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203BubblyShell22
Yay! Cyn's back! I missed you, girl! Great chapter. Poor Mikey still wants to believe Victor's alive, doesn't he? Poor guy! I hope things get better for him soon. Update when you get the chance. If you update after next week, I won't be able to review because I'll be on Christmas break. But I'll try to catch up when I come back in January.
Also, it's dead week at school so I have a lot to do. I have finals next week and then I'm done for the semester. I won't be taking math next semester because they don't offer it at Ivy Tech in the spring, but they might in the fall. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for that. Well, talk to you later. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Yay! Cyn's back! I missed you, girl! Great chapter. Poor Mikey still wants to believe Victor's alive, doesn't he? Poor guy! I hope things get better for him soon. Update when you get the chance. If you update after next week, I won't be able to review because I'll be on Christmas break. But I'll try to catch up when I come back in January.
Also, it's dead week at school so I have a lot to do. I have finals next week and then I'm done for the semester. I won't be taking math next semester because they don't offer it at Ivy Tech in the spring, but they might in the fall. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for that. Well, talk to you later. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
The Bubbly One,
Shell
12/3/2006 c34 53Jessiy Landroz
*nearly gets a heart attack from realizing the story had been updated!*
Well I love this chapter, a hint of Drama with everything going nice, quiet and smooth, bot the guys and the baddies side~
Mikey finally did the memorial survice for Victor, even if he is convinced the guy sin't dead, but since no one believes him, why bother to explain? Since he doesn't have any solid proof Victor is alive, no one would believe him...
In the beginning with Leo and Baker, the poor dude just wants a little fresh air, so I take he was a good little boy when he was little and never got detention/grounded (or in this case, under-grounded) for trying to sneak out of the lair. Leo's reasoning might have helped, but for how long would it last before the poor guy snaps?
And I don't get the part where Leo said Raph was 'emotional' cause from what I gathered, Raph was 'hunting' down the doctors trail to bring him back, so what was emotional about that? Unless Leo was refering to something else?
Which brings in the smooch Mike gave Raph, ROFLS! I half expected him to smack Mike, but I guess he was too 'horrofied' and busy rubbing the 'ickyness' away to do it, xD haha!
Now, why do I get a Hun-Karai feel here? And is Chaplin working for her in the shadowes like how Baxter is doing? That doctor lady can try to revive Bishop, but she aint no god, I just don't see it happening. A soul doesn't directly return to the body after death, so what is she planning?
53Jessiy Landroz*nearly gets a heart attack from realizing the story had been updated!*
Well I love this chapter, a hint of Drama with everything going nice, quiet and smooth, bot the guys and the baddies side~
Mikey finally did the memorial survice for Victor, even if he is convinced the guy sin't dead, but since no one believes him, why bother to explain? Since he doesn't have any solid proof Victor is alive, no one would believe him...
In the beginning with Leo and Baker, the poor dude just wants a little fresh air, so I take he was a good little boy when he was little and never got detention/grounded (or in this case, under-grounded) for trying to sneak out of the lair. Leo's reasoning might have helped, but for how long would it last before the poor guy snaps?
And I don't get the part where Leo said Raph was 'emotional' cause from what I gathered, Raph was 'hunting' down the doctors trail to bring him back, so what was emotional about that? Unless Leo was refering to something else?
Which brings in the smooch Mike gave Raph, ROFLS! I half expected him to smack Mike, but I guess he was too 'horrofied' and busy rubbing the 'ickyness' away to do it, xD haha!
Now, why do I get a Hun-Karai feel here? And is Chaplin working for her in the shadowes like how Baxter is doing? That doctor lady can try to revive Bishop, but she aint no god, I just don't see it happening. A soul doesn't directly return to the body after death, so what is she planning?
12/3/2006 c34 11Tristripe
whoho...finally the ceremony is over, and mikey's worries have not been put to rest...actually he's more sure that his friend is alive. now what will be his actions...this im looking forward to!
Im jumping in excitement, waititng anxiously for the next chapters! i love this story so much, and its a joy whenever its updated!
keep up your creative genius and i will forever be a happy woman ^_^
tri
11Tristripewhoho...finally the ceremony is over, and mikey's worries have not been put to rest...actually he's more sure that his friend is alive. now what will be his actions...this im looking forward to!
Im jumping in excitement, waititng anxiously for the next chapters! i love this story so much, and its a joy whenever its updated!
keep up your creative genius and i will forever be a happy woman ^_^
tri
12/3/2006 c34 38CharlieCaller
Ah, the memorial service was nice! I really like the way you present the interaction between Mikey and Raph - it's subtle but ever-present. Well, Mike's got an inkling about Victor's fate that won't go away, and I got a feeling he's going to act on it. As usual great writing, and can't wait to read more soon, I love it!
38CharlieCallerAh, the memorial service was nice! I really like the way you present the interaction between Mikey and Raph - it's subtle but ever-present. Well, Mike's got an inkling about Victor's fate that won't go away, and I got a feeling he's going to act on it. As usual great writing, and can't wait to read more soon, I love it!
10/11/2006 c33 203BubblyShell22
Wow, Cyn! What can I say? Great chapter as usual! I loved Mikey's line about the bathroom chat. "Hey, Bob, I don't remember having corn last night for dinner!" LOL! That's just too funny. Uh oh! Leo's been a bad Turtle. I think Splinter might just give him an old-fashioned butt whipping. Am I right? Anyway, update soon. I've missed you and your awesome stories!
Okay, now I want to talk about Fast Forward. I'm planning on joining Mikey's forum soon, but I wanted to tell you what I think about it. Here are the reasons I don't like Fast Forward:
1. Constable Biggles-Seriously, can someone just shoot this guy? I can't stand him! There are some cops like Chief Wiggum (The Simpsons) and Officer Barbrady (South Park) that I can tolerate. But this guy is just plain annoying. He's so lame. I really wish we didn't have him in the series. He does an awful British accent, too. Stewie Griffin does it better. Hm...This gives me an idea for a fan fic.
2. Cody Jones-Okay, at first I liked this guy. I thought that it was cool that they made him intelligent instead of some dumb idiot. But when he said, "It's Ninja Time!" in this Saturday's ep, that killed my admiration for him. Which brings me to my next point.
3. "It's Ninja Time!"-Okay, at first I didn't think this line was gonna be too bad, but after hearing it repeatedly, it has to go. I can't take it anymore. Can they be lamer? Well, yeah they could. Still, this catchphrase sucks and shouldn't be allowed. Ugh!
4. Lame villains-So far, the only promising villain I've seen is Darius. The others just suck. Maybe next week will be better, but I don't know. So far, it doesn't look promising. And now on to the point that disturbs me the most.
5. I HATE HOW THEY ARE PORTRAYING SPLINTER! I mean, he's the Turtles' dad, but they're reducing him to a secondary character status and I hate that. He should be in the end card with the Turtles and Cody, not just the Turtles and Cody. He's part of the story too, but they're pushing him to the side. That sucks! He barely gets any action so far, and he needs to have that. He can fight just as well as his sons. Yeah, that just bugs me.
Well, that's all I've got for that so far. School's going great. I had my first Astronomy test and I was one point away from getting a D. It wasn't as bad as I thought, but the math did lower my grade. Oh well, the tests aren't a huge part of the grade, so I'm not too worried. My other classes are going great, too.
I can't wait to start my third chapter of my sequel to "A Warrior's Pain" but due to school, I may not be able to work on it until the weekend. Then I might have it up next week. I hope I can get it up. I'm having so much fun interpreting Leo's angsty mood from season 4. Could you please review it if you get the time? I loved your feedback on AWP. If you can't review it, it's okay. I just like hearing from you.
Well, I'm done now. Sorry for the lengthy post. I just wanted to vent some of my frustration about the new series. Update soon. Talk to you later!
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Wow, Cyn! What can I say? Great chapter as usual! I loved Mikey's line about the bathroom chat. "Hey, Bob, I don't remember having corn last night for dinner!" LOL! That's just too funny. Uh oh! Leo's been a bad Turtle. I think Splinter might just give him an old-fashioned butt whipping. Am I right? Anyway, update soon. I've missed you and your awesome stories!
Okay, now I want to talk about Fast Forward. I'm planning on joining Mikey's forum soon, but I wanted to tell you what I think about it. Here are the reasons I don't like Fast Forward:
1. Constable Biggles-Seriously, can someone just shoot this guy? I can't stand him! There are some cops like Chief Wiggum (The Simpsons) and Officer Barbrady (South Park) that I can tolerate. But this guy is just plain annoying. He's so lame. I really wish we didn't have him in the series. He does an awful British accent, too. Stewie Griffin does it better. Hm...This gives me an idea for a fan fic.
2. Cody Jones-Okay, at first I liked this guy. I thought that it was cool that they made him intelligent instead of some dumb idiot. But when he said, "It's Ninja Time!" in this Saturday's ep, that killed my admiration for him. Which brings me to my next point.
3. "It's Ninja Time!"-Okay, at first I didn't think this line was gonna be too bad, but after hearing it repeatedly, it has to go. I can't take it anymore. Can they be lamer? Well, yeah they could. Still, this catchphrase sucks and shouldn't be allowed. Ugh!
4. Lame villains-So far, the only promising villain I've seen is Darius. The others just suck. Maybe next week will be better, but I don't know. So far, it doesn't look promising. And now on to the point that disturbs me the most.
5. I HATE HOW THEY ARE PORTRAYING SPLINTER! I mean, he's the Turtles' dad, but they're reducing him to a secondary character status and I hate that. He should be in the end card with the Turtles and Cody, not just the Turtles and Cody. He's part of the story too, but they're pushing him to the side. That sucks! He barely gets any action so far, and he needs to have that. He can fight just as well as his sons. Yeah, that just bugs me.
Well, that's all I've got for that so far. School's going great. I had my first Astronomy test and I was one point away from getting a D. It wasn't as bad as I thought, but the math did lower my grade. Oh well, the tests aren't a huge part of the grade, so I'm not too worried. My other classes are going great, too.
I can't wait to start my third chapter of my sequel to "A Warrior's Pain" but due to school, I may not be able to work on it until the weekend. Then I might have it up next week. I hope I can get it up. I'm having so much fun interpreting Leo's angsty mood from season 4. Could you please review it if you get the time? I loved your feedback on AWP. If you can't review it, it's okay. I just like hearing from you.
Well, I'm done now. Sorry for the lengthy post. I just wanted to vent some of my frustration about the new series. Update soon. Talk to you later!
The Bubbly One,
Shell
10/11/2006 c33 8Kunoichi Nazena
Yes! Fi- nal -ly an update! I had to reread the chapters before, but I really liked it. But I think Splinter becomes pretty unfair. Poor Leonardo has suffered enough and should be allowed to go to every place he want.
Hope he won´t earn even more grounding.
8Kunoichi NazenaYes! Fi- nal -ly an update! I had to reread the chapters before, but I really liked it. But I think Splinter becomes pretty unfair. Poor Leonardo has suffered enough and should be allowed to go to every place he want.
Hope he won´t earn even more grounding.
10/8/2006 c33 2greshunkai
what better way to spend a long, cold Sunday night than rereading ALL of "Ghosts"? and a new chapter, too! thanks, Cynlee.
2greshunkaiwhat better way to spend a long, cold Sunday night than rereading ALL of "Ghosts"? and a new chapter, too! thanks, Cynlee.
10/8/2006 c33 1Doppleganger33
Poor Leatherhead he must be feeling as stupid as his old toon self. :D Well but Baker's a scientist...so I guess he shouldn't feel TOO bad that he got outsmarted.
ROFL I wonder if the guy's listen in on just what the Foot are gossiping in there and not...anything else. Nonono...please...
You have me on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter.
1Doppleganger33Poor Leatherhead he must be feeling as stupid as his old toon self. :D Well but Baker's a scientist...so I guess he shouldn't feel TOO bad that he got outsmarted.
ROFL I wonder if the guy's listen in on just what the Foot are gossiping in there and not...anything else. Nonono...please...
You have me on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter.
10/8/2006 c33 53Jessiy Landroz
I'm starting to feel sorry for Leo, things aren't working out and he's not making it easier for himself with his actions/reactions either... Baker had better know what he's doing, and if Leo did go topside, he wont be breaking any promises cause he wasn't alone, right? XD
if I were Leo, I'd want to beat the bloody pulp out of something right now, or maybe that's just the Raph in me.. *pets Leo*
53Jessiy LandrozI'm starting to feel sorry for Leo, things aren't working out and he's not making it easier for himself with his actions/reactions either... Baker had better know what he's doing, and if Leo did go topside, he wont be breaking any promises cause he wasn't alone, right? XD
if I were Leo, I'd want to beat the bloody pulp out of something right now, or maybe that's just the Raph in me.. *pets Leo*
9/18/2006 c32 11Tristripe
this is awesome. i love mikey in this fic. really really like him. you are one of the few who do him justice. cant wait for more. i am really curious about victor and how this will all boil down.
plus i think splinter is going to develope an ulcer...
and arnt the turtles like 16? what are they doing drinking beer and sake? ::baffled:: just curious.
but yea added this to my fave stories list. its cool. please update soon ^_^
11Tristripethis is awesome. i love mikey in this fic. really really like him. you are one of the few who do him justice. cant wait for more. i am really curious about victor and how this will all boil down.
plus i think splinter is going to develope an ulcer...
and arnt the turtles like 16? what are they doing drinking beer and sake? ::baffled:: just curious.
but yea added this to my fave stories list. its cool. please update soon ^_^
9/11/2006 c32 Nothingtoseehere123456789
Have been a pretty lousy reviewer lately, I'm caught up in work.
Anyway, finally manages to address the latest additions to this story.
Good job, I really like how this story is processing, hehe Mikey stealing beer and DON too? Woah, never saw that one coming, had me in stitches there
Keep up the good work.
Have been a pretty lousy reviewer lately, I'm caught up in work.
Anyway, finally manages to address the latest additions to this story.
Good job, I really like how this story is processing, hehe Mikey stealing beer and DON too? Woah, never saw that one coming, had me in stitches there
Keep up the good work.
8/30/2006 c32 10katielgk
Wow...it's taken me a while..But I've gotten everything read that you've got up so far! ^^ I really do like this story! It's amazing! Very detailed, and well-written. You are doing very well in keeping everyone in character. Keep it up! And I can't wait for the next update. Looking forward to it! ;) Have a good one.
10katielgkWow...it's taken me a while..But I've gotten everything read that you've got up so far! ^^ I really do like this story! It's amazing! Very detailed, and well-written. You are doing very well in keeping everyone in character. Keep it up! And I can't wait for the next update. Looking forward to it! ;) Have a good one.
8/28/2006 c32 203BubblyShell22
Awesome chapter, Cyn. You rock on this. Update soon. You are an awesome writer.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22Awesome chapter, Cyn. You rock on this. Update soon. You are an awesome writer.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/28/2006 c26 BubblyShell22
Great chapter, Cyn. I'll read the others later. I'm liking this a lot. As you can see, I'm back in school. I think I'll like my classes this semester. I'm taking Astronomy, and there is some math involved, but it isn't really bad. Plus, the professor is very good at helping out. Once again, great job. I'll catch up on the other chapters later. Talk to you later.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Great chapter, Cyn. I'll read the others later. I'm liking this a lot. As you can see, I'm back in school. I think I'll like my classes this semester. I'm taking Astronomy, and there is some math involved, but it isn't really bad. Plus, the professor is very good at helping out. Once again, great job. I'll catch up on the other chapters later. Talk to you later.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/27/2006 c32 10Aurora Musis Amica
Nice chapter! This is easily one of my absolute favourite stories, I get a warm fuzzy feeling every time I see an updated chapter. I like the voices you've got going for the brothers, and love the looming sense of doom that's spun into this chapter.
10Aurora Musis AmicaNice chapter! This is easily one of my absolute favourite stories, I get a warm fuzzy feeling every time I see an updated chapter. I like the voices you've got going for the brothers, and love the looming sense of doom that's spun into this chapter.