12/29/2005 c3 38CharlieCaller
Great story here! Is the backstory of the events from the episodes in the new show, series 3? (That made NO sense.) I haven't seen those episodes yet (curses to Jetix TV and stopping showing TMNT when I get home from my Sky-lacking University!) but having read your story and thinking that they are from future episodes, I am so looking forward to them, having read this great story so far!

However if I'm barking up the wrong tree here and if this is actually from a previous story you've written, (and I did have a look, just in case, but couldn't find anything) then point me in the right direction!

And having written about two paragraphs of meaninglessness... something about the story! Well, poor Leo and Raph, having to beat their two younger brothers in battle when previous to their injuries, they'd have been able to. (At least it's better than trying to defeat Splinter at sparring - like trying to get blood from a stone, that'd be.) Great interpretation of Mikey's selfless and caring side, wanting a memorial for Victor. And Don cracked me up when Splinter had to hush him, when he was cheering on Leo so he could win the bet!

Great writing, and looking forward to more soon! (Crikey - this has gotta be one of the longest reviews I've ever written!)

12/29/2005 c3 36Splinter
Ok, take 2

I gotta admit, its understandable that Leo and Raph would be a bit upset after the blood bath with Bishop. They are afraid of themselves and what they did. SOunds like something that Splinter might need to further address.

Although, I can see it in my head.

*Raph and Leo stand victorious. They beat their brothers in a session. They are ready for their reward. To go topside. Splinter appears. "Yes you are both well...now, you are grounded"* LOL, something that the old rat would do :)

oh more mystery and intrigue. Baxter! Not as evil as Bishop, slightly annoying, but I like how he's written. Doesnt make me want to throw up.

*dances* Good fic good fic. Want more !

12/28/2005 c1 21Dierdre
Cynlee, I love you for this. I love you for making a sequel to the wonderful work that was Aftermath! *Twirls around in her chair in a state of giddy joy*

I really enjoyed reading what you have written so far, and I'm intrigued by Dr. Baker. I can't wait to see what you have in store of us with this fic! So... more soon, please? *Bambi eyes*

12/28/2005 c2 1Doppleganger33
Quite an interesting development you got there. I can see that you are going to continue with that tangent you had discussed about the doctor and the Purple Dragons looking for him. I hope Leatherhead finds him (so perhaps the doctor could somehow make amends to him). And that Michaelangelo's memorial is one to remember. One note though.

Might you consider doing a joint one for Zog as well? Maybe one of the guys could suggest it. After all he too gave his life for the turtles. He deserves on too. :)

12/28/2005 c2 36Splinter
Oops. Raph Didnt beat Mikey. Oops. Leo didnt beat anyone.

SP: I told you so...((heehee))

Poor boys. Run Raph Run while you can.

*sings* Born free...free as the...shit. Splinter. *tuck tail between your legs and head home.*

LOL lecture with furry feet. He's just lucky Splinter didnt use his walking stick again on the way home.

uh oh...a pissy Leo is never a good Leo. Yes, Splinter-San. Just let them go and kill them upon their return. No harm no foul. Unless they end up dead or sick while topside.

AW...Mikey called him dad. And SPlinter wants to help. At least ONE of his sons isnt an ungrateful, spoiled, sullen turtle.

UH oh...mystery and intrigue. *insert spooky music here*

Done with chapter 3 yet?

12/28/2005 c1 14Mewfem
Great story Cyn as always. When I read your stories I feel a great passion to read more of your stories.