1/6/2006 c5 lena babyyyyy
hey I like your story but I think the chapters could be longer. cant wait for an update
hey I like your story but I think the chapters could be longer. cant wait for an update
1/6/2006 c5 2neosildrake
well, after starting out slow it gets better and better. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
well, after starting out slow it gets better and better. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
1/6/2006 c5 Heather
Wicked, can not wait for more. Love the story and agree that Ron, Hemonie, and Ginny need to be hurt real bad. Thank you.
Wicked, can not wait for more. Love the story and agree that Ron, Hemonie, and Ginny need to be hurt real bad. Thank you.
1/6/2006 c1 4Black's Phoenix
This will be fun. Take the time to space out the sentces some more if you don't mind. It would just make it easier to read.
This will be fun. Take the time to space out the sentces some more if you don't mind. It would just make it easier to read.
1/6/2006 c5 9Darklight
Chapter rocksand Harry sounds a lot sanner.
Potter is a pratt for his moms trunk si funny.
keep the parts coming can't wait to see finaly how Harry is going to change things the second time around.
So any possibilities of Dudley or Petunia having magical powers or them being locked up.
Get more out soon.
Chapter rocksand Harry sounds a lot sanner.
Potter is a pratt for his moms trunk si funny.
keep the parts coming can't wait to see finaly how Harry is going to change things the second time around.
So any possibilities of Dudley or Petunia having magical powers or them being locked up.
Get more out soon.
1/6/2006 c1 Amanda
I was pretty discouraged by the first paragraph/chapter. Its length and several grammar errors kept me from continuing, although the plot looked interesting. I think this story could be promising, but I would suggest a beta-reader.
I was pretty discouraged by the first paragraph/chapter. Its length and several grammar errors kept me from continuing, although the plot looked interesting. I think this story could be promising, but I would suggest a beta-reader.
1/5/2006 c2 Heather
Sounds very good so far. Would like to hear why Harry chose to go back with his aunt and Dudley. Have gthey learned from their mistakes and want to change things? It sounds like Harry finally figured out that Ron and hermonie like the boy who lived and not Harry. Looking forward to reading more. thank you
Sounds very good so far. Would like to hear why Harry chose to go back with his aunt and Dudley. Have gthey learned from their mistakes and want to change things? It sounds like Harry finally figured out that Ron and hermonie like the boy who lived and not Harry. Looking forward to reading more. thank you
1/5/2006 c1 deb
aunt cousin and harry? well dudly loose the weight and his aunt start over and harry wel get yourself sorted into Slytherin mate!
aunt cousin and harry? well dudly loose the weight and his aunt start over and harry wel get yourself sorted into Slytherin mate!
1/5/2006 c1 Darklight
If you g et Harry into Slytherine and take the house away from Voldie, I'm reading it.
Petunia and Dudley, reliving 7 years, that one i interesting, see if they would change things or do everyting the same again.
Get more chapters out soon
If you g et Harry into Slytherine and take the house away from Voldie, I'm reading it.
Petunia and Dudley, reliving 7 years, that one i interesting, see if they would change things or do everyting the same again.
Get more chapters out soon