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2/11/2006 c2 842072
I like this. They both haven't even met each other and the already hate one another. I wonder if love will blossom between the two? keep on writing
2/11/2006 c2 calla123
it's spelled sokka and it's fire lord ozai... the story is ok... please update soon...
2/11/2006 c2 k
love it so far... i think zuko is older than zula in the show...i think i read somewhere that shes sokkas age...but either way i love it...hope u continue soon
2/10/2006 c2 QuizAdams
Oh…what next?
1/30/2006 c1 xdissolving
Please update! You have a very good plot idea going there.
12/28/2005 c1 9Shrugs
Oh gosh, this story is fantastic so far. I'm in love with it, I can't wait for more!
12/26/2005 c1 7RainPoet
im revewing for my own story...go me!
12/24/2005 c1 18SweetStories11
hm... nice start, keep it going! It's Sokka though, one a lol

-Monika-
12/24/2005 c1 gina
A really intense and interesting plot, but you're rushing the story. There's no details and when I read it, it sounds like "blahbitty blah blah blah" in my head. You're spelling is atrocious- you used the wrong word for "write" . You used "right" instead. Get an editor or something because the story has potential but you're not using it
12/24/2005 c1 QuizAdams
Very nice storyline, though there are three things that you should know. 1) It's the Fire Nation, not Fire Tribe. 2) Sokka's name is spelled Sokka, not Sakka. 3) Ozai is the Fire Lord's name. I just thought that you may want to know that for future reference (I'm not trying to pick on you or anything, just giving you some info). Anyway, you're doing a great job; keep it up! ;)
12/24/2005 c1 pirateninjelover
kool story! keep writing!
12/24/2005 c1 21Zukoscute2
this will be interesting... update soon, plz!
12/23/2005 c1 6animiegirl02
good chapter, im sure my friend would love this story.
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