10/23/2007 c12 PSTurner
Harry just can not catch a break can he? Good trial. I so look forward to see what happens next. So update soon.
Pam
Harry just can not catch a break can he? Good trial. I so look forward to see what happens next. So update soon.
Pam
10/23/2007 c12 10Wonderbee31
Very good, and just makes me question the logic of the wizarding world, especially since that Veritaserum could have cleared Sirius right off the bat.
Very good, and just makes me question the logic of the wizarding world, especially since that Veritaserum could have cleared Sirius right off the bat.
10/23/2007 c12 32Hahukum Konn
Woot, the battle is joined :) How fast can Harry nail the Horcruxes and keep Voldemort from nicking the Hallows? (Assuming you use TDH canon in your fic)
*is anxious*
Woot, the battle is joined :) How fast can Harry nail the Horcruxes and keep Voldemort from nicking the Hallows? (Assuming you use TDH canon in your fic)
*is anxious*
10/22/2007 c11 1zafaran
Oh, please, please have Harry realize something is wrong in time to save Severus. Pretty please? After reading in DH just what happened with his life, I would hope he has a better chance in this life. I wouldn't mind saving Draco, too, since he's young enough to be trained up as a member of Harry's cadre of fighters instead of losing him to Voldemort. I got a kick out of watching Dumbledore put Fudge in his place. Well done. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Oh, please, please have Harry realize something is wrong in time to save Severus. Pretty please? After reading in DH just what happened with his life, I would hope he has a better chance in this life. I wouldn't mind saving Draco, too, since he's young enough to be trained up as a member of Harry's cadre of fighters instead of losing him to Voldemort. I got a kick out of watching Dumbledore put Fudge in his place. Well done. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
10/22/2007 c4 zafaran
I'm all for saving Severus. He's the most interesting character in the series, and finding out what happened to him is the only reason I got DH. You might want to look at some articles Whitehound {she has an ffnet profile} has written on her web site where she discusses where Spinner's End is, and that Severus's speech patterns and some of his snarky-ness come from being raised in the area-if I remember correctly she puts it in Yorkshire. There's no denying that he *is* more than a bit of a git, but he's also got extenuating circumstances driving him into being the git. I'm a bit more ambivalent about Draco, but if he was gotten to early enough he might still be an arse, but potentially *ours*, not his father's and Voldemort's. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
I'm all for saving Severus. He's the most interesting character in the series, and finding out what happened to him is the only reason I got DH. You might want to look at some articles Whitehound {she has an ffnet profile} has written on her web site where she discusses where Spinner's End is, and that Severus's speech patterns and some of his snarky-ness come from being raised in the area-if I remember correctly she puts it in Yorkshire. There's no denying that he *is* more than a bit of a git, but he's also got extenuating circumstances driving him into being the git. I'm a bit more ambivalent about Draco, but if he was gotten to early enough he might still be an arse, but potentially *ours*, not his father's and Voldemort's. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
10/10/2007 c11 5hittocerebattosai
*pokes Harry-Hybrid* Fuun...~ *grins* Thank you for the update! ^^ *glee*
*pokes Harry-Hybrid* Fuun...~ *grins* Thank you for the update! ^^ *glee*
9/21/2007 c11 phoebe turner
great chapter!
great chapter!
9/15/2007 c11 5The Animaniac Dude
DUDE! SLAP A McDONALD'S LOGO ON THIS STORY, 'CAUSE I'M LOVIN' IT! this is quite the interesting twist on the average 'harry-travels-back-in-time-to-set-things-right' story. it's well written, (apart from a few spelling and grammer errors, but hey! nothing spell-check can't fix, right? :P) has an engaging plot, (I think that having an older soul of ou that's from the future would be DA BOMB! XD) the characters's personalities and quirks are neither good, nor evil, but shades of grey, (except for lord moldy-wart, but everybody hates him already. XD i also like how you did aunt petunia in this story, interesting twist on her!) and the interactions between them are well thought out. (love the harry/old harry talks, those are so funny! LOL) overall, i give this fic a rating of... 10 out of 5 stars. i am SO adding this to my faves. UPDATE SOON OR I WILL SEND THE KILLER JACKRABBITS AFTER YOU! I AM NOT KIDDING!
DUDE! SLAP A McDONALD'S LOGO ON THIS STORY, 'CAUSE I'M LOVIN' IT! this is quite the interesting twist on the average 'harry-travels-back-in-time-to-set-things-right' story. it's well written, (apart from a few spelling and grammer errors, but hey! nothing spell-check can't fix, right? :P) has an engaging plot, (I think that having an older soul of ou that's from the future would be DA BOMB! XD) the characters's personalities and quirks are neither good, nor evil, but shades of grey, (except for lord moldy-wart, but everybody hates him already. XD i also like how you did aunt petunia in this story, interesting twist on her!) and the interactions between them are well thought out. (love the harry/old harry talks, those are so funny! LOL) overall, i give this fic a rating of... 10 out of 5 stars. i am SO adding this to my faves. UPDATE SOON OR I WILL SEND THE KILLER JACKRABBITS AFTER YOU! I AM NOT KIDDING!
9/15/2007 c11 40hanjuuluver
I can't complain about how long you took to update because so far I'm even worse than you! updating fics and keeping up with everything else outside of fanfiction tends to be a much larger task than people realise. not to menition evil writers block... gah!
But I like the chapter! and yay for Harry finally starting to get parinoid and suspisious! XD
I can't complain about how long you took to update because so far I'm even worse than you! updating fics and keeping up with everything else outside of fanfiction tends to be a much larger task than people realise. not to menition evil writers block... gah!
But I like the chapter! and yay for Harry finally starting to get parinoid and suspisious! XD
9/14/2007 c4 Luc
Is this going to follow the books all the way? I mean, this just isn't very exciting like this.
Is this going to follow the books all the way? I mean, this just isn't very exciting like this.