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9/16/2007 c38 thelevy
very exciting to see an update!

good chapter, can't wait for more.
9/16/2007 c38 11Tristripe
::squeals:: omg im so happy that this fic has not been abandoned! and mikey leo...oldest and youngest...i love it when they get into fights ^_^ ::cackles:: but it seems like the rats are on the move to go after their king...i have the feeling that things on this rescue mission are gonna go insane:

1) mikey, once splinter is free would disappear to find victor

or

2) the rats appear and all hell breaks loose everywhere

or it might be both 1 & 2...and yay...i wonder though if raph and don saw the split lip? and i wonder what splinter would have to say of what went on in that moment between the brothers...

and is karai really, really loosing it?

please please please dont abandon this fic. last year i started reading this fic and it made me fall in love with TMNT and i got into the fandom and the new toon cause of it. i am forever Ghosts fan!

tri
9/15/2007 c38 53Jessiy Landroz
*spazzes, blinks, rubs her eyes and then stares at the chapter* Holy- it took me a while, and a second read, to remember what happened in the earlier chapters, and fitting the pieces together I'm glad this update cleared up so many questions! XD;

I do kinda worry about Karai's mental health, though; she's so obsessed with getting even with Leo she feels a little loopy, (more in a mad-scintest kinda way,) especially the part with her nattering on poor Sensei's head, (bet he would have wanted to tell her to shut up, huh?) and Leo is on his last thread, though what hapened between him and Mike stung...

During this story, it's almost as if the RaphLeo and DonMike thing slowly converted into a RaphDon and LEoMike thing, but where Don and Mike were friends, it instead turned into a DonRaph, and where Raph and Leo would pretty much roar at each other, it's Mike in Raph's shoes...

I'm worried, are the four ever coming our of this story with their bonds still connected? There is just so much tension, misunderstandings and- hard feelings? I dont know, I just dont like how the bonds are crumbling with KArai's hammer... D:
8/21/2007 c37 T420000
Aw man you havnt updated in forever. this is so good i read it in one shot, i hope you havnt given up on it.
7/7/2007 c7 4boogalaga
I'm afraid I'm only review so I can find and continue reading your story later. I promise to review it at the end.
5/23/2007 c37 2greshunkai
so... you're writing an epic...no need apologize for length.

that's what epics do..they go on and on and on...

as an aftermath to your wonderful 'Aftermath'

it's doing just fine... much appreciated. thank you.
5/13/2007 c37 thelevy
YAY an update!

can't wait for more

seems like there'll be some action very soon. awesome
5/13/2007 c37 1Doppleganger33
Yay! Awesome update! I really laughed when Mikey was trying to remember the lyrics to "Born to Wild". That happens to me A LOT and it's great to see you including little real life touches like that. Err...I don't know what else to say. I'm crossing my fingers that Karai isn't able to do anything to Splinter nor Hun to Victor. If I think of something else I'll PM. :P
5/13/2007 c36 Doppleganger33
Hm, for some reason didn't alert me when you put this chapter up. Ah well, I see you've updated with Chapter 37 so that means I'll be having an extra dose of fanfic today. ^_^ As usual the details really help out in bringing the story alive. For example, when Karai discovers who Splinter is you can really feel the anger and hatred she is feeling for the "nezumi". You had me on the edge of my seat seeing how she's captured Baker and Splinter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
5/13/2007 c37 53Jessiy Landroz
*spazes at the update*

I had to laugh at Don's comment abotu how pretty much none of Mike would make it back home IF Raph had gone to fetch him; but the comment Mike made when you said 'bag of tricks' had me wondering if he snagged Don's bag on his way... where'd he get that bag, anyway? If it was mentioned in the previous chapters, I don't remember, guess it's time I reread to remember what happened in the 'previous episodes' huh? XP

Oh, and why do I have the feeling Leo is gonna drag Mike home and pay not an ear to his 'Victor' mumbojumbo? Frankly, Mike's as good as dead and I think he could have stood a better chance against the rats ._.; ... then again, he might stand even a better chance against a certian Rat I could think of.

Oh, and Hun? Is that guilt we sense? You aint turning good now from being spoiled with the rishes now, are ya? Or are the PD really starting to turn into a family to you now?
5/13/2007 c37 73Lady Katana4544
Wow this another awesome chapter of your story, Cynlee. Wonderful job that you've done so far with this story.

Hopefully the turtles can get their master and friends back from the Foot Clan and Karai.

Good job and update soon!
5/3/2007 c16 TheBandit
I just realized that this story is really really long. Silly me. This is going to take a while... oh well, Cheers! I love all of it.
5/3/2007 c15 TheBandit
I'm a bit behind in reading this. Oh well, I wanted to review anyway. Of course Splinter didn't punish Mikey, Mikey is his father's baby. He can't punish the baby... and when you think about it, Leo went to that building first, so he kind of gave Mikey the idea... so it's Leo's fault. I really liked this part, I like the whole thing, but this part tickled me. :)
4/17/2007 c36 23Gohanzgirl
Im so loving this! Its one of the best TMNT fics out here truly wonderful job i can't wait to find out what happens!
4/17/2007 c36 8GoddessLaughs
What an amazing story! I love your portrayal of bond the turtles share as well as the parental aspect of Splinter. Your OC's are uniqe and intriguing, your characterizations are nothing short of perfect, and your plot is utterly fantastic. Thank you for this wonderful fic and I hope to read more of it soon!
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