2/24/2008 c13 2rasengan86
Well both Harry AND Voldemort came back...that's isn't quite (interesting twist though). So while Harry has been wasting his time making his own life better, Voldemort has actually been doing something useful to his goals. Right out of the gate you decide to smack Harry in the face & let him know he can't rely on foreknowledge huh? I like it.
Obviously Voldemort is going to have to do something different to return to power (or at least use a different enemy for the ritual). And it looks like it's a race to the Horcruxes: Harry has the locket & most likely the diadem...while Voldemort has the ring, Nagini & probably the diary. Looks like it'll be a race to the cup, but that'll most likely go to Harry unless Voldemort can steal it first.
The missing piece of the puzzle is the fact that Harry is a horcrux himself I would imagine, this would probably explain how Voldemort got dragged along for the ride when Harry traveled through time.
Things seem to be starting off rather bad, Voldemort has forced everyone's hand...looks like it's time for some mutual full disclosure between Harry & Dumbledore.
Well both Harry AND Voldemort came back...that's isn't quite (interesting twist though). So while Harry has been wasting his time making his own life better, Voldemort has actually been doing something useful to his goals. Right out of the gate you decide to smack Harry in the face & let him know he can't rely on foreknowledge huh? I like it.
Obviously Voldemort is going to have to do something different to return to power (or at least use a different enemy for the ritual). And it looks like it's a race to the Horcruxes: Harry has the locket & most likely the diadem...while Voldemort has the ring, Nagini & probably the diary. Looks like it'll be a race to the cup, but that'll most likely go to Harry unless Voldemort can steal it first.
The missing piece of the puzzle is the fact that Harry is a horcrux himself I would imagine, this would probably explain how Voldemort got dragged along for the ride when Harry traveled through time.
Things seem to be starting off rather bad, Voldemort has forced everyone's hand...looks like it's time for some mutual full disclosure between Harry & Dumbledore.
2/24/2008 c13 1Long Live Nelly
I'm really glad there's another chapter, I'd started to forget this story, lol.
Interesting development on the Voldemort front.
LLN
I'm really glad there's another chapter, I'd started to forget this story, lol.
Interesting development on the Voldemort front.
LLN
2/24/2008 c13 32Hahukum Konn
Eek! I hope Remus is still alive.
It's also good to see that the battle is joined. Now for the race against time between Harry and Voldemort! :)
Eek! I hope Remus is still alive.
It's also good to see that the battle is joined. Now for the race against time between Harry and Voldemort! :)
1/13/2008 c12 15Baruma
I've seen this idea a couple times, but there is always a different explaination for how he goes back. It is very interesting. I think that maybe Dunbledore is allowing himself to be put off for a bit because of the maturity evident in Harry, otherwise I think he would run roughshod over him.
Sunni
I've seen this idea a couple times, but there is always a different explaination for how he goes back. It is very interesting. I think that maybe Dunbledore is allowing himself to be put off for a bit because of the maturity evident in Harry, otherwise I think he would run roughshod over him.
Sunni
1/9/2008 c12 2Ellyanah
Amazing story realy! I love your uptake to the whole Harry goes back to change stuff fic.
It is the first time I read one where Voldie is back too. And I especially like the conversations between old Harry and young Harry.
Ps: By this point in a review I normally ask the author to update soon. I your case I will give you a flourished escuse for not updating sooner after all you must be running out by now... LOL...
Just say that the Spirit of Voldemort has been possessing your computer and since you refuse to portrait him in a better light he kept erasing all that you wrote.
Pss: I hope you can update soon... Lol
Amazing story realy! I love your uptake to the whole Harry goes back to change stuff fic.
It is the first time I read one where Voldie is back too. And I especially like the conversations between old Harry and young Harry.
Ps: By this point in a review I normally ask the author to update soon. I your case I will give you a flourished escuse for not updating sooner after all you must be running out by now... LOL...
Just say that the Spirit of Voldemort has been possessing your computer and since you refuse to portrait him in a better light he kept erasing all that you wrote.
Pss: I hope you can update soon... Lol
1/6/2008 c6 10Airily
Well...that's a bummer. It'll certainly make things less predictable for Harry now, but perhaps the pressure may lead to some creative solutions... Suppose, I'll just have to wait and read.
Well...that's a bummer. It'll certainly make things less predictable for Harry now, but perhaps the pressure may lead to some creative solutions... Suppose, I'll just have to wait and read.
1/6/2008 c5 Airily
“It is like I have a tutor in the back of my head."
That would be nice wouldn't it? And one who is pleasant and knows you well too.
“It is like I have a tutor in the back of my head."
That would be nice wouldn't it? And one who is pleasant and knows you well too.
1/6/2008 c4 Airily
Still haven't figured out what House Harry(s) will be sorted in. Oh well, thought I'd stop to mention, though you probably already know by now, that this is interesting. ^o^
Still haven't figured out what House Harry(s) will be sorted in. Oh well, thought I'd stop to mention, though you probably already know by now, that this is interesting. ^o^
12/24/2007 c12 Alorkin
An intriguing go-back. The precept has been done several times with most being well written stories. Here, you have developed a Harry who is not the 'White Knight' Rowling invented. He is willing to use doubtful techniques to right the wrongs, but he is at heart dedicated to the light. That you had him sacrifice himself, intentionally in order to destroy his nemesis, is not unheard of. His second chance was rather pat, but the added twist of having Voldemort's spirit follow him gives this story some spice. It's really a race now, with the two of them seeking the elusive goal of Voldemort's immortality.
Allowinng his inner Slytherin to run free, gives him some more depth. I only wish JKR had given Harry such a personality. I think it was only in OotP when Harry became human, and then in six, he got stupid again. *Siigh!*
The trial was well done, with Fudgey doing his utmost to cover his own worthless arse. I hope he gets hemherroids! Harry's intervention was probably the only thing to prevent Sirius from being sent back to Azkaban. It appears Dumbledore only took action after Harry's line of questioning introduced the doubt factor.
I have placed this on my 'alerts' list and hope to read more very soon. Alorkin
An intriguing go-back. The precept has been done several times with most being well written stories. Here, you have developed a Harry who is not the 'White Knight' Rowling invented. He is willing to use doubtful techniques to right the wrongs, but he is at heart dedicated to the light. That you had him sacrifice himself, intentionally in order to destroy his nemesis, is not unheard of. His second chance was rather pat, but the added twist of having Voldemort's spirit follow him gives this story some spice. It's really a race now, with the two of them seeking the elusive goal of Voldemort's immortality.
Allowinng his inner Slytherin to run free, gives him some more depth. I only wish JKR had given Harry such a personality. I think it was only in OotP when Harry became human, and then in six, he got stupid again. *Siigh!*
The trial was well done, with Fudgey doing his utmost to cover his own worthless arse. I hope he gets hemherroids! Harry's intervention was probably the only thing to prevent Sirius from being sent back to Azkaban. It appears Dumbledore only took action after Harry's line of questioning introduced the doubt factor.
I have placed this on my 'alerts' list and hope to read more very soon. Alorkin
12/18/2007 c1 3truest-of-true-loves
well, everyone does use the same story line, but yours is intriguing, i like the way you wirte, its a little different form most others. though, i feel like it would have been better if you went inot more detail over things like his feelings. but i love the way you explained the souls merging into one and the fates.
well, everyone does use the same story line, but yours is intriguing, i like the way you wirte, its a little different form most others. though, i feel like it would have been better if you went inot more detail over things like his feelings. but i love the way you explained the souls merging into one and the fates.