10/6/2006 c8 Arkeus
Good, but i am kinda annoyed with the fandom as it puts way too much smartness for slytherin. After all, most slytherin schemes are way too complicated to work flawlessly and all that.
Sorry if my rant bother you.
Good, but i am kinda annoyed with the fandom as it puts way too much smartness for slytherin. After all, most slytherin schemes are way too complicated to work flawlessly and all that.
Sorry if my rant bother you.
10/6/2006 c9 phoebe turner
amazing chapter! update son!
amazing chapter! update son!
10/5/2006 c9 40hanjuuluver
you worry too much. this chapter was totaly awsome, and with a plot line and an idea that's as unique as yours it's damn near impossible to go wrong. you did a wonderful job! can't wait to the next update.
you worry too much. this chapter was totaly awsome, and with a plot line and an idea that's as unique as yours it's damn near impossible to go wrong. you did a wonderful job! can't wait to the next update.
10/5/2006 c9 SR
really good...hope the next chapter comes soon :)
really good...hope the next chapter comes soon :)
10/5/2006 c8 SR
i think its great. but one thing that annoys me is the continuous snickering...is in every second paragraph, and im starting to think that Harry has turned evil and wants to go crazy killing people...but other than that its fine
i think its great. but one thing that annoys me is the continuous snickering...is in every second paragraph, and im starting to think that Harry has turned evil and wants to go crazy killing people...but other than that its fine
10/5/2006 c9 Fuzzball2000
I think it's Moony no e. Also I noticed in a previous chapter its sole not soul.
I think it's Moony no e. Also I noticed in a previous chapter its sole not soul.
10/5/2006 c9 32Hahukum Konn
Woot! :) I've always wondered just how Dumbledore could have not known that Sirius had no trial. Granted, even Chief Warlocks of the Wizengamot don't preside over EVERY trial ever held, but still, to have heard that Sirius Black was arrested and sent to prison straightaway should have raised eyebrows. Alas.
And yes, what IS Voldemort up to these days? :-P
Woot! :) I've always wondered just how Dumbledore could have not known that Sirius had no trial. Granted, even Chief Warlocks of the Wizengamot don't preside over EVERY trial ever held, but still, to have heard that Sirius Black was arrested and sent to prison straightaway should have raised eyebrows. Alas.
And yes, what IS Voldemort up to these days? :-P
10/5/2006 c1 Haldrian
I can’t remember if I’ve written before to tell you how much I enjoy your well-written, interesting story. Don’t look for any sophisticated critic here. :~) I just thought it a shame that such an good read didn’t have more reviews. And want to encourage you to keep writing.
Thanks so much for your work.
I can’t remember if I’ve written before to tell you how much I enjoy your well-written, interesting story. Don’t look for any sophisticated critic here. :~) I just thought it a shame that such an good read didn’t have more reviews. And want to encourage you to keep writing.
Thanks so much for your work.
10/5/2006 c9 7FrequencyQueen
Sounds pretty ominous that Voldywarts also got a do over. Harry better get things moving pretty quick or he'll have some real problems.
Sounds pretty ominous that Voldywarts also got a do over. Harry better get things moving pretty quick or he'll have some real problems.
10/5/2006 c9 anonyme
destroy the horocrux by harry
destroy the horocrux by harry
10/5/2006 c5 1helva2260
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. It's got some truly original variations on the theme, and the characterisation is nicely done. I especially like Harry (and Harry)'s interactions with the goblins. However, I have just a couple of minor issues with this chapter: I think when you are talking about Harry being the "soul heir of the Potter estate", you actually mean "the sole heir", meaning the only heir. I wouldn't have mentioned it if I thought it were a typo, but you use the word "soul" so many times that I started to flinch when it came up!
Also, (a minor personal bugbear) I've read so many stories with snakes that somehow know their own name, which I could understand since Harry can talk to them, except that somehow they're always human names... Tabitha, for instance is from the ancient aramaic language and means "little gazelle"! It's a really nice name, but I suppose I just can't see a snake naming themselves in a human language. Or if they did, maybe at least a name that has a meaning related to snakes? I don't know...
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. It's got some truly original variations on the theme, and the characterisation is nicely done. I especially like Harry (and Harry)'s interactions with the goblins. However, I have just a couple of minor issues with this chapter: I think when you are talking about Harry being the "soul heir of the Potter estate", you actually mean "the sole heir", meaning the only heir. I wouldn't have mentioned it if I thought it were a typo, but you use the word "soul" so many times that I started to flinch when it came up!
Also, (a minor personal bugbear) I've read so many stories with snakes that somehow know their own name, which I could understand since Harry can talk to them, except that somehow they're always human names... Tabitha, for instance is from the ancient aramaic language and means "little gazelle"! It's a really nice name, but I suppose I just can't see a snake naming themselves in a human language. Or if they did, maybe at least a name that has a meaning related to snakes? I don't know...
10/5/2006 c9 cokeboi
meh, most people can read it as long as all the letter in there liek tihs yuo know?
meh, most people can read it as long as all the letter in there liek tihs yuo know?