for Ghosts4/2/2006 c23 RAPHAELFAN02
I haven't reviewed this story much, but I have been following this and I am truly enjoying this story. This chapter I especially like the part where Raph is like "were not little kids" and then Splinters like "you my little kids" I thought that line was so cute. And then Don trying to get the phone from Mikey, and Leo and Don trying to get away from Splinters punishments, those were great parts also.
And then there's LH, I so wasn't expecting him to lose his cool, seeing that when you had it as Mikey saying the conversation he was undercontrol, but then you switched it to LH, and everything kinda went down hill from there. But talk about a way to leave a cliffy, we don't know if he shut his mouth just to shut it or if the Baker guy was still there. Oh well just have to wait till next chapter (sighs).
Great job on this story, as well as your other stories keep up the good work. Till next chapter XD.
I haven't reviewed this story much, but I have been following this and I am truly enjoying this story. This chapter I especially like the part where Raph is like "were not little kids" and then Splinters like "you my little kids" I thought that line was so cute. And then Don trying to get the phone from Mikey, and Leo and Don trying to get away from Splinters punishments, those were great parts also.
And then there's LH, I so wasn't expecting him to lose his cool, seeing that when you had it as Mikey saying the conversation he was undercontrol, but then you switched it to LH, and everything kinda went down hill from there. But talk about a way to leave a cliffy, we don't know if he shut his mouth just to shut it or if the Baker guy was still there. Oh well just have to wait till next chapter (sighs).
Great job on this story, as well as your other stories keep up the good work. Till next chapter XD.
4/1/2006 c23 Splinter
AH! Cliffhangar! How cruel and unusual! No fair no fair...*sounds much like Leo now* Speaking of..
Poor Leo Kun. All he wanted to do was go out by himself. Mean old Splinter for throwing water on Leo and Don San's plans.
LOL cute MIke. Even cold and slow he can still play keep away from Don. Very reminiscent of the 2nd movie where Don did the same to him. Serves him right. Whohoo! Update soon
AH! Cliffhangar! How cruel and unusual! No fair no fair...*sounds much like Leo now* Speaking of..
Poor Leo Kun. All he wanted to do was go out by himself. Mean old Splinter for throwing water on Leo and Don San's plans.
LOL cute MIke. Even cold and slow he can still play keep away from Don. Very reminiscent of the 2nd movie where Don did the same to him. Serves him right. Whohoo! Update soon
4/1/2006 c23 
1Doppleganger33
Holy! Leatherhead don't! This will be leaving me on the edge of my seat until you update!
1Doppleganger33Holy! Leatherhead don't! This will be leaving me on the edge of my seat until you update!
4/1/2006 c23 53Jessiy Landroz
Oo;
um, byebye Dr. Baker? I sure hope not, cause I think half the story would be tossed out the window if that happened! and what of Victor?
53Jessiy LandrozOo;
um, byebye Dr. Baker? I sure hope not, cause I think half the story would be tossed out the window if that happened! and what of Victor?
3/14/2006 c22 Splinter
DARN
*Deep breath* ok
OH NO! Mikes a turtle cicle again. back on pennicilin for those two. Poor Raph. He dont like needles huh?
LOL MR Bubble. Mike should put something in the bathtub to annoy Raph anyway.
Tsk tsk DOnnie. How many times must I tell you to put your toys away so "guests" wont plan an escape. GO GEt HIM LEO!
Damn. He got away. Better luck next time
DARN
*Deep breath* ok
OH NO! Mikes a turtle cicle again. back on pennicilin for those two. Poor Raph. He dont like needles huh?
LOL MR Bubble. Mike should put something in the bathtub to annoy Raph anyway.
Tsk tsk DOnnie. How many times must I tell you to put your toys away so "guests" wont plan an escape. GO GEt HIM LEO!
Damn. He got away. Better luck next time
3/13/2006 c22 203BubblyShell22
Wow! Awesome chapter. Uh-oh! Baker escaped! Not good. Let's hope he doesn't do anything rash. Update soon. This story totally rocks.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Wow! Awesome chapter. Uh-oh! Baker escaped! Not good. Let's hope he doesn't do anything rash. Update soon. This story totally rocks.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
3/12/2006 c22 1Doppleganger33
Another great addition, to this great story. It's funny how you take such an ordinary thing like winter and use it to weave your tale. Reading this and reading your description it was funny but it kind of "takes you there".
I liked how you mentioned all those secondary characters in Mikey's delirium gone (but not forgotten), Triceratons have always been a fave of mine yes even Gruel. So it was a welcome treat to hear mention of them.
1Doppleganger33Another great addition, to this great story. It's funny how you take such an ordinary thing like winter and use it to weave your tale. Reading this and reading your description it was funny but it kind of "takes you there".
I liked how you mentioned all those secondary characters in Mikey's delirium gone (but not forgotten), Triceratons have always been a fave of mine yes even Gruel. So it was a welcome treat to hear mention of them.
3/12/2006 c22 53Jessiy Landroz
O_O; oh dear, Raph and Mike are turtle-popsickles, and Bakers on the loose? wonderful.. but I thought Don turned everything off before, seeing Splinter told him he was grounded with no internet or lab.. or did he? *confused*
anyway, I take it Raph and Mike are gonna bundle up and share a little brotherly moment, hm? *puppyeyes* it's a plot bunny! take it, it's cute! really!
53Jessiy LandrozO_O; oh dear, Raph and Mike are turtle-popsickles, and Bakers on the loose? wonderful.. but I thought Don turned everything off before, seeing Splinter told him he was grounded with no internet or lab.. or did he? *confused*
anyway, I take it Raph and Mike are gonna bundle up and share a little brotherly moment, hm? *puppyeyes* it's a plot bunny! take it, it's cute! really!
2/22/2006 c21 32lost-katana
ROTFL How the HELL does Splinter do that?
Man, that memory of when Splinter made Raph and Leo fight with the bokken was excellent! I should've done something like that in Actions Unknown.
Good job! Please update soon!
32lost-katanaROTFL How the HELL does Splinter do that?
Man, that memory of when Splinter made Raph and Leo fight with the bokken was excellent! I should've done something like that in Actions Unknown.
Good job! Please update soon!
2/22/2006 c21 Nothingtoseehere123456789
Haha, Donny busted. Poor guy ;-) but he should know better, parents always know.
Great chapter, Hope you update soon :-D
Haha, Donny busted. Poor guy ;-) but he should know better, parents always know.
Great chapter, Hope you update soon :-D
2/22/2006 c21 203BubblyShell22
Awesome chapter. Yeah, I can see Splinter doing this and knowing that Donnie was spying. Update soon. You are doing an awesome job on this. My next chapter for my story should be up on Tuesday. I will be working on another paper that is due next Thursday tomorrow. I got the other paper done thank goodness. I just haven't gotten it back yet. Keep on writing!
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Awesome chapter. Yeah, I can see Splinter doing this and knowing that Donnie was spying. Update soon. You are doing an awesome job on this. My next chapter for my story should be up on Tuesday. I will be working on another paper that is due next Thursday tomorrow. I got the other paper done thank goodness. I just haven't gotten it back yet. Keep on writing!
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/21/2006 c21 1Doppleganger33
I've been falling behind...still have to review the latest "Wee Tale" but let me just say "you rock!". This chapter was great. It had Donnie, it had Baker, and it had more Leo/Splinter "mad"ness. Man oh man is Leo angry. You write it accurately but also differently to what they are doing in Season 4. For one thing, Karai hasn't trashed the lair, hopefully she WON'T either but these last few weeks have been great.
I think that you writing so similarly to Season 4 is a good thing. It shows us that you take this story along in a logical progression as they have. So if you decide to trash the lair I wouldn't think it's "unoriginal" not in the unique way you spin things.
Nice touch with having Baker put on those bandages. See? Similar yet different.
1Doppleganger33I've been falling behind...still have to review the latest "Wee Tale" but let me just say "you rock!". This chapter was great. It had Donnie, it had Baker, and it had more Leo/Splinter "mad"ness. Man oh man is Leo angry. You write it accurately but also differently to what they are doing in Season 4. For one thing, Karai hasn't trashed the lair, hopefully she WON'T either but these last few weeks have been great.
I think that you writing so similarly to Season 4 is a good thing. It shows us that you take this story along in a logical progression as they have. So if you decide to trash the lair I wouldn't think it's "unoriginal" not in the unique way you spin things.
Nice touch with having Baker put on those bandages. See? Similar yet different.
2/21/2006 c21 53Jessiy Landroz
LOL! poor, poor Donny! you should have shut that thing off when you had the chance! XD now you're stick in this with noplace to go!
well... at Leo was smart enough not to fight Splinter, things would have gotten messy if he did, and though spicy pancakes sound "oh boy..." as a breakfast meal, Raph and Mike must have some really strong stomachs!
I'm worried, though, if Baker was scared enough to try and escape the lair, how do we know he wont try that again?
53Jessiy LandrozLOL! poor, poor Donny! you should have shut that thing off when you had the chance! XD now you're stick in this with noplace to go!
well... at Leo was smart enough not to fight Splinter, things would have gotten messy if he did, and though spicy pancakes sound "oh boy..." as a breakfast meal, Raph and Mike must have some really strong stomachs!
I'm worried, though, if Baker was scared enough to try and escape the lair, how do we know he wont try that again?
2/10/2006 c20 32lost-katana
Angry Leo is always interesting...
Ah. Mikey's so sweet.
(laughs) Raph needs some culture in his life! C'mon, get in touch with your artsy side, Raphy!
Good job! Please update soon!
32lost-katanaAngry Leo is always interesting...
Ah. Mikey's so sweet.
(laughs) Raph needs some culture in his life! C'mon, get in touch with your artsy side, Raphy!
Good job! Please update soon!