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5/6/2006 c25 1Doppleganger33
Another masterful addition, you are really doing wonders with your story. You take the TMNT2003 universe and enrich it with your description and your take on characters. I'm really liking how you are adapting season 4 elements and giving them your own spin on them. Poor Leonardo he continually defies Splinter's warnings, advice, threats, he is acting so childish and stupid. *shakes head*

Um maybe you could post a link on your profile? You mention all these Japanese words. They sound really cool but...I'm not understanding them. I'm guessing "kocha koi" means "en guarde" or something along those lines? Is there any online resource I could look into for these words?
5/6/2006 c25 10Machias Banshee
AH!

Leo's gonna Snap!

Oh, I Loved this chapter. Everything about it just glued me to my chair! Everything going on with Leo and Splinter is just as I would have imagined stuff happening "off-camera".

And Kocha Koi is definitely my favorite new Japanese Phrase... :D

So glad to see this updated...
5/6/2006 c25 2greshunkai
at last! Cynlee has added to "Ghosts"! beautiful writing, greatly enjoyed. thank you.
5/6/2006 c25 53Jessiy Landroz
Leo is so deep-sixed, *palms face*, man, he must've really been out of it, to let such things take controle of him like that! and all this time, I thought Raph was the hothead! did they switch roles or something? cause one thing I'm sure of, Sensei is starting to lose faith in Leo, and it's only getting worse...

witht eh story focusing on Leo and Mike now, I wonder how Karai, Baker and Vector are doing... but most importantly, Baxter! Bishop isn't back from the dead now, is he? maybe they have the body, but they don't have the soul! it's- madness!
4/22/2006 c24 8Kunoichi Nazena
"“Yes, you are still alive,” Splinter sternly replied, as the giant crocodile resumed his seat. “For the moment. Do such a stupid thing again, and you will NOT be alive! I will NOT have my family and friends put at risk of discovery because of you!”

Now Baker’s eyes ripped away from Leatherhead to take in the seriousness of the Rat’s face even as his mind registered the depth of the threat. He saw that Splinter meant it."

WOW! Do you really think Splinter would be able to kill coldblooded and unarmed, helpless men? Even to protect his family? I mean, the NY sewers are old, there do no actual plans exist and Baxter does not exactly know where the turtles live. They could bring him to the other end of the city and let him run, he would never find the way back to the Lair. But it´s a very thrilling thought, I even got an idea for an oneshot about this question. Let´s see. I´m waiting for the next chapter! Maybe you will have another answer then me.
4/18/2006 c24 32lost-katana
You write LH and Honeycutt well, Cynlee! Awesome job!

Can't wait to see what comes next! Please update soon!
4/17/2006 c24 203BubblyShell22
Great chapter. Loved the last line the best. LOL. Update soon. This story rocks. And that episode on Saturday was messed up. I hope we get answers in September. It sucks that we have to wait that long though. How will I make it through this? The agony! The agony! Oh, and can you visit my Ninja Turtles forum called "The Lair"? I think you might like it. Hope you had a happy Easter!

The Bubbly One,

Shell
4/17/2006 c24 Nothingtoseehere123456789
BWAHAHAHAHAHA, that line in the end, it's so Professor Honeycutt, I was almost literally rolling on the floor when I read that.

Great chapter as usual :-)
4/16/2006 c24 2greshunkai
o frabjous day! cynlee has added to "Ghosts"!better and better.enjoyable read. thank you!
4/16/2006 c24 Christy
Wonderful, another chapter! Great work. Poor Donny can't seem to make soup. I hope you continue to update. I was afraid that you had given up on this story. Thanks for another great chapter Cynlee.
4/16/2006 c24 1Doppleganger33
Poor poor Baker. Okay so Leatherhead didn't kill him but he's gonna be staying with him. Uh-oh why does this remind me of Beauty and the Beast? No I don't think you're gonna slash them (though that'd be kind of an interesting pairing XD). I do hope Baker is able to NOT annoy Leatherhead with his scientific curiousity. You've really created a gem of an original character with him. I'm glad the guys aren't fighting to be HIS mate. ;)

And I really REALLY want to know where Leatherhead gets those clothes. It must be April. I'm betting she puts them together for him. Would she even know how to sew? O_o
4/16/2006 c24 53Jessiy Landroz
poor, poor guy, his world is pinning so fast, he can barely root his feet to the floor hard enough, to keep himself standing up and steady! that's the problem with things that just keep piling and piling over and over.. I wonder if LH can keep his cool, if Baker mouthes off the wrong thing...
4/6/2006 c23 32lost-katana
Yikes! what's gonna happen next?

Please update soon!
4/6/2006 c23 39Ryan Phelan
Great chapter, Cyn! I loved the scene with Don and Mikey, and that Leatherhead cliffhanger leaves me begging for more! I always love your potent mix of humor, action and suspense.
4/3/2006 c23 203BubblyShell22
Whoa! Awesome chapter, Cyn. I'm liking this. I hope Leatherhead doesn't eat him. Update soon. This story rocks.

And that ep this week rocked, too. I liked it. Can't wait to see this Saturday's ep.

The Bubbly One,

Shell
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