for Ghosts3/24/2012 c25 
203BubblyShell22
Ah, Leo never learns does he? I understand his obsession with Karai, and I still say it's more than just wanting to know her plans. He loves her and wants her to be what she'll never be. You can just see it. And now he's mouthed off to Splinter again and got his tail handed to him. That should show him.
Poor Mikey. He still wants to believe Victor is alive though the facts are there for them to see. I can see Mikey doing something like this to prove that there's no chance Victor is alive. I just love this story so much. It's really a good one and keeps your readers on their toes. Good job.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Ah, Leo never learns does he? I understand his obsession with Karai, and I still say it's more than just wanting to know her plans. He loves her and wants her to be what she'll never be. You can just see it. And now he's mouthed off to Splinter again and got his tail handed to him. That should show him.
Poor Mikey. He still wants to believe Victor is alive though the facts are there for them to see. I can see Mikey doing something like this to prove that there's no chance Victor is alive. I just love this story so much. It's really a good one and keeps your readers on their toes. Good job.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/21/2012 c15 BubblyShell22
Wow. Leo doesn't know when to keep his mouth shut, does he? He should've just accepted Mikey's punishment and left it at that. But not Leo. He just can't do that.
I liked the description of the warehouse and the boys who went there. I can just imagine the rats feasting on Angelo's skin and scaring him. That was a good part to the story. It definitely added an imagery I can't get out of my head.
Poor Mikey! He just doesn't want to accept that Victor's gone, does he? I know he wants to believe Victor's alive, but maybe this memorial will benefit him anyway. Even though Victor is alive, maybe the memorial will cleanse his spirit. I just feel so badly for Mikey here. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Wow. Leo doesn't know when to keep his mouth shut, does he? He should've just accepted Mikey's punishment and left it at that. But not Leo. He just can't do that.
I liked the description of the warehouse and the boys who went there. I can just imagine the rats feasting on Angelo's skin and scaring him. That was a good part to the story. It definitely added an imagery I can't get out of my head.
Poor Mikey! He just doesn't want to accept that Victor's gone, does he? I know he wants to believe Victor's alive, but maybe this memorial will benefit him anyway. Even though Victor is alive, maybe the memorial will cleanse his spirit. I just feel so badly for Mikey here. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/19/2012 c12 BubblyShell22
Ah, that was a good chapter. I really liked it and how Leo had to have a pillow for his behind. Serves him right for disobeying Splinter like that. Poor Mikey feeling so sick. That has to be hard for him to take. And why would he even go out like that when he's sick? He should know better than that.
I really like Mikey's thought process here. He doesn't know whether what he's seeing is real or not, yet he wants to believe that Victor is truly dead. How sad.
Oooh, and now he's really seen Victor! Too bad he passed out before he could talk to him. That should teach him not to go out when he's sick like that. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Ah, that was a good chapter. I really liked it and how Leo had to have a pillow for his behind. Serves him right for disobeying Splinter like that. Poor Mikey feeling so sick. That has to be hard for him to take. And why would he even go out like that when he's sick? He should know better than that.
I really like Mikey's thought process here. He doesn't know whether what he's seeing is real or not, yet he wants to believe that Victor is truly dead. How sad.
Oooh, and now he's really seen Victor! Too bad he passed out before he could talk to him. That should teach him not to go out when he's sick like that. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/19/2012 c9 BubblyShell22
Ooooh, interesting chapter. Yeah, Splinter can be tough when he wants to be, and I can see him spanking his sons if he sees fit to do so. I loved the little line about popcorn from Don and that he hugged Splinter and promised to keep an eye on his brothers. That was so sweet of him.
Ah, Victor wants to live in the Now. I can see that, though I feel sorry for him having to endure what he has.
And now Karai really wants revenge. She really is a nasty piece of work having that guy get beaten and then killed. Not good. Nicely done on this as always. I swear, I just love this little tale you have spun.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Ooooh, interesting chapter. Yeah, Splinter can be tough when he wants to be, and I can see him spanking his sons if he sees fit to do so. I loved the little line about popcorn from Don and that he hugged Splinter and promised to keep an eye on his brothers. That was so sweet of him.
Ah, Victor wants to live in the Now. I can see that, though I feel sorry for him having to endure what he has.
And now Karai really wants revenge. She really is a nasty piece of work having that guy get beaten and then killed. Not good. Nicely done on this as always. I swear, I just love this little tale you have spun.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/19/2012 c8 BubblyShell22
Wow. That was great. I really like Dr. Baker and can see why he's in fear of being discovered. He just seems to be the type of guy who was in the wrong place at the wrong time. I can see why he'd repent of being with Bishop. But then again, that was the only job he had, and he knew it was important for him to stay there even if he didn't like what they were doing.
Ah, Leo and Raph. I liked the punishments they came up with though I'm surprised Splinter let them off that easily. I thought for sure he was going to do something else to them.
I really like Mikey's bond with Leatherhead. Both of them seem like really good friends, and I like that Mikey can have someone to confide in. As for what they saw, it's no secret that it's creepy to say the least. At first when I read about the human I thought of the Rat King, but I know it's Victor. I just do. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Wow. That was great. I really like Dr. Baker and can see why he's in fear of being discovered. He just seems to be the type of guy who was in the wrong place at the wrong time. I can see why he'd repent of being with Bishop. But then again, that was the only job he had, and he knew it was important for him to stay there even if he didn't like what they were doing.
Ah, Leo and Raph. I liked the punishments they came up with though I'm surprised Splinter let them off that easily. I thought for sure he was going to do something else to them.
I really like Mikey's bond with Leatherhead. Both of them seem like really good friends, and I like that Mikey can have someone to confide in. As for what they saw, it's no secret that it's creepy to say the least. At first when I read about the human I thought of the Rat King, but I know it's Victor. I just do. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/19/2012 c7 BubblyShell22
Awesome job on this chapter. So, the Turtles were able to battle the Foot, but they needed saving anyway. And now they're going to be punished. Yep, it doesn't look good for those two. As for Karai, I can see that she really wants revenge on the guys, though I think she should just let it go. After all, anger is not a good thing. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Awesome job on this chapter. So, the Turtles were able to battle the Foot, but they needed saving anyway. And now they're going to be punished. Yep, it doesn't look good for those two. As for Karai, I can see that she really wants revenge on the guys, though I think she should just let it go. After all, anger is not a good thing. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/18/2012 c6 BubblyShell22
Awesome chapter as always. I liked the beginning and how Karai thinks of her father. I guess she does view him as more of a father than someone who is evil and did evil things. It's hard for her to see that because she feels that without him, she wouldn't be where she is today. It makes sense though I don't agree with it.
Ah, Hun. Yeah, he's gone up in the world. And now he wants to see if Karai will clone Shredder? Ugh. I wouldn't want that.
Yay! Leo and Raph finally beat their brothers. Now they get to go topside.
Oh man, parole officer? Is he going to make them take random drug tests, too? I can just picture that. Ah, the boys can't get a break, can they? I just laughed out loud when Splinter made the parole officer comment. It just was hilarious. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Awesome chapter as always. I liked the beginning and how Karai thinks of her father. I guess she does view him as more of a father than someone who is evil and did evil things. It's hard for her to see that because she feels that without him, she wouldn't be where she is today. It makes sense though I don't agree with it.
Ah, Hun. Yeah, he's gone up in the world. And now he wants to see if Karai will clone Shredder? Ugh. I wouldn't want that.
Yay! Leo and Raph finally beat their brothers. Now they get to go topside.
Oh man, parole officer? Is he going to make them take random drug tests, too? I can just picture that. Ah, the boys can't get a break, can they? I just laughed out loud when Splinter made the parole officer comment. It just was hilarious. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/18/2012 c5 BubblyShell22
Oh, man, that was hilarious, Cyn. I swear, Don and Mikey love their popcorn and their show. Yeah, I bet those words were worth thirty flips. They're all good ideas though. Ooooh, Leo swore at Sensei. Not good. You do not swear at your father no matter how much you want to get out. That will only allow him to keep you IN.
Ah, poor Victor. He just can't remember his other life. I feel so sorry for him like this. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Oh, man, that was hilarious, Cyn. I swear, Don and Mikey love their popcorn and their show. Yeah, I bet those words were worth thirty flips. They're all good ideas though. Ooooh, Leo swore at Sensei. Not good. You do not swear at your father no matter how much you want to get out. That will only allow him to keep you IN.
Ah, poor Victor. He just can't remember his other life. I feel so sorry for him like this. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/13/2012 c4 BubblyShell22
Oh, man, Leo and Raph got busted again. I swear, they just can't win, can they?
As for Mikey's planning the funeral, I think it's a nice gesture. I think Splinter's right in that Mikey should do something for Victor that he feels is special. After all, as Splinter said, there is no set way to do a memorial anyway as they are done differently for everyone. But I liked the talk they had even though Leo was eavesdropping. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Oh, man, Leo and Raph got busted again. I swear, they just can't win, can they?
As for Mikey's planning the funeral, I think it's a nice gesture. I think Splinter's right in that Mikey should do something for Victor that he feels is special. After all, as Splinter said, there is no set way to do a memorial anyway as they are done differently for everyone. But I liked the talk they had even though Leo was eavesdropping. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/13/2012 c3 BubblyShell22
Cool chapter. Ah, I love how you make Stockman so pompous. He really is a jerk sometimes. I guess this woman wants to revive Bishop. Let's just hope it never comes to that. I don't think that would be a good idea.
Ah, Splinter, ever the observant parent. I think they have been holding back and that maybe they have some hidden fear of losing control and hurting their brothers. It definitely makes sense to me.
Poor Mikey wanting to know if Victor died. I think Don said that to give Mikey closure, but I doubt it'll work.
Ah, and it looks like Victor did survive. Now the question is, how did he survive that explosion. Did the rats carry him off, or did he crawl away from there on his own? Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Cool chapter. Ah, I love how you make Stockman so pompous. He really is a jerk sometimes. I guess this woman wants to revive Bishop. Let's just hope it never comes to that. I don't think that would be a good idea.
Ah, Splinter, ever the observant parent. I think they have been holding back and that maybe they have some hidden fear of losing control and hurting their brothers. It definitely makes sense to me.
Poor Mikey wanting to know if Victor died. I think Don said that to give Mikey closure, but I doubt it'll work.
Ah, and it looks like Victor did survive. Now the question is, how did he survive that explosion. Did the rats carry him off, or did he crawl away from there on his own? Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/13/2012 c2 BubblyShell22
Wow. Awesome job on this. Ah, those poor Turtles still have to stay below ground. I feel sorry for them, but I can understand why Splinter feels the way he does about this. He almost lost his sons, and he doesn't intend to do so again. I really like Dr. Baker as well. He seems like a really neat OC. Great job on this chapter.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Wow. Awesome job on this. Ah, those poor Turtles still have to stay below ground. I feel sorry for them, but I can understand why Splinter feels the way he does about this. He almost lost his sons, and he doesn't intend to do so again. I really like Dr. Baker as well. He seems like a really neat OC. Great job on this chapter.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/13/2012 c1 BubblyShell22
Ah, so the sequel starts. I can see Mikey still feeling this way about Victor and not wanting to let go. I agree that it wasn't fair for Victor to end up as he did, though I know there is more in store for our Turtles.
Ah, those two just can't stop tormenting Splinter can they? I laughed at Don's suggestion. Such a sneaky little brother, isn't he? Heck, I wouldn't want to take those medicines either. Great job on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Ah, so the sequel starts. I can see Mikey still feeling this way about Victor and not wanting to let go. I agree that it wasn't fair for Victor to end up as he did, though I know there is more in store for our Turtles.
Ah, those two just can't stop tormenting Splinter can they? I laughed at Don's suggestion. Such a sneaky little brother, isn't he? Heck, I wouldn't want to take those medicines either. Great job on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/31/2011 c39 15LilNinjaWolf
Very nicely written. It's both sad and touching with Mikey's obsession about Victor. I'm very curious about Grant's plans. I hope you'll continue this sometime.
15LilNinjaWolfVery nicely written. It's both sad and touching with Mikey's obsession about Victor. I'm very curious about Grant's plans. I hope you'll continue this sometime.
1/4/2010 c39 4jadedolphin
This is really good. I hope that you are still planning on finishing this story, I'm looking forward to seeing how it will end!
4jadedolphinThis is really good. I hope that you are still planning on finishing this story, I'm looking forward to seeing how it will end!
2/12/2009 c39 25Agent66
So I know it's been a year, but...I finally caught up! It took like the entire week to read through the whole Aftermath trilogy, but i did it, starting all the way from Stealthy Stories until I got here.
So...please finish? I know it's hard, believe me! I actually just finished something that sat for like seven years! But I did it and I'm begging...pleading for you to finish! Please! I need to what what Grant's crazy idea is and why she's all stalkerish towards Bishop and whether or not the Rat King is Victor and if Leo does have the hots for Karai (I have also suspected this)...
I need to know! Please! Please? If I give you a cookie? A hug? Both?
25Agent66So I know it's been a year, but...I finally caught up! It took like the entire week to read through the whole Aftermath trilogy, but i did it, starting all the way from Stealthy Stories until I got here.
So...please finish? I know it's hard, believe me! I actually just finished something that sat for like seven years! But I did it and I'm begging...pleading for you to finish! Please! I need to what what Grant's crazy idea is and why she's all stalkerish towards Bishop and whether or not the Rat King is Victor and if Leo does have the hots for Karai (I have also suspected this)...
I need to know! Please! Please? If I give you a cookie? A hug? Both?