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5/14/2007 c1 17JeanneZ84
This was a very short story I read before.

Im not sure Mark can really trust Kiki cause she was dishonest with him before and left him for someone else and then married that person.

I really can't see Mark the father of her child.

This was a short nice story inspite of Kiki in it.

JeanneZ84
1/7/2006 c1 117cheride
Girl, you're killin' me! I already told you that _I_ believe someone else was his one and only, but, okay, I can see his fascination with Kiki. But now they're gonna be parents? Dang. And personally, I'm with LML; if the kid doesn't insist on some kind of paternity test, he's just plain bonkers!

But, cute story, and a unique twist on the starter. Thanks for posting.
1/6/2006 c1 221L.M.Lewis
Oh, dear, will he NEVER learn from his mistakes?

But very cute-I like the closure use of the starter line.

(And, frankly, from what we saw of Kiki, I think he ought to ask for a bloodtest ;-)
1/6/2006 c1 26Kariesue
Boy am I glad it's just fan fic! Mark and Kiki, huh? But it did make me smile, and give me a little chuckle. That's the reason we do this, right. Nice start, can't wait for more.
1/6/2006 c1 165owlcroft
Congratulations on launching your first ship into the sea of fiction - very imaginative!

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