for Sailor Universe!7/5/2007 c22 James Birdsong
Don't give up though
Don't give up though
7/5/2007 c20 James Birdsong
Short. Efficent maybe. Not great though. Keep trying to do your best.
Short. Efficent maybe. Not great though. Keep trying to do your best.
7/5/2007 c19 James Birdsong
Not horrible. Not dreadful. You've done worse. You can improve.
Not horrible. Not dreadful. You've done worse. You can improve.
7/5/2007 c16 James Birdsong
.. you could do better I hope
.. you could do better I hope
7/5/2007 c14 James Birdsong
Hey pretty neat even if it absurd maybe. More crossover stuff? Whatever.
Hey pretty neat even if it absurd maybe. More crossover stuff? Whatever.
7/5/2007 c13 James Birdsong
Nice. Could be better but nice perhaps.
Nice. Could be better but nice perhaps.
7/5/2007 c12 James Birdsong
You mean got not god. Otherwise nice job.
You mean got not god. Otherwise nice job.
7/5/2007 c11 James Birdsong
Um yay or such. Continue writeing. Get better please.
But at least you have good spelling and maybe grammer.
I am happy over those at least. Good job there for sure.
Um yay or such. Continue writeing. Get better please.
But at least you have good spelling and maybe grammer.
I am happy over those at least. Good job there for sure.
7/5/2007 c10 James Birdsong
Not terrible. Not terrible in my opnion.
Not terrible. Not terrible in my opnion.
7/5/2007 c9 James Birdsong
You could do well. You could. Hopefully you doing well.
You could do well. You could. Hopefully you doing well.
7/5/2007 c8 James Birdsong
Nicer than some of your other chapters
Nicer than some of your other chapters
7/5/2007 c7 James Birdsong
Could be good. Could be better than it is now maybe.
Don't know. Nice writeing. Never give up in any case.
Could be good. Could be better than it is now maybe.
Don't know. Nice writeing. Never give up in any case.
7/5/2007 c6 James Birdsong
Oh quite fine even if I don't understand squat
Oh quite fine even if I don't understand squat
7/5/2007 c5 James Birdsong
Nope don't understand what's going on. Oh well. Is she a Mary Sue?
Nope don't understand what's going on. Oh well. Is she a Mary Sue?
7/5/2007 c3 James Birdsong
Fine whatever. If you say so. This could be good but it doesn't seem so.
Fine whatever. If you say so. This could be good but it doesn't seem so.