1/17/2006 c3 scarletwitch0
Hmm...I fell pregnant? I feel pregnant? Yes, you do feel pregnant (been there, done that) but "I got pregnant" or "I became pregnant" or even "I was pregnant" would be better syntax. Nevertheless, looking foward to more.

1/13/2006 c2 20shiny silver grl
I have a bit of a hard time believing that she literally sat there crying in his arms for six hours (might be more believable if she'd cried herself to sleep, or something, and then woke UP after six hours), but otherwise I'm enjoying the fic and look forward to reading more :)

-sil

1/5/2006 c2 114Ellie 5192
This is a good foundation for a story. Please continue with it!

1/5/2006 c2 1Trickster's Queen of War
love it! thats always how it works lol!

1/5/2006 c2 lonely-star83
nice ;) hope more is coming soon, i'm curious to read your version of the talk ;)

1/5/2006 c2 axania chic
i thought i wasn't gunna like this story but i do it's well written and looks like its gunna go somewhere please continue

axy

1/4/2006 c1 6pinkholyone
FANTASTIC so far! really really good! well written and i love it! update quickly! and dont keep us waiting! lol

1/4/2006 c1 6midnightair
ohh this was really good. please write more soon!