12/23/2012 c3 250CampionSayn
Sa!
This is sad, but especially thoughtful in more ways than one. I should have liked to read more of this if you hadn't have completed it, but keep in mind when I say that it was good. Very good and made me think. Huzzah, to you. :)
Sa!
This is sad, but especially thoughtful in more ways than one. I should have liked to read more of this if you hadn't have completed it, but keep in mind when I say that it was good. Very good and made me think. Huzzah, to you. :)
7/20/2010 c3 Tonda
The whole story warms my heart.
Sadly i´m not able to articulate so good in english, because I´m german.
But i desperately have to leave a comment.
You write unbelievable honest and full of emotion.
You story goes deep under the skin...Yeah.
This story is profund.
I´m total in love with this stil. You do his slang wonderful!
Really.
This story is perfect.
You are really dont shallow...
Thank you for this wodnerful piece.
The whole story warms my heart.
Sadly i´m not able to articulate so good in english, because I´m german.
But i desperately have to leave a comment.
You write unbelievable honest and full of emotion.
You story goes deep under the skin...Yeah.
This story is profund.
I´m total in love with this stil. You do his slang wonderful!
Really.
This story is perfect.
You are really dont shallow...
Thank you for this wodnerful piece.
10/3/2009 c3 18Dotskip317
HO. LY CRAP.
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O_O
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THAT WAS FREAKIN' AMAZING! You wrote him PERFECTLY! HOW DID YOU DO THAT?
:D
Loved it!
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HO. LY CRAP.
...
O_O
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THAT WAS FREAKIN' AMAZING! You wrote him PERFECTLY! HOW DID YOU DO THAT?
:D
Loved it!
ss
\-/)
6/16/2007 c1 59foxfire222
dude
i totaly get where your coming from
my parents are not exactly like that but we have problems like my dad always being away or working late or drinking with his friend instead of being with us even on my birthday
my school life is basicaly the same to noone wants to hang out with me and everyone blams me for crap i didnt do
but anyway this is so cool because i can totaly relate yo
dude
i totaly get where your coming from
my parents are not exactly like that but we have problems like my dad always being away or working late or drinking with his friend instead of being with us even on my birthday
my school life is basicaly the same to noone wants to hang out with me and everyone blams me for crap i didnt do
but anyway this is so cool because i can totaly relate yo
5/5/2007 c3 25Prieda Solo
Lovely.
I really can't think of anything else to say, there's no constructive crit I can give at all.
So I'll just say thanks for a great story. This thing needs more reviews :)
Lovely.
I really can't think of anything else to say, there's no constructive crit I can give at all.
So I'll just say thanks for a great story. This thing needs more reviews :)
5/5/2007 c2 Prieda Solo
i got so excited when I saw there was another chapter.
This is probably the best Toad-type thing I've read (and I am so glad I'm reading it after I posted my toad story, because it is slightly similar to this, and if i'd read this first I wouldn't have been morally able to post mine cuz it's very similar)
Wonderful language, wonderful characters.
i got so excited when I saw there was another chapter.
This is probably the best Toad-type thing I've read (and I am so glad I'm reading it after I posted my toad story, because it is slightly similar to this, and if i'd read this first I wouldn't have been morally able to post mine cuz it's very similar)
Wonderful language, wonderful characters.
5/5/2007 c1 Prieda Solo
Amazing. I really liked the bit where you went through all the brotherhood one by one and sorta spun them around and shot a differrent colour light on them and said 'so here they are, tell me they're not just the same as the X-men'
Very believable too. And great characters :)
Amazing. I really liked the bit where you went through all the brotherhood one by one and sorta spun them around and shot a differrent colour light on them and said 'so here they are, tell me they're not just the same as the X-men'
Very believable too. And great characters :)
11/14/2006 c1 Kristen Hughes
i love toad/todd and i think he's a total hotty. that's basicaly the only reason i watch the show. people at school call me a x freak or the toad lover, and i don't care. i have basicaly every thing i could get my hands on that involves toad. i know that most people don't understand him, but i do. if it was up to me i would marry him. i just can't get enough x men evolution. anyway, that story thing was so good that you need to make another one, or get the peole to put it back on tv. or they could be nice and let me meet my favorite actor noel fisher. i don't think that anything should be changed. the wirter who ever he/her is they have a great mind that it seems that he/her was toad himself. rock on toad!
your biggest toad fan,
Kristen Hughes
i love toad/todd and i think he's a total hotty. that's basicaly the only reason i watch the show. people at school call me a x freak or the toad lover, and i don't care. i have basicaly every thing i could get my hands on that involves toad. i know that most people don't understand him, but i do. if it was up to me i would marry him. i just can't get enough x men evolution. anyway, that story thing was so good that you need to make another one, or get the peole to put it back on tv. or they could be nice and let me meet my favorite actor noel fisher. i don't think that anything should be changed. the wirter who ever he/her is they have a great mind that it seems that he/her was toad himself. rock on toad!
your biggest toad fan,
Kristen Hughes
4/17/2006 c1 4crystalwish
I really enjoyed this story. It is a very good perspective on the Brotherhood. I think it is one of the better stories about why the brotherhood are the way they are. The dialogue is a little bit confusing but it is more genuine.
I really enjoyed this story. It is a very good perspective on the Brotherhood. I think it is one of the better stories about why the brotherhood are the way they are. The dialogue is a little bit confusing but it is more genuine.