for No One Heard Him3/16/2011 c12 
3paniq in love
O my gosh that was awesome
I absolutely loved the whole thing
the beginimg hooked me n the left eye
the baby everything u did it so great
All have to read more of ur storys!
3paniq in loveO my gosh that was awesome
I absolutely loved the whole thing
the beginimg hooked me n the left eye
the baby everything u did it so great
All have to read more of ur storys!
10/18/2007 c12 28Mon Petit Pierrot
OMG that is so sad...
Sorry about not reviewing in so long, but this is great. There's a sequel right?
28Mon Petit PierrotOMG that is so sad...
Sorry about not reviewing in so long, but this is great. There's a sequel right?
9/20/2007 c12 8Zarroc
oh wow,
thats harsh,
poor Hermione,
whats going to happen next?
update soon please
-Zarroc-
8Zarrocoh wow,
thats harsh,
poor Hermione,
whats going to happen next?
update soon please
-Zarroc-
9/2/2007 c12 jenniemalfoy
please don't tell me this is the last chapter... please post the next chapter as soon as possible... it's a great story...
please don't tell me this is the last chapter... please post the next chapter as soon as possible... it's a great story...
8/21/2007 c12 ChasingStarlight
love the way you wrote out the ending in the beginning. love the left eye symbolism. this is such a good, bitter story.
love the way you wrote out the ending in the beginning. love the left eye symbolism. this is such a good, bitter story.
8/20/2007 c12 10blueatom
Woah. This fic is way too rushed. I read lots of stories with sad endings but i must say yours is the first one that didn't flow and was actually very pointless. There's not really much "storyness" to this. Its just a lot of random dialogue and no description/detail at all. The only good thing I liked about this fic was that the whole "baby born and then dying" plot was good but the whole "Prove your love to me" bit was just very repeatable. This seems very harsh but well you asked for reviews and I gave you one.
10blueatomWoah. This fic is way too rushed. I read lots of stories with sad endings but i must say yours is the first one that didn't flow and was actually very pointless. There's not really much "storyness" to this. Its just a lot of random dialogue and no description/detail at all. The only good thing I liked about this fic was that the whole "baby born and then dying" plot was good but the whole "Prove your love to me" bit was just very repeatable. This seems very harsh but well you asked for reviews and I gave you one.
8/19/2007 c12 7bluebaby3296
WA..WTF WAS THE POINT OF DOIN THE STORY THEN IF U WERENT HAVIN HIM SAVE HER...THIS SUCKS...I READ IT FOR NOTHIN
7bluebaby3296WA..WTF WAS THE POINT OF DOIN THE STORY THEN IF U WERENT HAVIN HIM SAVE HER...THIS SUCKS...I READ IT FOR NOTHIN
8/19/2007 c11 maria
what happens next
what happens next
8/17/2007 c11 xXGreenGirlXx
OH MY GOD! This is one of the saddest, most touching Harry Potter fanfics ever! I can't wait until the next chapter.
I think Harry should be a little more involved since Hermione is his best friend.
OH MY GOD! This is one of the saddest, most touching Harry Potter fanfics ever! I can't wait until the next chapter.
I think Harry should be a little more involved since Hermione is his best friend.
8/16/2007 c10 bluebaby3296
OMG...AWESOME...LOVED THE SCENE WEN SHE JUMPED IN HIS ARMS N PPLE CLAPPED...AWESOME...BUT SAD BBY DIED...U MUST UPDATE ASAP
OMG...AWESOME...LOVED THE SCENE WEN SHE JUMPED IN HIS ARMS N PPLE CLAPPED...AWESOME...BUT SAD BBY DIED...U MUST UPDATE ASAP
8/16/2007 c10 Exic
This is the best story I've read so far in fanfic, emotionally pulling you in with situations that could potentially happen to a teenage girl, but having the whole story written in the magical world J.K. Rowling created just added to the emotional greatness in the story.I hate to correct this story, but your grammar and spelling have flaws.
~Exic~
This is the best story I've read so far in fanfic, emotionally pulling you in with situations that could potentially happen to a teenage girl, but having the whole story written in the magical world J.K. Rowling created just added to the emotional greatness in the story.I hate to correct this story, but your grammar and spelling have flaws.
~Exic~
8/14/2007 c9 8Zarroc
good chap,
so, what will Hermione and Draco do?
will they get back together, and what about Ron?
-Zarroc- :)
8Zarrocgood chap,
so, what will Hermione and Draco do?
will they get back together, and what about Ron?
-Zarroc- :)
8/13/2007 c1 Tight lyka Tiger
Hermione isn't the kind of person to want diamonds and silk pajamas for her birthday. She's a little more thoughtful than that.
Honestly, I'm appalled.
Your work is all (bad) dialogue and... well, nothing else. Your scenes don't make sense because of it...
You are not Tight like a Tiger.
Hermione isn't the kind of person to want diamonds and silk pajamas for her birthday. She's a little more thoughtful than that.
Honestly, I'm appalled.
Your work is all (bad) dialogue and... well, nothing else. Your scenes don't make sense because of it...
You are not Tight like a Tiger.