4/20/2006 c3 23Dark Man's Girl
Awesome! Another good story! Keep going. On with the next chapter! please. (mustnt forget our manners)
Awesome! Another good story! Keep going. On with the next chapter! please. (mustnt forget our manners)
4/15/2006 c3 jwoods471
Grat chapter. I like the title. I'm still curious about the old lady but I guess I'll find out once you reveal it. Great job.
Grat chapter. I like the title. I'm still curious about the old lady but I guess I'll find out once you reveal it. Great job.
4/15/2006 c3 29nehimasgift
aww that was a great chapter! ^_^ lol throwing jellybeans so ron can catch them... sounds like him alright what with how he gets to eat them :D hehe i hope you update again :)
aww that was a great chapter! ^_^ lol throwing jellybeans so ron can catch them... sounds like him alright what with how he gets to eat them :D hehe i hope you update again :)
4/15/2006 c3 22The Almighty Cheez It
Oh, I liked this chapter a LOT! There was a lot of fun in it; the whole bean-fight was very original, funny, and cute. I love the friendship bond between the Trio in this story - usually in fanfics someone is mad at someone else. Also, just adding the bit of mystery at the end is brilliant! Fantastic job!
Oh, I liked this chapter a LOT! There was a lot of fun in it; the whole bean-fight was very original, funny, and cute. I love the friendship bond between the Trio in this story - usually in fanfics someone is mad at someone else. Also, just adding the bit of mystery at the end is brilliant! Fantastic job!
4/15/2006 c3 LunaCatt
Great chapter... I think it was your best one yet! Keep it up! I loved the idea with the beans... I want to try that! But with normal jellybeans, of course.
Great chapter... I think it was your best one yet! Keep it up! I loved the idea with the beans... I want to try that! But with normal jellybeans, of course.
4/15/2006 c3 Big Head 2
Azer:
Wow! This a good chapter. Lots of detail. I like the part where Harry, Ron and Hermione play with the Beartie Bot's Every Flavor Beans. That was funny. I would suggest you make chapter four about either the fist week at Hogwarts.
Then maybe you could have Hermione receive a letter from Tom Riddle.
Azer:
Wow! This a good chapter. Lots of detail. I like the part where Harry, Ron and Hermione play with the Beartie Bot's Every Flavor Beans. That was funny. I would suggest you make chapter four about either the fist week at Hogwarts.
Then maybe you could have Hermione receive a letter from Tom Riddle.
3/31/2006 c2 jwoods471
Poor Hermione. I'm happy that Ron and Harry are there for her. Please update soon. Oh and one thing what is with the lady that helped her through the barrier. I don't know what it is about her but something just seemed strange.
Poor Hermione. I'm happy that Ron and Harry are there for her. Please update soon. Oh and one thing what is with the lady that helped her through the barrier. I don't know what it is about her but something just seemed strange.
3/25/2006 c2 LunaCatt
Good story so far! I'm wondering what the "weird pairing" will be... your story's pretty good, it just looks like it could use a little more editing; sometimes it seems like you have got almost the right word but not quite. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Good story so far! I'm wondering what the "weird pairing" will be... your story's pretty good, it just looks like it could use a little more editing; sometimes it seems like you have got almost the right word but not quite. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
3/25/2006 c1 1Harry Potter Fan 2006
I think this first chapter is pretty good.
My opinion is that you need to add a little more detail in your later chapters.
I think this first chapter is pretty good.
My opinion is that you need to add a little more detail in your later chapters.