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53Jessiy Landroz
well Mike is okay, that's good, now I just have to worry is Sensei is going to confine him with Leo and Raph, too...
53Jessiy Landrozwell Mike is okay, that's good, now I just have to worry is Sensei is going to confine him with Leo and Raph, too...
1/30/2006 c12 Jessiy Landroz
well, I think Mike might get himself in a bit of a fix after this one, I just hope he wont freak out, or else Sensei would have a third turtle to take care of... *indiffretly* horay?
well, I think Mike might get himself in a bit of a fix after this one, I just hope he wont freak out, or else Sensei would have a third turtle to take care of... *indiffretly* horay?
1/30/2006 c11 Jessiy Landroz
Ow! LOL! poor Leo, you should have seen that one coming, you are SO in rouble now, XD ah, at least he lost track of the swarm of rats, right? ... right?
Ow! LOL! poor Leo, you should have seen that one coming, you are SO in rouble now, XD ah, at least he lost track of the swarm of rats, right? ... right?
1/30/2006 c10 Jessiy Landroz
yeah, I'm a ghost and I'm here to haunt you, so start screaming already...
poor Mike, I guess he might start doubting Don when he told him that Vic was dead, huh.. I'm surpsied that seeing Mike triggered the 'pain' memory, I was half expecting Vic to remember...
yeah, I'm a ghost and I'm here to haunt you, so start screaming already...
poor Mike, I guess he might start doubting Don when he told him that Vic was dead, huh.. I'm surpsied that seeing Mike triggered the 'pain' memory, I was half expecting Vic to remember...
1/30/2006 c9 Jessiy Landroz
hmm, Karai isn't happy, Sensei isn't happy, but Don is more than just happy... *shudders* somehow, I'm seeing a whole new angle about Don, it's- scary, to say the least...
hmm, Karai isn't happy, Sensei isn't happy, but Don is more than just happy... *shudders* somehow, I'm seeing a whole new angle about Don, it's- scary, to say the least...
1/30/2006 c8 Jessiy Landroz
Rat king is in, and turtle and croc are out... I guess Vic doesn't remember Mike yet, huh? either he hadn't, or he had and he's having problems, I dunno...
Rat king is in, and turtle and croc are out... I guess Vic doesn't remember Mike yet, huh? either he hadn't, or he had and he's having problems, I dunno...
1/30/2006 c7 Jessiy Landroz
Man~ talk about stiff! Sensei isn't laying off witht he 'prison guard' thing, is he? gees, and I'm STILL at chapter 7! OMG, this isnt looking too good...
Man~ talk about stiff! Sensei isn't laying off witht he 'prison guard' thing, is he? gees, and I'm STILL at chapter 7! OMG, this isnt looking too good...
1/30/2006 c6 Jessiy Landroz
LMAO! poor, poor guys! man, it SO SUCKS to be in thier shoes right now, *shakes head* Splinter is enjoying every second of this, isn't he? you~ you~ you wicked, sly little rat you! XD
LMAO! poor, poor guys! man, it SO SUCKS to be in thier shoes right now, *shakes head* Splinter is enjoying every second of this, isn't he? you~ you~ you wicked, sly little rat you! XD
1/30/2006 c5 Jessiy Landroz
I have the feeling Don's in for a joyride soon, I just don't know if 'I' would like it... and the Rat king/Vic is coming around? it doesn't explain where he got the wrapps, though...
I have the feeling Don's in for a joyride soon, I just don't know if 'I' would like it... and the Rat king/Vic is coming around? it doesn't explain where he got the wrapps, though...
1/30/2006 c4 Jessiy Landroz
I'm Back~ and LMAO! Boy are those two in trouble, they're in for it now! XD XD XD LOL!
aww, C'mon Sensei, all they wanted was some fresh air! was that so much to ask?
I'm Back~ and LMAO! Boy are those two in trouble, they're in for it now! XD XD XD LOL!
aww, C'mon Sensei, all they wanted was some fresh air! was that so much to ask?
1/30/2006 c18 203BubblyShell22
Awesome chapter! This is getting very good. I could very well see this happening in the show. Update soon. You are an awesome writer.
Also, I wanted to let you know that my story "A Warrior's Pain" was awarded the Honorable Mention in this year's Fan Fiction Awards. If you voted for my story, thanks. I just wanted to let you know about that. Oh, and I got my paper done for English on Thursday and it's due Tuesday. I'm ahead of most of the students who didn't start theirs yet. Update this story soon. It's my birthday on Thursday, and I'm excited. Maybe you could update as a present to me.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Awesome chapter! This is getting very good. I could very well see this happening in the show. Update soon. You are an awesome writer.
Also, I wanted to let you know that my story "A Warrior's Pain" was awarded the Honorable Mention in this year's Fan Fiction Awards. If you voted for my story, thanks. I just wanted to let you know about that. Oh, and I got my paper done for English on Thursday and it's due Tuesday. I'm ahead of most of the students who didn't start theirs yet. Update this story soon. It's my birthday on Thursday, and I'm excited. Maybe you could update as a present to me.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
1/29/2006 c3 53Jessiy Landroz
well now, I see that Vic may not be dead- yet... I wonder how long Sensei is going to put up with Leo and Raph, they sound like they're gonna explode and ruch out of the lair any minute now!
ah, I'm tired, and I think my eyes are crossing! I'll read the rest some time later, hopefully ;3
53Jessiy Landrozwell now, I see that Vic may not be dead- yet... I wonder how long Sensei is going to put up with Leo and Raph, they sound like they're gonna explode and ruch out of the lair any minute now!
ah, I'm tired, and I think my eyes are crossing! I'll read the rest some time later, hopefully ;3
1/29/2006 c2 Jessiy Landroz
well, that went well.. poor Raph never was the type to be picked in a room for too long, and I think Leo is feeling pretty much the same...
is it me, or had Don- been changing? I dunno, he's acting a little more- I dunno, merry? smug? I can't put my finger on it, there is just something- wrong, about him...
well, that went well.. poor Raph never was the type to be picked in a room for too long, and I think Leo is feeling pretty much the same...
is it me, or had Don- been changing? I dunno, he's acting a little more- I dunno, merry? smug? I can't put my finger on it, there is just something- wrong, about him...
1/29/2006 c18 Kunoichi Nazena
Just read Chapter 18. It´s really a fantastic fic! I look every three days if there is a new chapter up. Splinters behaviour with Leos and Raphs injurys is really well described. Good work! Go on! I´m looking forward to every new chapter! Please, make it as long as possible!
Just read Chapter 18. It´s really a fantastic fic! I look every three days if there is a new chapter up. Splinters behaviour with Leos and Raphs injurys is really well described. Good work! Go on! I´m looking forward to every new chapter! Please, make it as long as possible!
1/29/2006 c1 Jessiy Landroz
I never got around to reading this, and now, I see why, for it looks like there is a story before this one that I missed... I'll go back and see if I can find it, then come back to this one...
anyway, before I start flooding your email, ,I'd just take a moment to say that I love this chapter! XD Leo and Raph getting smacked on the tail when they try to escape, guess dear old dad knows all the tricks in their books, huh? they'd better think of something new if they wanna get out of this one~ hehe~
I never got around to reading this, and now, I see why, for it looks like there is a story before this one that I missed... I'll go back and see if I can find it, then come back to this one...
anyway, before I start flooding your email, ,I'd just take a moment to say that I love this chapter! XD Leo and Raph getting smacked on the tail when they try to escape, guess dear old dad knows all the tricks in their books, huh? they'd better think of something new if they wanna get out of this one~ hehe~