in the world- someone loves you! i needto tell that to my friend she needs love more then anyone i know . great story it was good very good.
the poem at the end was beautyful and what you said:never forget to believe that no matter who you are or where you are in the world- someone loves you! i needto tell that to my friend she needs love more then anyone i know . great story it was good very good.
2/14/2006 c5 41Maruading Storyteller
I'm glad they love each other that much. I just hope that everything turns out okay with them!
41Maruading StorytellerI'm glad they love each other that much. I just hope that everything turns out okay with them!