5/22/2008 c6 9Darklight
Looking forward to a new chapter, liked the idea of Petunia en Harry together against Vernon.
But chapter 6 is the same as chapter 5?
Looking forward to a new chapter, liked the idea of Petunia en Harry together against Vernon.
But chapter 6 is the same as chapter 5?
5/22/2008 c6 lmill123
Your story is so different from the ones I have read. I am looking forward to what happens to all three of them now. Can hardly wait to see who the people are that found them and what Petunia's plan is.
Your story is so different from the ones I have read. I am looking forward to what happens to all three of them now. Can hardly wait to see who the people are that found them and what Petunia's plan is.
4/27/2008 c5 11Prophetess Of Hearts
You better be planning to continue this story. you stopped it just when it was getting interesting.
You better be planning to continue this story. you stopped it just when it was getting interesting.
2/26/2008 c5 24Beth Weasley
Hmm. It would be interesting to see Petunia's rteaction to that plan, and also what happens once they've gone back. Your layout, as far as paragraph lengths and just the first person narrative style (I did this, she said to me, etc.) gets a little difficult to follow at times, but it's something I'd be willing to put up with for a good plot, which this shows promise of being! Can't wait for more!
Hmm. It would be interesting to see Petunia's rteaction to that plan, and also what happens once they've gone back. Your layout, as far as paragraph lengths and just the first person narrative style (I did this, she said to me, etc.) gets a little difficult to follow at times, but it's something I'd be willing to put up with for a good plot, which this shows promise of being! Can't wait for more!
11/6/2007 c5 7Vuurvlieg
Cool!
I've never read a story in that tone before. Really unique especially for a timetravel story. Are u continueing anytime soon? please?
Cool!
I've never read a story in that tone before. Really unique especially for a timetravel story. Are u continueing anytime soon? please?
6/21/2007 c5 Raven Darkov
That was interesting. I cant wait to read more. The first few chapters were a little confusing, having him summerize his life, I have yet to read a story that goes into that much detail about his life. The whole meeting Magic and Time thing was kinda cool, I wonder if he is going to meet someone else.
That was interesting. I cant wait to read more. The first few chapters were a little confusing, having him summerize his life, I have yet to read a story that goes into that much detail about his life. The whole meeting Magic and Time thing was kinda cool, I wonder if he is going to meet someone else.
2/11/2007 c5 Creepy Draken
Hey, doll. So... when were you planning on updating this again? Cause I've been sitting here waiting for it for like, ages, and you still haven't done it. Please, update!
Hey, doll. So... when were you planning on updating this again? Cause I've been sitting here waiting for it for like, ages, and you still haven't done it. Please, update!
1/15/2007 c5 A-man
LOVED IT SOO FAR...but it seems like it was a just a little plott bunny...soo far...you updated 4 times in 2 days and then just stopped...BO
LOVED IT SOO FAR...but it seems like it was a just a little plott bunny...soo far...you updated 4 times in 2 days and then just stopped...BO
1/15/2007 c1 A-man
YOUR BEGINNING GOT ME SOO EXCITED MAN!...sounds like this is just the type of sarcasitc and sardonic story I have been looking for.
YOUR BEGINNING GOT ME SOO EXCITED MAN!...sounds like this is just the type of sarcasitc and sardonic story I have been looking for.