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3/23/2006 c5 3Aryes
Really nice. Very originally written. Update soon, please!
3/10/2006 c2 Myrddin Ambrosius
'See if they’d just stayed of the raider of Voldermort...'

That should be 'See, if they'd just stayed OFF the RADAR of Voldemort...'

It's Avada KedAVra, not avada kedra.

Good story, a little fast paced, a few spelling errors, but not too bad.
3/5/2006 c2 Athania
I spotted 4 mistakes.

1) 'their was an evil' should be 'there was an evil'

2) Sirius spent 12 years in Azkaban, not 11

3) 'Pivett Drive' should be 'Privet Drive'

4) McGonagall, not Mcgonagal

Other than those, awesome! Update soon!
2/25/2006 c5 8MerlinGodricRowenaHelga
brilliant story so far cant wait for an update
2/20/2006 c5 PainfullyPassive
I think this story is amazing!I've never read a story like this before,I can't wait to read your next update!
2/10/2006 c5 6Caliko
Hey, I added this to my C2. The first couple chapters where drawn out, but chapter 5 was excellent. you could probably compress 1-4 into one chapter, though, which would make the story flow a bit better.

Looking forward to the next installment, (chapter 5 was a decent length, btw) ~Caliko
2/10/2006 c5 11selenepotter
more please!
2/5/2006 c5 23Dags-Calhoun
All that is real cool. You should keep goin' with this.
1/28/2006 c1 Yost10
its a really good story i like how its harrys point of veiw only
1/21/2006 c5 4CBeMe
Facinating, I am looking forward to how you develop this.

CBeMe
1/18/2006 c5 jkarr
how are you going to help harry's aunt and cousin. and where are you going to hide them
1/9/2006 c4 Cocoa Girl
Can you tell us why Harry wants to go back in time? If the three of them are going to go back in time then how will that help his Aunt Petunia? She will still have the memories of what she has been thougth and was done to her and Harry. Now if it was only Harry going back he would have the memories of what happened to his Aunt but she wouldn't and could try to make sure Vernon got reported to the police. And they never had to see him ever again. Just a thought. K
1/6/2006 c5 Shinigami
So what now? PLS have Harry be in ANOTHER house-NOT Slyherin or Gryffindor! He never will SURVIVE Slyherin! Besides it has already been done too many times! PLS have Padfoot and MOONY be BOTH on his side!
1/6/2006 c5 Cocoa Girl
I have enjoyed what I've read so far. And can't wait for the next chapter. How does Dudley get involved with Harry and Petunia? I hope that before they do go back they can use this as a chance to take all there frustrations out on Vernon after all with them going back in time they won't get in trouble for it. And when they do go back Harry and Petunia go to the police and have Vernon up on charges. Or are the 3 of them just going to leave Harry can get enough money from his vault to buy a new house. And for them to live comfortably with out having to worry about money, food and getting a job. Also I am wondering how far back Harry will be taking all three of them? Till he is eleven? Or earlier so that Harry can have a few years to study advance magic before he has to go to Hogwarts? And I am all for Harry making the three ex-friends or maybe even just using them and manipulating them like Dumbledore did Harry. Hell does Harry even have to go to Hogwarts? Why not have Harry go to another school, bet that would piss Dumbledore off. And Is Harry going to be sorted into Slytherin or Ravenclaw? Cause I can’t see him wanting to be placed in Gryffindor.
1/6/2006 c5 4Tamsin1013
Very well written and interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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