for Ghosts2/10/2006 c20 Nothingtoseehere123456789
Woops, I forgot to make a review in the SS forum, so I'm doing a review here.
Yet another great chapter, I can see Splinter and Leo are going to have to work out few issues there.
And aw Mikey misses Zog as well as Victor.
Good work as always.
Woops, I forgot to make a review in the SS forum, so I'm doing a review here.
Yet another great chapter, I can see Splinter and Leo are going to have to work out few issues there.
And aw Mikey misses Zog as well as Victor.
Good work as always.
2/9/2006 c20 
1Doppleganger33
Hmm interesting change you brought about with focusing on each character's perspectives for this chapter. I thought Michaelangelo including Zog into his memorial was touching.
1Doppleganger33Hmm interesting change you brought about with focusing on each character's perspectives for this chapter. I thought Michaelangelo including Zog into his memorial was touching.
2/9/2006 c20 203BubblyShell22
Great chapter. I really like this. You've really captured Leo's changed mood. Though by this next episode I think it might go away. Update soon. You totally rock on this. And I hear ya on the school thing. I'm gonna work on a paper today that's due next week. I hope I can get it done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Great chapter. I really like this. You've really captured Leo's changed mood. Though by this next episode I think it might go away. Update soon. You totally rock on this. And I hear ya on the school thing. I'm gonna work on a paper today that's due next week. I hope I can get it done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/9/2006 c20 greshunkai
one more little appreciation comment:Leo loses it and DONNY takes him down! yee-hah! a well conceived and appropriate incident in this dramatic chapter.(that'll teach him!)thank you again for a good 'read'.
one more little appreciation comment:Leo loses it and DONNY takes him down! yee-hah! a well conceived and appropriate incident in this dramatic chapter.(that'll teach him!)thank you again for a good 'read'.
2/8/2006 c20 53Jessiy Landroz
well it seems so far, all is well... that goes down the well, huh? I wonder how deep the thing is..
I feel sorry for Baker, but true, why DIDN'T he go to the police? did Bishop leave someone in the PD to track him too or something? maybe Baker knew that if he went to the police, Bishop would grab him before he even reached the front steps? hmm, yeah, that's probably it...
Hun and Karai seem to be getting along nicely, huhuhuhu~
53Jessiy Landrozwell it seems so far, all is well... that goes down the well, huh? I wonder how deep the thing is..
I feel sorry for Baker, but true, why DIDN'T he go to the police? did Bishop leave someone in the PD to track him too or something? maybe Baker knew that if he went to the police, Bishop would grab him before he even reached the front steps? hmm, yeah, that's probably it...
Hun and Karai seem to be getting along nicely, huhuhuhu~
2/8/2006 c20 10Machias Banshee
Hehehe... I'm with Terran on this one. I wanna see the big showdown with Splinter and Leo! :D The tension between those two is GREAT.
I"m sure you'll be getting Lots of attention with your Karai portrayal, especially with this past week (and Upcoming) Episodes.
Her glorified view of her father is interesting. I know people usually have something like that (except for those with bad relations with their parents). It makes me wonder if she'll ever turn around and understand the Other side.
What else... oh yes.
*steals Terran/Splinter's Popcorn and runs away*
UPDATE SOON!
10Machias BansheeHehehe... I'm with Terran on this one. I wanna see the big showdown with Splinter and Leo! :D The tension between those two is GREAT.
I"m sure you'll be getting Lots of attention with your Karai portrayal, especially with this past week (and Upcoming) Episodes.
Her glorified view of her father is interesting. I know people usually have something like that (except for those with bad relations with their parents). It makes me wonder if she'll ever turn around and understand the Other side.
What else... oh yes.
*steals Terran/Splinter's Popcorn and runs away*
UPDATE SOON!
2/6/2006 c19 203BubblyShell22
Great chapter. So full of emotion. Update soon. This story rocks.
Yes, I too was weeping for the guys. Not only that, but I weep for Leo as well. Poor Turtle! He's gonna be so devastated once he finds out the news. I'm gonna post my next chapter today since I couldn't do it on my birthday because it wasn't working. Check it out later today.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Great chapter. So full of emotion. Update soon. This story rocks.
Yes, I too was weeping for the guys. Not only that, but I weep for Leo as well. Poor Turtle! He's gonna be so devastated once he finds out the news. I'm gonna post my next chapter today since I couldn't do it on my birthday because it wasn't working. Check it out later today.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/5/2006 c19 1Doppleganger33
Oh so I take it you have seen the recent episode. Yeah silly question. I think it's only natural that your storyline and theirs are so similar (don't blame yourself) a lot of what has been going on is logically what WOULD go on, regardless of how much we didn't want it or did.
Though I would say that your version of Karai and the shows are a bit different. Yours is not QUITE incompetent as she acts rash and has been lax in her training (and that of her Foot). The show's? Not so. They are definitely up to par with the turtles.
I truly hope Leatherhead will be able to control himself when he eventually does see Dr. Baker.
1Doppleganger33Oh so I take it you have seen the recent episode. Yeah silly question. I think it's only natural that your storyline and theirs are so similar (don't blame yourself) a lot of what has been going on is logically what WOULD go on, regardless of how much we didn't want it or did.
Though I would say that your version of Karai and the shows are a bit different. Yours is not QUITE incompetent as she acts rash and has been lax in her training (and that of her Foot). The show's? Not so. They are definitely up to par with the turtles.
I truly hope Leatherhead will be able to control himself when he eventually does see Dr. Baker.
2/5/2006 c19 greshunkai
yes, i too was taken aback by 2-4 episode-that beautiful home of theirs- totaled! at least, that's what appears to have happened. have been going around talking to myself & trying to figure out just how the creators of the cartoon are going to pull this one off..and on sunday, i find that cynlee has updated "ghosts"(a whole new chapter!)life is good again! thank you!
yes, i too was taken aback by 2-4 episode-that beautiful home of theirs- totaled! at least, that's what appears to have happened. have been going around talking to myself & trying to figure out just how the creators of the cartoon are going to pull this one off..and on sunday, i find that cynlee has updated "ghosts"(a whole new chapter!)life is good again! thank you!
2/5/2006 c19 53Jessiy Landroz
hmm, after all the turmoil poor Baker went through, I sure hope Leatherhead would stay in check, the croc might snap at the sight of the poor man, and Baker would probably freeze in the spot at the sight of the croc...
Leo needs an attitude change, either that or an entense workout in the dojo until he cant even stand! (or a spanking, your choice~) XD
53Jessiy Landrozhmm, after all the turmoil poor Baker went through, I sure hope Leatherhead would stay in check, the croc might snap at the sight of the poor man, and Baker would probably freeze in the spot at the sight of the croc...
Leo needs an attitude change, either that or an entense workout in the dojo until he cant even stand! (or a spanking, your choice~) XD
1/30/2006 c18 Jessiy Landroz
Leo is turning dark, Karai is already dark, while Don is being awful sarcastic, Mike is getting more easily irritated, and Sensei will have to have his blood pressure checked; but Raph (temper-wise) is almost the only one getting the better half in this picture... kind of ironic, no?
Leo is turning dark, Karai is already dark, while Don is being awful sarcastic, Mike is getting more easily irritated, and Sensei will have to have his blood pressure checked; but Raph (temper-wise) is almost the only one getting the better half in this picture... kind of ironic, no?
1/30/2006 c17 Jessiy Landroz
hmm, the thought of Karai and Leo swordplaying neck-to-neck isn't so pleasnt, I just think getting Leo all wounded up to this 'meeting' is a good idea...
hmm, the thought of Karai and Leo swordplaying neck-to-neck isn't so pleasnt, I just think getting Leo all wounded up to this 'meeting' is a good idea...
1/30/2006 c16 Jessiy Landroz
oh boy, things arent getting pretty, and what's gotten into Leo! he used to be so much calmer, more colected! now he snapped, I guess months of confinment does that to you, huh... that and having a super overprotective father to boost, ow~ not pretty...
oh boy, things arent getting pretty, and what's gotten into Leo! he used to be so much calmer, more colected! now he snapped, I guess months of confinment does that to you, huh... that and having a super overprotective father to boost, ow~ not pretty...
1/30/2006 c15 Jessiy Landroz
Mike still cant get over Vic, and the rats are secretly ransaking the city when no one knows... and BOY was Leo MAD! when Raph asked for popcorn, I half expected him to explode or something...
Mike still cant get over Vic, and the rats are secretly ransaking the city when no one knows... and BOY was Leo MAD! when Raph asked for popcorn, I half expected him to explode or something...
1/30/2006 c14 Jessiy Landroz
aww~ poor Mikey! I cant believe Leo and Raph scared him senselss like that! SO EVIL! the big meanies! XD
aww~ poor Mikey! I cant believe Leo and Raph scared him senselss like that! SO EVIL! the big meanies! XD