for Doing it all again11/7/2019 c6 agentplanty1
I liked the summary more than the story, like all three of them in a do over could be powerful, but with his wealth and time magic it was good to end it where you did.
I liked the summary more than the story, like all three of them in a do over could be powerful, but with his wealth and time magic it was good to end it where you did.
3/3/2019 c6 
8HarryPotterFangirl85
Well, this was an interesting concept, but it sucked that the last chapter was basically a duplicate of the previous chapter with only a little extra. I would have been more interested in the story after the actual time travel, rather than the sarcastic synopsis that was actually written.
8HarryPotterFangirl85Well, this was an interesting concept, but it sucked that the last chapter was basically a duplicate of the previous chapter with only a little extra. I would have been more interested in the story after the actual time travel, rather than the sarcastic synopsis that was actually written.
12/14/2015 c6 LtsHrIt4ThBoyz
Not too bad and it didn't come across as too terribly infantile. I liked it. Now, I'm going to go see if you ever followed up on it.
Thanks!
MelJ
Not too bad and it didn't come across as too terribly infantile. I liked it. Now, I'm going to go see if you ever followed up on it.
Thanks!
MelJ
7/20/2015 c4 1lilyjen09
I have to say this sounded like an interesting story, but there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors that make it jarring to read.
1lilyjen09I have to say this sounded like an interesting story, but there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors that make it jarring to read.
5/6/2015 c1 1zuphie
It reminds me a bit of J.D. Salinger's style, actually.
I also really like the idea of these three going back in time. I don't think I've ever seen that before. And with the style you chose, the ending sentence works really well.
1zuphieIt reminds me a bit of J.D. Salinger's style, actually.
I also really like the idea of these three going back in time. I don't think I've ever seen that before. And with the style you chose, the ending sentence works really well.
4/29/2013 c6 ConfusedLove
What happens next
What happens next
9/26/2012 c6 Kyotaroro
The ending? so pro, man! Just telling 'bout traveling not what happens. Deserves a pat on the back for that one.
The ending? so pro, man! Just telling 'bout traveling not what happens. Deserves a pat on the back for that one.