for Lost Treasures1/9/2006 c3 
9Natters
“You dance?” Jack asked with a grin, picturing the stoic man sitting next to him twirling around like a top. smirk.
poor melody. more please
9Natters“You dance?” Jack asked with a grin, picturing the stoic man sitting next to him twirling around like a top. smirk.
poor melody. more please
1/9/2006 c2 Natters
snicker. i loved the macgyver ref. i love the way melody uses the more formal speech when talking the hammond
snicker. i loved the macgyver ref. i love the way melody uses the more formal speech when talking the hammond
1/9/2006 c1 Natters
Jack called, casually lowering the newbie’s weapon for him. lol. i love the way jack is clicking the pen throughout the briefing
Jack called, casually lowering the newbie’s weapon for him. lol. i love the way jack is clicking the pen throughout the briefing
1/9/2006 c1 27SG-Fan
Great beginning!
I know, rather late but I've hardly been near a computer these past few days.
27SG-FanGreat beginning!
I know, rather late but I've hardly been near a computer these past few days.
1/8/2006 c3 mishellina
very interesting story - please continue. If you need a "cover story" for Melody's disappearance the kidnapping one would work. Unfortunately children get kidnapped and can be with their kidnappers for years. All it would take would be for the kidnapper to tell her a lie about her parents. hope this helps. Again - please update soon.
very interesting story - please continue. If you need a "cover story" for Melody's disappearance the kidnapping one would work. Unfortunately children get kidnapped and can be with their kidnappers for years. All it would take would be for the kidnapper to tell her a lie about her parents. hope this helps. Again - please update soon.